The first thing they always noticed was the teeth.
Row after row, jagged and uneven, crowded in his mouth like broken glass. Cameras loved that part - the way the light caught when he snarled, or when fear made him bare them in self-defense. Nobody ever showed the hands, though. His hands were delicate, careful things, shaped for work that demanded precision: soldering hair-thin wires, teasing circuits awake with a breath and a touch.
He lived beneath the eastern viaduct in a room the city had forgotten: a shallow cave of concrete and rebar that groaned when trucks passed overhead. He kept the space tidy. Tools on pegboard. Buckets labeled in grease pencil: COPPER, ALU SCRAP, SCREWS. On a plank across milk crates sat whatever he was fixing that night - phones, a battered toaster, a cracked prosthetic knee. He found them in dumpsters and return chutes, repaired them, and left them on steps like stray cats brought home. His way of saying: I can give back. He couldn’t say it out loud without everything sounding like a threat.
Before the newspapers discovered him, before the city named him, he had been Elias.
He practiced speaking sometimes. Alone, late, with the fans off so he could hear his own breathing: “I did not sabotage your grid.” The words scraped. His palate clicked where bone had knitted wrong, where the mutation had sculpted new ridges. He tried again: “I meant to help.” The syllables misted the metal tabletop and left a smear.
They called him Maw.
The name stuck to him like ash. It turned even kindness into evidence. He had torn a subway door off its hinges, yes - ripped it free when the emergency release jammed and smoke filled the car. But the camera light had been behind him, and all anyone saw was a silhouette: a hulking figure wrenching steel, baring knives of teeth. The riders he had carried out were coughing too hard to talk. The heroes arrived in gold and chrome, and the crowd didn’t need details after that.
Paladin Prime spoke for them. He hovered above the viaduct one afternoon, sun blazing off his helm, a figure designed to look like certainty. “Monster,” he called down, voice amplified to a stadium boom. “Step forward. You will be taken into custody for the protection of this city.”
Elias stayed where he was, one palm against the cool concrete behind him, fingers spread as if the wall could steady him like a friend. He tried to answer. The vibration of his own voice in his skull made him flinch. The word no came out a rasp. People on the overpass recoiled, as if the sound itself carried teeth.
The capes favored daylight. Every punch looked cleaner with the sun on it. ArcLight rode a coil of electricity down and cracked him in the ribs. Elias folded around the pain, stumbled, put a hand through a cinderblock by accident. He hadn’t hit back yet. He knew how it looked when he did.
Then Prime slammed him through the vinyl of a billboard - some new hero-drink launching, glittering in berry tones - and instinct took over. There are reflexes in the spine older than manners. Elias clawed for purchase on the steel frame; he roared because his head rang and his chest burned and fear felt like drowning. The cameras drank it all in.
“Savage,” Prime said easily to any lens that would listen.
Later, in the quiet, Elias taped cardboard over the hole the fight had made in his roof. He fished a colander out of the pile and secured it under the leak. He knew how to fix leaks. He did not know how to fix the part of a person the world made up its mind about.
A child found him anyway. She stood at the edge of the viaduct shadow with a drone cradled against her shirt. He recognized it immediately: the red quadcopter he had unearthed from a trash bin and resoldered and left on a balcony he could reach by climbing an old brick seam. The drone was different now, painted in stripes of stubborn color.
“They say you eat people,” she announced, braver than her feet. Her toes curled inside her shoes, ready to run.
He shook his head. “Teeth aren’t for… that.” The sentence snagged. He gestured instead, holding up a spool of copper. He bit the tip, crimped it with those ugly teeth, and threaded it through a waiting ring. His hands moved the way his voice never would - clean, exact. The girl watched. Her mouth tightened like she was suspicious of her own curiosity.
“I think you fixed my drone,” she said.
He didn’t nod. That felt like announcing himself. He tapped the painted shell gently with a knuckle. The girl’s brother shouted her name from above; she startled and bolted. The drone’s rotors clicked as she hugged it tighter.
The city needed its monsters. Bright things gleam brighter in contrast. Elias understood that. He also understood gas lines.
It was the smell the first night - the wrongness threaded into air pushing through the grate behind his workbench. He knew the block above. Cheap construction. Lines laid shallow. He shut off his fans and listened to the concrete the way other men listen to the sea.
When the building erupted, the sound shoved dust out of the cracks in his ceiling like breath. Screams followed, thin and high. Elias moved without a plan. He hammered through the low wall with the heel of his palm, dragged a worktable aside, and wormed into the crawlspace between sewer and foundation. He carried his world with him: a coil of rope over his shoulder, a flashlight clenched in the teeth everyone feared, the one good glove.
Inside, heat bulged the hallway walls. Doors had softened and locked themselves in place; hinges squealed like animals. Elias bit through a hinge pin. He hated the taste of iron but it broke under the pressure of his jaw, and the door gave. He threw it down the stairwell so his hands were free for the child clinging to the banister. He took three at a time on his back - a woman and two kids, weight like anchors reminding him which way was out. He was fast when there were only choices and no witnesses.
Someone filmed him from the street, of course. Not a person but a hovering lens, the kind that makes everyone a little braver. From that angle, recorded through smoke and roar, he was only shadow and bulk hauling bodies out of fire. He got twenty-three people into air that wouldn’t blister their throats. On the last trip, the ceiling rolled like a tired muscle and came down. He curled around a little shape with hair sticking everywhere and thought: not this one. Concrete found his spine. The building sighed for a long time and then rested.
They found him hours later because crying doesn’t stop just because cameras need it to. Paladin lifted the slab one-handed. The sun made him a god. Medics waited with a cage, the kind they use for dangerous rescues. Elias blinked at light. His throat rasped ash; he tried to say what mattered.
“Saved…them.” He coughed hard enough to see stars.
The crowd heard something else. Slay them. It wasn’t even malice, not exactly. It was the shape of their expectation, fitting itself over the sound until it clicked. Prime’s jaw worked inside the helm; he gave the smallest nod, and the medics moved the cage closer like that had been the plan all along.
Elias slipped sideways between two broken ribs of concrete before they could close the latch. It tore his bandages and he left a dark smear behind and the crowd jumped back and scattered because monsters leave traces. He dropped into the service duct and followed the hum of the city down.
He healed slowly. Mutations take their time when knitting is complicated. He slept in shifts, woke to the throb of bone that didn’t remember how to be straight, drank water that tasted like coins, and kept the fans off because the sound of them now felt like fire. When he could stand without bracing a hand to the wall, he turned the power back on and coaxed a broken dialysis pump into working shape for a clinic that would never know his name.
Only once did someone come to his door during those weeks. The same girl, this time with a scarf looped around her arms. She stayed just inside the frame of light.
“I know you didn’t eat them,” she said.
He held very still. People startle when big things move quickly. Her chin lifted a fraction. She looked like someone practicing being a person.
“You fixed my drone,” she added, fiercely, like she was correcting the narrative the city kept in its mouth.
He tried to smile and remembered too late what that looked like on him. Her fingers worried the scarf fringe but she didn’t run.
The heroes scheduled their parade for the next month. The city loves its rituals. Streamers. Drones filming from every angle, schoolkids in matching shirts. Prime said the usual things to microphones: the word safety placed again and again like a talisman. There was talk of a new sky-tram line cutting across the river, carrying the first group of dignitaries as the parade climax.
Elias knew the tram’s guts the first time he saw them: aluminum spines and fat bundled veins of power. He knew, because he listened, that something under the streets by the river hummed on days it shouldn’t. He walked the tunnels at night with no plan but listening. On the morning of the parade, the hum spiked, wild and thin like a wire you can’t look away from. The tram would cross the river at noon. He checked the time by the light on the surge protector. Eleven forty-eight.
He could have stayed underground. He could have let the bright people handle their bright disaster. He started climbing instead.
Above ground, floats bulged with sculpted foam hero faces. Speakers chanted mottos. Drones spun the sky into a restless web. A barricade held back the crowd along the river walk - families with paper flags, teenagers angling their phones toward the heroes rolling past.
Elias reached the tram pylons and slid under the platform. The hum here shook his teeth in his head; the tie-in cabinet was hot enough to burn his palm through the glove. It wasn’t sabotage in the way the news liked to say - no villain with a bomb wired cartoonishly to a clock. It was a bad splice and a timing failure and too much pride in a deadline. It was going to ground itself in the river through whoever touched it first.
He had to open the cabinet to shunt the surge. Lock screws, proprietary heads - he bit and turned and spat metal. People noticed him then. It’s hard not to notice a large figure wedged under public infrastructure during a parade. Someone screamed. That always worked like a flare.
ArcLight streaked in, an electricity silhouette. If he’d said I am grounding a surge that will jump to the tram cable when the current peaks, would anyone have heard that through the filters in their heads? He didn’t try. Words failed him at the best of times. He jammed a braided copper bus he’d made into the cabinet and wrapped the end around his forearm, skin to metal. The surge needed a path. He offered himself.
ArcLight’s bolt hit him at the same moment the grid hiccupped. Pain was not the interesting part. Pain is just a thing the body makes to keep you paying attention. The interesting part was the way the world sharpened as current pushed his teeth together and rattled the joints of his fingers, as heat baked his chest and the copper sang like a struck bell.
The tram slid past above him, full of glossy hair and rehearsed smiles. It did not become a cage of flame in the sky. No one cheered for the absence of spectacle. They cheered for the float shaped like Prime’s shield.
Paladin reached him with the kind of speed reserved for cameras. His boot pinned Elias’s shoulder to the platform grate. There were a dozen explanations in Elias’s chest and none of them could get past his throat; smoke crawled out instead. He stared up through the filter mesh at the underside of a hero and thought he could taste ozone in his teeth for the rest of his life.
“Stand down,” Prime said, as if Elias had ever been allowed to stand up.
The copper burned him enough to make the choice simple: let go or pass out. He let go. The cabinet whined. He breathed, once, the way he’d been taught - through his nose, slow - and then he rolled into the river.
Water closed over him like a second skin and took the rest of the heat away. He sank until the silt lifted around him in soft clouds. He knew these pilings. He knew the cracks. He knew exactly how to climb the lattice back into the tunnels without breaking the surface again.
The news made what it could. The villain Maw had attempted to sabotage the tram. The heroes had thwarted him. An electrical fire under the platform had been contained. Prime lifted a child on his shoulders and the city became a postcard for itself.
Down below, Elias’s arms were a puzzle of blister and black. He wrapped them in the cleanest shirts he owned and watched a dribble of river water run down the support beam and pool near his boot. His workshop hummed its old calm. He set a metronome on the bench and let it click him back into himself. One thing at a time. Wind this coil. Scrape that contact. Breathe.
A week later, a note slid under his door. Not a hero note. Office printer paper, hospital letterhead. To the anonymous technician who has been rerouting power at the east end: whoever you are, your hands kept the NICU breathing during the last brownout. We see your work. We’d like to leave you better parts. There was an address for a loading dock, third shift. No cameras.
He didn’t go. Not yet. Trust is a muscle that atrophies.
The girl came again with chalk on her fingers. She drew on the viaduct wall while he watched from inside his doorway. She didn’t draw teeth. She drew hands: big and careful, a little wrong because chalk is clumsy and concrete eats lines. She colored the fingernails gold, like medals, and then she laughed at her own joke and made them plain again.
“They keep saying your name wrong,” she told the wall. She wasn’t looking at him. “They say mouth. But it’s hands, isn’t it?”
He didn’t answer. His own name sat quiet in him and warmed like a small thing that had found sun. He lifted a palm to the light and the scars glittered where copper had kissed. Ugly work, if you didn’t know what it had carried.
The city would keep needing a shadow to throw its shape against. He understood that as well as he understood screws. He would always be too large for photos, too strange for parades. But he had a loading dock address written in a secretary’s neat hand, and he had a wall where a child had drawn what she thought mattered.
Elias turned back to his bench. He sorted a new jar: WASHERS - SMALL MIRACLES. He wrote it as a joke to himself and kept it because it felt true. Somewhere above him the tram line squealed settling into its routine. Somewhere across town a NICU hummed without drama. The metronome on his bench marked time for a world that didn’t know he counted with it.
He picked up a cracked radio, breathed on the seam, and began again.
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Unsung hero.
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A vivid world and a heart warming hero.
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