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The sky was gray as ever over the abandoned town of Tide’s Reach. Quiante glanced up, squinting at the heavy clouds rolling in over the cliffs. The old town had been empty for over a century, left to be slowly devoured by time and the sea, but the lure of history brought her back every year to catalog whatever treasures the town’s slow decay might reveal.

She remembered her grandmother’s tales of Tide’s Reach, of a time when the townsfolk honored the sea. Yet, Quiante had always thought of those stories as bedtime myths — until now.

She trekked down the cobblestone streets, her boots crunching over patches of broken shells and seaweed strewn by the storm from the night before. She reached the heart of the town, where the remnants of an old market square lay open to the sky. There, towering on one side, was a crumbling stone statue of a man, or at least it looked like a man. The statue's eyes, almost too realistic, stared out across the square as if watching, waiting.

Quiante had read about this statue — locals called it "The Stonewatcher." Even in life, it had been an unsettling piece of work. The sculptor, long forgotten, had supposedly modeled it after a stranger who had appeared in town years before it was abandoned. The stranger had left after a single night, and the next morning, people reported strange sightings in the ocean. Unexplainable shapes were seen drifting under the waves, and at night, they heard whispers that only grew louder as time wore on. Shortly after, the town had emptied, its inhabitants vanishing without a word or trace.

With the memory of the tale lingering in her mind, Quiante set her camera down to take a picture of the Stonewatcher. She adjusted the focus and zoomed in, noting how lifelike its cracked face appeared through her lens. She thought she saw faint marks on its skin, like scales or rough patches along its cheeks. But no matter how she adjusted the settings, the image remained blurred and slightly off-kilter, as though the statue resisted capture.

Her camera started to make strange noises, a faint static hum in her ears. Startled, she pulled away, rubbing her ears as the noise grew louder, now coming from somewhere behind her, echoing between the empty buildings. She spun around but saw no one. The wind had picked up again, carrying a peculiar smell, damp and briny, like old seaweed and rotting wood.

Turning back, she aimed her camera at the statue once more, but as her finger hovered over the shutter, she froze. The Stonewatcher had moved. She couldn't explain it, but its arm seemed to have shifted, the hand extended outward as if reaching for her. She took a step back, her heart thundering. The statue couldn’t move — that was impossible.

The ground beneath her feet trembled, as if something was stirring below. Her eyes flicked to the shadows pooling around the statue’s base. For a second, she thought she saw something moving there, a dark, slick form sliding out like the tentacles of an octopus reaching through an impossible crack.

A whisper rose from those shadows. Not a voice but something that sounded like the ocean itself, crashing and receding, calling her closer. She knew she should run, but her feet remained rooted. As the dark shape grew and twisted, Quiante realized that whatever was lurking there wasn’t just part of the statue. It was alive, watching her just as she watched it.

The stone eyes gleamed with a faint phosphorescence, like fish scales catching the light of an unseen moon. It blinked, and a sound like grinding rock filled the air, cutting through the eerie silence. She wanted to scream but couldn’t. Her body felt heavy, bound by a strange force that both repelled and drew her in.

Then, with a scraping sound, the statue shifted again, this time clearly moving. It leaned down, its face looming just above hers, and she felt its breath — cold, wet, and smelling of the deep ocean. “You are... one of them, aren’t you?” it whispered, its voice like crashing waves.

Quiante stumbled backward, finally breaking free of the unseen hold. She didn’t know what it meant, but terror made her legs move as she turned and ran, desperate to escape the monstrous stone creature. Her mind reeled, barely able to process the reality unraveling before her.

Racing down the empty streets, Quiante dared a glance over her shoulder. The Stonewatcher was moving, a hulking mass of stone and shadow, its form twisting with every step, revealing more and more of what lay beneath its cracked stone skin. She saw a flash of something, a shape that glistened like the scales of a giant fish, twisting, stretching, pulling itself free from the stone form. It crawled on tendrils, webbed and slick, dragging itself toward her with an unnatural, hypnotic grace.

The ocean itself seemed to answer its approach, waves crashing in sync with its lumbering steps. The whispers returned, growing louder, as if more voices joined the chorus, echoing from all around her. They spoke of ancient things, forgotten by the surface world, of creatures that had once walked freely but now slumbered in the depths, only rising when someone foolish enough dared to stir them.

Quiante knew, somehow, that the creature had been waiting for her. Its gaze was fixed solely on her as if it had known she would come back this year, that she would dare disturb its endless vigil. The stories she’d read, the tales whispered by locals — all of it came crashing down in one terrifying revelation. The creature beneath the statue was no mere curiosity. It was a guardian, a warning left for those who had forgotten the old ways, the pact made between land and sea.

Her lungs burned as she raced past the crumbling houses, desperate for the safety of her car at the town's edge. The whispers had become screams now, filling her ears with ancient words and promises, promises made in blood and salt.

With one final glance over her shoulder, Quiante saw the creature pull itself fully free from the statue, its massive, glistening body standing nearly twice her height, covered in slick scales and rows of eyes that blinked in unison. It opened its mouth, a chasm of darkness, and let out a guttural roar that shook the ground beneath her feet.

She dove into her car, slamming the door shut, and turned the ignition with trembling hands. The car roared to life, and she sped off, her tires kicking up dust and pebbles as she raced down the narrow road away from Tide’s Reach. In her rearview mirror, she could still see the creature standing at the town’s edge, watching her leave, its many eyes glinting as it slowly sank back into the shadows, retreating, for now.

But Quiante knew that this would not be the end. She could feel its gaze lingering on her, even miles away. Somewhere deep in the recesses of her mind, a whisper remained — a fragment of the creature’s ancient warning. She didn’t know what it meant, but she knew it would haunt her forever, like the eyes of the Stonewatcher in that cursed, forgotten town.

October 29, 2024 12:33

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Mary Bendickson
20:10 Oct 29, 2024

Mysterious and haunting literally brought to life with your words.

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Rebecca Lewis
11:11 Oct 30, 2024

Thank you. 😊

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