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Women's Point Of View
The lights are dim
And the music is slow
What happens next?
Only time will know
He walks up close
Putting a hand on my face
I am glad I chose to go
Into his place
His lips are soft…
Tender and hot
Leaving kisses down my neck
Hitting the right spot
His eyes go dark
And pleasure shows
It is night time…
And the curtains are closed…
His hands slow down
Tracing my hip,to my thigh
He applies just enough pressure
Making me feel high
I close my eyes
And savor his touch
When I realized something…
I love him very much
His tough hand…
It ignites my heart
I wonder if it has only begun,
If it's just the start
I crave him as a person
Not some useless toy
He teases me
And brings me lots of joy
His breath seems hot
And delicious to my skin
His eyes tell no lies
Along with where he has been
I yearn for more
As he continues down my leg
This tease should end
I don’t like to beg
God…his body is warm
And his hands are tough
He seems like the type
Who likes to play rough
The bed sheets are soft
And he smelled like corn
A true country boy
Happy to be born
His heart beat speeds up
Quickly,as he continues on
The smell of old spice lingered…
Even till dawn
My heart raced
As my breath grew fast
I savored the view
Hoping it would last
His face,
So gorgeous and fine
I admired his eyes
While finishing my wine
Each touch seemed better
More precious than the last
I see a future with him
What if I had passed?
To pass up a gem
As priceless as he may be
I wake up in the morning
And he is all I continue to see
I dream late at night
For yet another kiss
I have no freedom
But this boy is complete bliss
He may only be a boy
And this love might end
I really hope it doesn’t
He has my will to bend
Just yesterday
We were talking at lunch
My friend asked why he liked me.
I have a hunch…
Before I joke and express
He speaks as if I am great
He tells that I am a good listener
And even better bait
My face glows
As he expresses more
I was about to die.
He made my confidence soar
“I love her like a white rabbit hole”
He says as I stare
I wonder what he meant by that...
At least he is willing to care!
I ask later
And he decides to tell
His true feelings are unknown
Like staring into a well
He knows he feels love
And I do as well
It’s like he triggered something…
Perhaps a strong spell
His hands wake up temptation
Ready to excite
He brings me joy
And plenty of delight
His eyes tell more
As I continue to look
I see plenty of thoughts
Most have me shook
His structure
It seems solid and tall
He reaches the skies above
As I stay nice and small
To know a boy like him
One must be open and loud
Be confident and relaxed
Standing really proud
He may be quiet
Or conserved with his heart
You should be patient
And get to know him for a start
In return
He may treat you right
However you should be careful
Some have a really red light
He will tease you endlessly
And whisper in your ear
This may be his way
Of saying “Baby I am still here”
He will enjoy every minute
That is if he truly enjoys you
Watch the signs closely
Or your heart may turn blue
Gentlemen's Advice
This also goes to gentlemen
Not just ladies
Not every girl is interested
She could like that Mercedes
So be cautious
And see her true face
She could just be a jealous bitch
Who carries only her mace
If you truly love her
This is my advice
Take her somewhere
And turn off your device
Spend time with her
And see if she enjoys you
If she is nice to others
That is a big bonus too!
She should comfort you
And stay on your side
A true girlfriend believes you
Even after she has become your bride
Her words are pretty
And her voice is sweet
If she really loves you
She may make you a seat
To sit on your lap
And tease back without end
She may kiss you gently
And wait for you to press “Send”
Some obsess beside the phone
And others overthink till they hear “Ding!”
I suggest making the first move
After your conversation,she may even sing-
If she is interested
She will want to talk more
This is my advice,
You should open the door!
Most girls question
Whether they are likable or not
Try and give subtle compliments
On something she recently bought
Or perhaps her face
And her hair
Please,please try not to linger,
Or stare
You should talk over topics
That may interest her
See if she has any pets
That have a shit load of hair-
Find out her hobbies
Or her favorite food to try
Just run for it
If she likes to stay over-the-top high!
She should not worry about money
She should worry for you
You and her can figure out something
After what all you may go through
It is OK to look at her
And appreciate the view
Just know not to get caught
Or she will have a bone to pick with you
A tight skirt
Or being really short
Whoever you like,
You should know how to court
So start slow
And get to know her well
Don't break her heart
Or you will burn in hell
She probably has a friend
She keeps close by
Do not test her
She will do more than try...
She will have you six feet under
Or down in a ditch
Don't let her fool you
She can be a bitch...
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Oh, a primeira parte expressou muita paixão em poucas palavras, é impressionante a riqueza de imaginação que sua escrita nos fornece!!! Confesso que ri na parte do "Cheirava a milho" kkkkkkk me tirou uma gargalhada sincera. E amei os conselhos, foram muito bons e de coração :3. Um beijo para você, Alli, espero que esteja bem!!! > E quanto tempo <
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Thank you lovely! That was intended to make you laugh! I am doing well,however I do not have any recent inspirations besides love related poems.
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Oh, e você está apaixonada? Seria como escrever seus sentimentos em histórias (≡^∇^≡) mais lindo do que já é!!!
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Those endings of yours are surprising lol so never break a girl's heart, noted! Your texts, as always, are the best to capture attention and feel the tension in each word, your writing is full of passion, wow!
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Thanks lol. I really do try. it's challenging to make time to write in my spare time,when most of that spare time is either used to try and talk to my boy. Or with school work. I figure during school hours I should try and see him as much as possible. At the same time though,he inspires a lot in what I write.
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