The Hill Were Memories Live

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Friendship Happy

The moon hung low over the quiet plains, its silver light spilling over the world in ripples of soft illumination. Crickets chirped in the tall grass, their symphony a gentle reminder of life even in the stillness. A faint breeze rustled the trees, carrying with it the scent of earth and wildflowers. Amidst the shadowy contours of the landscape, a lone horse stood atop a grassy hill. His coat shimmered faintly, a patchwork of obsidian and ivory, like the remnants of a starry sky. His name was Solstice, a name once shouted across vast fields by riders who marveled at his speed and grace. But now, only the wind whispered his name, and it was not enough.

Solstice feared he was being forgotten.

It wasn’t an unfounded fear. The village below, nestled in a crook of the valley, had grown quieter over the years. The children who once tugged at his mane and giggled as they fed him sugar cubes were gone, having grown too old for such delights. His rider, a man named Elias, had been strong and jovial, but time had bent his back and stolen his vitality. Solstice now spent most of his days in the paddock or grazing by the stream, far from the bustling heart of the village where newer, younger horses drew the townsfolk’s admiration.

He remembered the days when his hooves thundered across fields, the rush of wind in his ears as Elias guided him over fences and through meadows. The cheers from the villagers had once filled him with pride, but now they were just echoes, faint and fleeting. He often stood at the edge of his paddock, watching the younger horses train with their riders, a pang of longing tightening in his chest.

One crisp autumn evening, as the stars began to prick the sky, Solstice felt a stirring in his chest. He needed to ensure that his name would not be lost. He had been fast once—the fastest horse for miles. Surely, there was a way to remind them all of who he was.

The opportunity arose when he overheard a pair of stable hands discussing an upcoming race. It was a grueling journey across the plains, through dense woods, and up into the foothills of the distant mountains. Only the most determined riders and their horses dared to enter, for the path was treacherous, and the reward was not riches but glory—a place in the stories the village would tell for generations.

Solstice’s heart pounded as he listened. This was it. If he could compete, if he could finish the race, the village would remember him forever.

But there was a problem. Elias no longer rode. His hands trembled too much to hold the reins, and his legs could barely support his own weight, let alone guide Solstice through such a perilous course. Solstice’s ears drooped as he realized his dream might already be out of reach.

Then, a soft voice broke through his despair.

“You still have spirit, don’t you?”

It was Lila, Elias’s granddaughter. Barely seventeen, with a mane of wild auburn hair, she had always been kind to Solstice. While her brothers preferred the younger, stronger horses, Lila often sat by Solstice’s paddock, sketching him in her notebook and humming songs her mother had taught her.

Solstice nickered softly in response, and Lila’s lips curved into a smile.

“I’ll race with you,” she said, as if reading his thoughts. “We’ll show them you’ve still got it.”

The weeks leading up to the race were a blur of preparation. Lila worked tirelessly, tending to Solstice’s hooves, brushing his coat until it gleamed, and practicing her riding in secret. Though her brothers mocked her and warned her against entering the race, she remained steadfast. Each evening, she whispered words of encouragement to Solstice, her determination shining brighter than the stars.

Their training was not without its challenges. Solstice’s stamina had waned over the years, and there were moments when his legs felt like lead. Lila pushed him gently, never demanding more than he could give, but always urging him to believe in himself. They practiced on the trails near the village, navigating tight turns and uneven paths. With each session, Solstice felt a spark reignite within him—a reminder of the horse he once was.

When the day of the race arrived, a thick mist clung to the valley, shrouding the starting line in an ethereal haze. Solstice pawed at the ground, feeling the familiar rush of adrenaline course through him. Around them, other riders and their horses prepared, their laughter and banter filling the air. The scent of damp earth and leather mixed with the crisp autumn breeze. Solstice and Lila remained silent, focused.

The race began with a thunderous roar, hooves pounding against the earth like rolling drumbeats. Solstice surged forward, his muscles coiling and releasing with a power he had nearly forgotten. Lila leaned into his rhythm, her auburn hair streaming behind her like a banner of fire. Together, they became a blur, a force of nature cutting through the mist.

The plains were the first challenge, an open expanse where speed reigned supreme. Solstice pushed himself harder, overtaking horse after horse until they reached the dense woods. Here, the race became a test of agility, as riders navigated narrow paths and low-hanging branches. The woods were alive with the sounds of snapping twigs and rustling leaves, a cacophony that only heightened the tension. Lila’s light touch and Solstice’s nimble steps carried them through, earning murmurs of astonishment from those they passed.

As they ascended into the foothills, the terrain grew rough and unforgiving. Loose rocks and steep inclines tested both rider and horse. Solstice’s breaths came heavier, and his legs began to ache. Lila’s encouragement, whispered between gasps for air, kept him moving. She spoke of their shared dreams, of the bond they had forged, and of the legacy they were creating with each stride.

The final stretch loomed ahead—a treacherous descent to the finish line. The path was slick with dew, and loose rocks threatened to send them tumbling. Solstice’s heart pounded not with fear but with determination. He would not falter now, not when the finish line was so close. Lila guided him with steady hands, her trust in him unwavering.

They crossed it amidst a cacophony of cheers. Solstice’s legs trembled as he came to a stop, but his heart swelled with pride. Lila’s face was flushed with exhilaration, her smile as bright as the rising sun.

The village celebrated their victory, and for a time, Solstice felt the warmth of being remembered. His name was spoken with reverence, his story shared around fires and at feasts. Children once again came to see him, their laughter filling the air as they marveled at the horse who had defied time and odds. For weeks, he basked in their adoration, his spirit buoyed by their admiration.

But as the days turned to weeks, the excitement faded. The villagers returned to their routines, and Solstice found himself once again grazing by the stream, the echoes of their cheers growing fainter with each passing day.

One evening, as the first snows of winter began to fall, Solstice stood on the hill overlooking the village. He felt a pang of sorrow, the fear of being forgotten gnawing at him once more.

It was then that he noticed Lila approaching, her notebook clutched to her chest. She sat beside him in the snow, opening the book to reveal pages filled with sketches of him—running, grazing, standing proud on the hilltop. Beneath each drawing were words, recounting his story, their story.

“You’ll never be forgotten,” Lila said softly. “Not as long as I’m here.”

Solstice nickered, pressing his nose against her shoulder. In that moment, he realized that being remembered wasn’t about the cheers or the stories told by the many. It was about the bond he shared with the few who truly cared.

And so, as the snow fell around them, Solstice’s fear melted away. He was not forgotten. He was loved. And that was enough.

January 18, 2025 10:33

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