Submitted to: Contest #325

The Knight, Death and The Devil

Written in response to: "Start your story with the sensation of a breeze brushing against someone’s skin."

Drama Horror

This story contains themes or mentions of physical violence, gore, or abuse.

The cool breeze brushes up against the skin of my cleanly shaven face. It is a beautiful morning, and if you know how to hate just one person I can teach you how to hate the millions.

I ride my pale horse through the valley, sharpened sword at my side. My faithful hound Marcus keeps pace, ever ready for the next slaughter, as am I. We are both proud soldiers of the Fatherland. Stolza Deutsche Soldaten. I wear the goat horns and I bring the flame. I bring death by the bullet or the blade or the rope. I am all of these things. I wear the SS lightning bolts on my crisp black lapels and I wear the death's head officer’s cap. I have dined with Goebbels, Goring and Heydrich. Mein Fuhrer knows my name.

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I am the Knight.

I stand to protect the German people and I am prepared to sacrifice my life if that is what is required of me. The enemies of the state - within or without - must be defeated. This is my purpose. My mission. My life.

Today I visited the camp at Kraków-Płaszów in Poland and met with the Commandant. There were concerns about the march of the Red Army coming in that direction and it was necessary to discuss protective measures and evacuation plans.

I had heard stories about Amon Goth. It can be difficult to know what to believe from what you hear, but he lived up to his reputation when he lit a cigarette and then pulled his Luger and casually shot three of the camp prisoners, all women, for seemingly no reason at all. Then he ordered his deputy to release his two Rottweilers on the horrified witnesses. He is a strong and dedicated soldier of the SS. We need more like him.

I am the Knight.

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I am Death.

Mine is the last face you will ever see.

When I bring my men into your village, death will follow. We will hang you from the lamposts and hang signs around your necks written in Deutsche citing the reasons why you needed to die. We will hang your siblings and parents and friends right next to you in the same fashion. Then we will put everything else to the torch and move on to the next village.

You do not ever want to see my shadow fall upon you.

I am Death.

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I am the Devil.

Torture and incineration. Pain and suffering. I will make you scream, and then I will make you scream over and over again. No end to it all. Never. I have no pity. No compassion. It simply isn't within me.

I have much work to do. Ich habe Arbeit zu erledigen. I bring the flame and I bring the sword, but there are many more who I must bring these gifts to as the Nazi flag flies proudly behind me. I assure you that one day my work will be done. No matter how long it takes, one day my work will be done. A thousand year Reich.

I am the Devil.

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In the village just outside of Auschwitz we heard the first sounds of approaching troops. We took up defensive positions but when we saw the size of the coming army we fell back in retreat, all the way to Berlin in the end.

When dawn rose the next day, the first of the Red Army soldiers walked cautiously out of the early morning mist and through the main gates of the camp in a wide-eyed procession of sympathy and sorrow and abject horror. It was only then that they realized what a tragic spectacle the prisoners had become, as the pitiful nature of their existence was reflected in the eyes of those battle-hardened Russian soldiers walking slowly through their midst, instantly stripped away of any notions that they had already seen the worst of what war had to offer or just how cruel man can be to man.

I was there in handcuffs in Berlin when the Red Army soldiers took down the Nazi flag over the Reichstag. I could see the numerous wristwatches worn by the Russian soldiers, stripped from the bodies of dead German soldiers during their march through the city. I was disgusted. I didn’t care if I died, I just wanted to take at least one of them with me. I still had my knife.

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In Nuremberg I was held accountable. I assumed the Russians would just execute me right there on the street in Berlin, but they ultimately handed over many of the senior SS officers to the court. I was one. They presented my medals and my immaculate jet black Tottenkompf cap at trial. That was all of the evidence that was needed.

“Tomas Ehrlich, this panel finds you guilty of conspiracy to commit crimes, crimes against peace, war crimes, and crimes against humanity. Do you have any final words to say before you are sentenced?”

“Ich bin eine stolze Deutscher! Mach was du willst!” (I am a proud German. Do what you will.)

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The next day they didn’t bring me anything to eat. I understand. It would have been pointless.

When they led me out to the gallows the sun was shining. It was a beautiful morning and I could feel the light breeze on my unshaven face. There were many people gathered there to observe and cheer for my death. I did not care. They are all just animals.

I was surprised though when the executioner, after securing the noose tightly around my neck, leaned in close and wished me a quick trip to heaven. I did not expect that.

When he pulled the handle and the trap door dropped out from beneath my feet I heard my neck snap, and then I heard nothing more.

I am The Knight.

I am Death.

I am The Devil.

THE END

Authors Note: This story is based on the 1513 engraving "Knight, Death and The Devil" by German artist Albrecht Dürer. You can see a copy and learn more about it here if you are interested: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Knight,_Death_and_the_Devil

“Nazi Punks, Fuck Off!” - The Dead Kennedys

Posted Oct 22, 2025
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Colin Smith
21:57 Oct 26, 2025

Dang, why did you have to include the author's note, Thomas? I was going to drop some knowledge here in the comments with my big brain of northern Renaissance trivia. I actually used the same painting as inspiration for one of my characters in a book I wrote a few years back.

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Thomas Wetzel
00:45 Oct 27, 2025

Cool! Then you are one of the few people I know who has ever even heard of it. A pretty obscure piece but apparently it was an iconic image for the Nazi high command so I thought I would structure this story around it. I'm sure that your European history far surpasses mine but I do know the history of my people. I appreciate your time. Danka, mein freund.

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Mary Butler
19:59 Oct 25, 2025

This was haunting, provocative, and meticulously structured. The repetition of “I am the Knight. I am Death. I am the Devil.” created an almost hypnotic rhythm that slowly stripped away any pretense of honor, exposing the rot beneath the uniform. One line that really chilled me was: “You do not ever want to see my shadow fall upon you.” It’s simple, but the quiet menace behind it says everything.

The story doesn’t pull punches. It paints horror without romanticizing it. The ending, especially the moment with the executioner wishing him a quick trip to heaven, was so strangely human it made me pause. A deeply unsettling character study. Thanks for sharing such a bold and thought-provoking piece.

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Thomas Wetzel
00:37 Oct 26, 2025

Thanks, Mary! They say you should write relatable characters but I don't think that's an unbreakable rule. Was Patrick Bateman relatable in American Psycho? Hannibal Lecter? Gandhi? (Kind of a preachy asshole, no?) I think you can break that rule, and any others you want to break, so long as you take pains to get it right. Glad you felt I got it right.

That moment at the end where the executioner wishes him a quick trip to heaven was intended to illustrate what true humanity looks like, even on the gallows, and how inhuman the main character is by contrast.

If you want to see a great film, and you can tolerate subtitles, "The Captain" is a brilliant movie about how absolute power corrupts absolutely. True story too. (The best thing about growing up in a German family is I can watch all the WW2 films with the subtitles off. Oddly, I can't watch Australian films. They speak English, but not really. Sorta like people from New Orleans. Day make dat juicy jambalaya and dat goo andouille but I caint understand them, me. Barely English but exactly how they speak. Love those flag-flying freaks down there. They know how to party.)

Love you and hope all is well! Appreciate you.

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Mary Bendickson
03:01 Oct 25, 2025

Some good points made in the comments. Impactful storyline telling history.

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Thomas Wetzel
15:33 Oct 25, 2025

Thanks Mary. Fun Fact: Himmler required any SS officers getting married to shake their new wife’s hand, not kiss her, at the end of the ceremony. Those people were not only evil but just plain weird.

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Mary Bendickson
16:07 Oct 25, 2025

Maybe it was marriage at first sight so had to say nice to meet you? 😂

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Rebecca Hurst
13:46 Oct 23, 2025

Good one, Thomas. While half the world is spitting out that their political opononents are Nazis, it is good to be reminded what that word actually means

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Thomas Wetzel
17:09 Oct 23, 2025

Thanks, Becca! I have never been a fan of fascism.

I was born at Rammstein Air Force Base and learned German before English. I moved to NYC when I was 7 but I remain proud of my heritage. Thousands of years of history and so many contributions to art and science and culture - from Schopenhauer to Nietzsche to Einstein, Mozart and more - but all anyone seems to remember is the 12 years that these white supremacist assholes seized power. Darkest chapter in our history but not reflective of who we are.

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Rebecca Hurst
17:40 Oct 23, 2025

I know that, Thomas. I disagree that they were particularly 'white supremists' - there were no black and brown people in Germany to make the comparison. I think that is an American conflation of what was really going on over there. It is an American term, more aligned with the Ku Klux Klan than Germany at the time. Had black and brown people been in Germany at the time, I am sure they would have suffered the same fate, but they weren't. It was primarly Jews, the most persecuted people in the world. Anti-semitism is a light sleeper. I was also born in a RAF base in '65. RAF Gutersloh, Germany. (Mozart was Austrian, but then again so was Hitler).

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Thomas Wetzel
04:34 Oct 24, 2025

Yes, perhaps I am too casually using that term. The Third Reich was first and foremost antisemitic, but also anti-communist, anti-Romani, anti-homosexual, anti-intellectual and a whole bunch of other anti-things. But they all bowed to the concept of the superiority of a white Aryan race. (Ever seen a picture of Himmler? Not so Aryan.)

And yes, I know Mozart was Austrian. It was basically one kingdom during most of the Holy Roman Empire and it was one kingdom again after the reunification of Germany in 1871 until the end of WW1.

Also, Amon Goth - the camp Commandant referenced in this story - was an SS officer from Austria. He is the character that Ralph Fiennes played in Schindler's List. An absolute demon who ultimately swung from a rope. Good riddance. Death to Tyrants. (I actually have that tattooed on my inside right forearm in Latin.)

Hope all is well!

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