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Sad Teens & Young Adult

Anna stood at the edge of a dilapidated dock, her gaze lost in the sluggish, dark river below. The night air was thick, almost suffocating, as if it too bore witness to the sorrow pooled around her like ink. She clutched a worn-out photograph in her hand, its edges frayed, its image fading yet branded into her memory. Two laughing children—a boy and a girl, with sunlight glinting in their eyes. Their smiles now felt like the ghost of a life she could barely remember.

"Fate is resourceful," she murmured to herself, words that had echoed in her mind on countless lonely nights. Her mother’s last words before vanishing. Words that had become both a comfort and a warning, like a lullaby masking a dirge. Since she was eight, since the night her mother left and her world unraveled, those words had haunted her. Her life had spiraled, swallowed by shadows and half-heard whispers, a perpetual hunt for answers that always, always led back to the river.

Behind her, footsteps disturbed the silence. She turned slowly, half-expecting a ghost. But it was Ethan, her brother, her only family, the boy who’d once held her hand in the dark and promised her things would be okay. She hadn’t seen him in years. His face was gaunt, hollowed, his eyes hollow as she remembered them the day they were separated in foster care. They’d both been broken pieces then; it seemed neither had found a way to mend.

“Anna.” His voice cracked as he said her name, the weight of it sagging between them. “I… I think I know what happened to Mom.”

Her heart gave a painful lurch as he held out a small, battered locket. She knew it immediately, the cheap gold-plated chain her mother had worn daily, as constant as her presence had once been. Anna reached for it with a trembling hand, and when she flipped it open, her breath caught. Inside, the tiny photographs of herself and Ethan were slashed, scratched out, leaving only their mother’s gaze staring back, hollow and almost lifelike.

“She left this for us,” Ethan continued, voice barely above a whisper. “In the house. I think it’s time we go back.”

The house. The decaying skeleton of their past. They had both avoided it for years, haunted by a dread that gnawed at their dreams. But tonight, something darker, more urgent, drove them forward. They needed to know. Or maybe the river demanded it.

The walk to the house felt endless, each step dragging up memories of laughter and fractured images of a childhood that felt both distant and hauntingly near. By the time they arrived, dawn was seeping across the horizon, painting the sky in fragile, fleeting colors. The house loomed like a forgotten tomb, its windows dark and cracked, gazing blankly upon them. The paint had peeled away in jagged lines, and vines crept up the sides, strangling the last breaths of life from the structure. It felt like a warning, a final barrier before they uncovered whatever truth lay buried within.

Inside, silence smothered them. Dust clung to the air in thick clouds, and shadows pooled in the corners. Memories crept back unbidden—faint echoes of their mother’s laughter, now twisted by years of silence. They moved room by room, each filled with relics of a family torn apart.

Ethan finally stopped in the living room, staring at a crooked picture frame on the wall. It was their mother’s face, gazing out with an expression that felt unknowable. He lifted it from its place, revealing a hidden compartment behind it. Inside was a journal, its leather cover cracked and smeared with something dark—something that looked unsettlingly like dried blood.

They opened it together, the leather brittle under their fingers. The entries were fragmented, but in one of the final pages, a message was scrawled in their mother’s slanted handwriting:

"They don’t know. They’ll never know. But if they ever come here, may the truth be merciful. Fate is resourceful."

Beneath it, barely legible, was a small note written hastily:

"No one leaves unscathed. Not even me."

“What does it mean?” Anna’s voice was barely audible, a breath in the consuming silence.

Before Ethan could answer, the floor beneath them creaked, and then, without warning, it gave way entirely. She screamed as they tumbled down a steep chute concealed under the old floorboards, hurtling through pitch-black darkness before landing on cold, unyielding concrete. The impact jarred her bones, and she tasted blood on her lips. She struggled to sit up, disoriented, her heart racing wildly as her eyes adjusted to a faint, flickering light overhead.

Ethan lay beside her, groaning as he held his side, his face twisted in pain. They were trapped in a small, concrete chamber, its walls lined with photographs. Anna felt a chill run down her spine as she recognized the faces: children she had known, neighbors, classmates. Faces that had once been filled with life, now suspended in a frozen, silent scream. Each of them had vanished over the years, their fates left unanswered. And here they were, staring back at her.

In the center of the room, something lay discarded on the floor—a faded dress, caked in dirt and grime. The same dress their mother had worn that last night.

Ethan reached out, fingers brushing the fabric. A low rumble shuddered through the floor, and a shrill, piercing cry filled the chamber. The sound was unmistakable. Their mother’s voice, echoing from the walls, a sound that burrowed into her soul and froze her blood.

Anna glanced down, feeling something cold press into her palm. The locket. She hadn’t taken it from Ethan, yet there it was, its metal chilling her skin. She turned, desperate to find him, but he was gone. Alone, her breath came shallow and ragged as she turned frantically, calling his name. But only silence replied, save for the shifting of the walls around her.

As she looked up, the photographs began to shift and merge, forming a new image—a figure that looked painfully familiar. It was herself, standing in the chamber, clutching the locket, her face contorted with fear.

The voice came again, soft yet unyielding, drifting through the darkness.

"Fate is resourceful, Anna. But it isn’t kind."

The light above flickered, bathing the chamber in a sickly glow before plunging her into complete darkness. She staggered backward, heart thundering in her chest, but the walls closed in, seeming to press tighter around her, sealing her fate. Her fingers clenched the locket, her last connection to a family shattered beyond repair.

The darkness felt endless, suffocating. And as her vision began to blur, the final words etched into her mind were a cruel echo of her mother’s warning, twisting into a truth she couldn’t escape.

"No one leaves unscathed."

October 31, 2024 11:19

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Kiana M. Cauwels
03:52 Nov 05, 2024

I really enjoyed reading your story! The introduction hooked me. It was atmospheric—ominous tone already present—and your descriptions were evocative. I loved the details about the river, but wondered why she always went back to the river. Because it was within walking distance of the house? Or did something happen there? I also wondered why/how the house was still there and unoccupied. Did they inherit it even though they were put in foster care and didn’t use the house? I had initially thought whatever had happened was something specific...

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