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African American Creative Nonfiction Historical Fiction

Theo had been staring at the same sentence so long the letters bled together. Lineage in Postmodern Black Poetics. He mouthed the words once more, flat and sour on his tongue. His coffee from the bodega on 121st sat cold beside him, the surface gone slick and oily, but he drank anyway.

The radiator groaned in protest, the pipes rattling like brass warming up before a set.

Theo pressed a palm against the open book, willing the words to stay still. For a moment they held. Then the page trembled beneath his hand.

He told himself it was fatigue.

The air sharpened with coal smoke. Somewhere beyond the walls, a horn broke loose in the night.

The lights went dark.

And when he opened his eyes again, Harlem was different.

The words swam, and the sidewalk cracked into cobblestones.

Horse hooves clopped. Trumpets rang from a window above. A boy in suspenders sprinted past with a sack of newspapers.

Theo looked down. His phone was gone.

He closed his eyes again, slowly, and he was back in Harlem 2025. The coffee had spilled all over his notes.

He told himself it was a stress-induced hallucination.

Two weeks later, when he touched the yellowed cover of Torchlight Verse, it happened again.

This time, the streetlamps and car horns didn’t dissolve into fluorescent light and radiator hiss.

***

Theo Marshall had never planned to write about his great-granduncle. Elias Marshall was barely a footnote in most Harlem Renaissance anthologies. His one slim volume of poems, printed in 1925. Then nothing else. It had taken Theo three semesters and an irritable dissertation advisor to even find the book.

But here he was, dozing over its fragile binding in Columbia’s archive reading room, the heater rattling like a dying trombone, when the world folded neatly into itself.

The cold vanished.

Ink and coal hung heavy in the room, a bitter perfume. From outside drifted Harlem’s chorus: boots striking pavement in syncopation, a horn laughing wild from a tenement window, a dice game punctuated by cheers, and far off, the steel tempo of the train threading it all together.

Theo stood. The desk under him was now a dark walnut, carved with initials.

Outside the tall window, dusk spread over Harlem, streetlamps flickering on as voices rose from the sidewalks.

His hand dug into his sternum, waiting for the sharp bite of something fatal. The pulse was strong, stubbornly alive.

But if he was right, and Theo Marshall put more faith in science than faith, he had time-traveled by accident. Again.

Footsteps pounded the stairs, each one strong enough to rattle the doorframe.

The door flew open hard, slamming against the wall.

In the doorway stood Elias Marshall.

***

Elias’s suit sagged at the shoulders, the fabric gone shiny with wear. Ink clung to the creases of his fingers, and one sock had slouched low inside a scuffed shoe. The socks didn’t match. His steps struck the floor with a restless energy that filled the room.

“Jervis lied,” Elias muttered, slamming a folder onto the desk. “He said he’d get it to Locke. Said he’d help. All they want is another Langston, another Claude. I ain’t the right color for them.”

Theo blinked.

Elias spun on him. “Who the hell are you?”

“Me?”

“Yeah, boy. I don’t see no one else here.”

“I… uhm.. friend of Jervis.”

“Make sense. You got that damn Jervis look.” He poured himself a half-glass of amber liquid. “You here to laugh too? Read my poems, say they ain’t finished, ain’t worth a damn?”

"No. I…” Theo stared. “You’re Elias Marshall.”

The man narrowed his eyes. “Boy, how do you know my name?”

Theo’s throat tightened. ‘You… wrote Torchlight Verse. Published next year.’”

“Next year?” Elias squinted. “You drunk already?”

Theo let out a single bark of laughter that cracked the silence. “Maybe.”

Elias stared a beat longer, then dropped into a chair. “Well, mystery man, since you’ve materialized into my misery, might as well read them. Maybe you’ll say something new.”

Theo picked up the folder. Inside: ink-scrawled lines, thick with metaphor, grief knotted into cadence. They weren’t finished, but they carried a heat that felt alive.

He cleared his throat. “This one here, Stove Smoke. It’s got the bones of something incredible. But here.” He pointed. “Don’t finish this metaphor. Let it hang. Let it ache.”

Elias frowned. “The line about Mama’s laugh?”

“Yes. Let her live in the smoke. Don’t tie a bow on it.”

Elias leaned forward. “What did you say your name was again, boy?”

Theo paused. “Doesn’t matter.”

“You some kind of spirit or figment of my ‘magination.”

“Maybe.”

They traded short, uneven chuckled bursts, the kind that tested the air, before the sound grew freer, tumbling between them.

Elias poured him a drink. Theo accepted.

***

They worked through the night.

“Your verbs are good,” Theo said. “But you over-explain the emotion.”

Elias bristled. “People don’t read between the lines.”

“They do if the line hits right.”

At one point, Elias demanded, “You sure you’re not Alain Locke in disguise?”

Theo snorted. “Please. Locke doesn’t quote Kendrick.”

Elias blinked. “Who on earth is Kendrick.”

“Never mind.”

Later, as they restructured a poem called Inheritance, Elias leaned back. “When I was eight, I wrote about a dead bird. Mama said, ‘you got heavy hands for a child.’ Been dragging that weight since.”

Theo nodded. “Heavy hands leave marks.”

“You talk like a professor.”

“Guess I do.”

Elias laughed.“ You’ve got the look of a man stuck between places.”

Theo’s eyes dropped to the ink stains on Elias’s hands. His own fingers flat against the desk, unsure what to hold on to. “I… I shouldn’t be here,” he said, then after a breath, “though I’ve never felt more at home.”

He leaned in slightly, his next words quiet, as if asking permission. “Can I give you one line?”

“Only one, huh.”

Theo wrote: You cannot name the stars unless you’ve walked beneath their heat.

His gaze lingered on the words. His lips parted, and released a breath so slow it seemed to carry something out of him.

“Damn. That kind of line could make a man immortal.”

Theo shrugged. “It’s yours.”

“Hell it is,” Elias said. “A line like that don’t belong to one man. But I’ll keep it.”

He turned back to the page.

Theo felt the jolt before it happened.

The room shimmered. Elias’s voice echoed. And the desk beneath his fingers transformed.

***

He woke in the library. A radiator hissed.

The poem lay open on the desk. The final one. The one that had always ended mid-line.

Except now it didn’t.

You cannot name the stars

unless you’ve walked beneath their heat –

so I walk. Still walking.

Theo’s throat caught.

He flipped to the acknowledgements. There, in ink faded by time:

To the man whose name I never caught, who found me in the hour I was ready to quit.

Theo sat back.

He checked the archive database. Elias Marshall: still one book, still no further publications, still nearly forgotten.

But that line, the one about stars, had become part of the canon. Quoted in anthologies. Tattooed on artists. It had survived.

Theo had given it. And history had kept it.

Without him.

***

He didn’t tell anyone.

Not his advisor. Not his friends. Not even his mother.

He redrafted his proposal:

Inherited Voice: Ghosts, Lineage, and the Unwritten Contributors to the Harlem Renaissance.

He quoted Elias liberally.

And when he defended it months later, voice steady, heart full, he wore a pin in his lapel: a star, tiny and unremarkable to anyone else.

***

One rainy afternoon, Theo found himself outside the old brownstone on Lenox, the one he’d first “arrived” in. It was a crumbling walk-up now, paint peeling, windows cracked.

He stood for a moment in the doorway and listened.

He didn’t hear any music, nor keyboard clacking, only the rain working its way through the cracks where sound used to be.

A boy passed on a scooter, blasting trap music.

Theo smiled.

He decided not to go inside.

Instead, he walked down Lenox, coat collar up, heels tapping to the music in his head. He wasn’t chasing after doorways or strange coincidences anymore.

For now, he held on to what he’d found.

He carried a past close enough to touch and a future opening ahead, his shoes striking wet pavement as he walked clear between the two.

Posted Aug 25, 2025
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Mary Bendickson
13:41 Sep 05, 2025

Congrats on your win and welcome to Reedsy.🥳
I'll come back later to read.
Took me awhile but finally got this one done. Been working on other projects.
You deserve the praise here.
Walking between the past and the present depicted with flourish.

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Ovett Chapman
20:54 Sep 05, 2025

Thank you for the warm welcome. Looking forward to you coming back and reading.

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Mark O'Reilly
17:03 Sep 04, 2025

This story makes things come alive. Details like the description of the central heating pipes heard in musical terms, or the “Ink and coal [that] hung heavy in the room” make present and past Harlem real and perceptible places, and emphasise the similarity between them rather than the difference. And another thing that comes alive is the dead hand of literary criticism, now a handshake between distant relatives who can only meet with the help of time travel. And that is one of the great things about art, especially literature: the ability to “hear” long-dead voices telling what it was like to live in their world, what it was like to live as them.
But then there is an infraction. A fundamental law of time travel is broken: that a time traveller must not change the past. Theo contributes a line to Elias’s work, and it turns out to be the only line of the obscure poet that anybody remembers. Does that mean that Elias deserves to be forgotten? Is it meant to invoke one of the inherent paradoxes of time travel? Or perhaps something else. Whatever the intended meaning, including the possibility that there isn’t one, it makes the reader think. And it makes time travel seem entirely natural, except where Theo says, “You... write Torchlight Verse. Published next year.” Theo is too clever to make that mistake.

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Ovett Chapman
19:26 Sep 04, 2025

I appreciate your take on my story. Theo's mistake was really meant to frame his shock, displacement, and disbelief in what he was experiencing. I really like how you thought about that line and drew several possible meanings. Thank you!

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Kathleen Shapona
19:15 Sep 06, 2025

I love your story! You are genuinely a naturally gifted writer and transported me when reading! Congratulations on your win, you truly deserve it! Outstanding!

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Ovett Chapman
23:02 Sep 06, 2025

Such kind words. Thank you! It really means a lot.

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Alexis Araneta
16:52 Sep 06, 2025

Oh my goodness! Impeccable use of imagery here. I just love how vivid it all is. Phenomenal work!

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Ovett Chapman
18:44 Sep 06, 2025

Far too kind. I really appreciate it. Thank you!

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Shauna Bowling
16:17 Sep 06, 2025

Ovett, this is an absolutely spectacular story. Your ability to make music with your words is astonishing and what every writer should aspire to do.

Your win is a shoo-in, in my opinion. I thoroughly enjoyed traveling through time with Elias. You, sir, are a masterful storyteller!

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Ovett Chapman
18:45 Sep 06, 2025

I still feel as though I am learning and growing as a writer, so I very much appreciate your kind words. Thank you!

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Amanda Stogsdill
16:03 Sep 06, 2025

Congratulations on your win! Great story with compelling ⠎⠑⠞⠞⠬⠲

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Ovett Chapman
18:46 Sep 06, 2025

Thank you so much!

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Ashlynn Prins
00:35 Sep 06, 2025

so wonderful and sweet!

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Ovett Chapman
18:46 Sep 06, 2025

Thank you.

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Glenn Sutton
23:12 Sep 05, 2025

Amazing thank you so much for that writing. I flowed it had a great pace to me some places slowing down almost a stutter then sped back up and just all came together for me.

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Ovett Chapman
18:46 Sep 06, 2025

:) Yes I do love those short sentences. Glad you enjoyed.

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Kristi Gott
21:40 Sep 05, 2025

Congratulations! Love it! Supernatural, distinctive characters, immersive, unique and original, transported me right into the story. Skillful, talented writing.

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Ovett Chapman
18:47 Sep 06, 2025

I really had fun with this one and happy to hear you loved it. Thank you.

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21:10 Sep 05, 2025

Hello Ovett Chapman

Thank you for this beautifully written story. Each word guided my attention with ease, maintaining and increasing my interest in the story as I read along. I applaud your imaginative, yet seamless transition from present reality to time-travelling ; Theo’s unsteady hand, the book’s trembling page, fatigue, lights off, eyes open. I was dematerialized from 2025 and rematerialized into 1925 with success. I visited Harlem once, and I always appreciate reading a good story set in places where I have lived and/or visited.

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Ovett Chapman
18:47 Sep 06, 2025

Thank you so much. I love everything about the Harlem Renaissance, so this one felt very much personal.

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P. Turner
20:28 Sep 05, 2025

Such beautiful, descriptive writing. I found this to be a clever and poignant take on time travel. Well deserved win!

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Ovett Chapman
20:53 Sep 05, 2025

Thank you. I will say - I had fun writing this one. The Harlem Renaissance is one of my favorite time periods.

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K Spiers
20:14 Sep 05, 2025

Beautiful imagery. Enjoyed reading this story.

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Ovett Chapman
20:52 Sep 05, 2025

So happy the imagery came through. Thank you.

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Silent Zinnia
18:17 Sep 05, 2025

Congrats on the win well deserved🎉

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Ovett Chapman
20:52 Sep 05, 2025

Thank you so much!

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Silent Zinnia
20:44 Sep 06, 2025

Always

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Sabah Akram
17:49 Sep 05, 2025

Wow. I loved the way this was written. It was perfect.

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Ovett Chapman
20:51 Sep 05, 2025

I appreciate it. Nice to hear such complimentary comments on my writing :)

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Stevie Burges
12:27 Sep 05, 2025

Well written. It caught my attention from the beginning to the end. Thanks for writing and sharing.

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Ovett Chapman
20:51 Sep 05, 2025

Thank you. It really means a lot that this piece had your attention throughout.

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Rosa Carr
20:05 Sep 04, 2025

This was a good story. I especially like your final sentence, it makes time feel so tangible.

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Ovett Chapman
23:53 Sep 04, 2025

Thank you for your feedback!

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