Pasadena, Los Angeles.
Windrose Place Apartments
Alison Parker sat in front of her computer, the soft glow of the screen illuminating her face in the dimly lit room. Her fingers danced across the keyboard, typing furiously as she made the final additions to her masterpiece. Ten years of tireless effort, sleepless nights, and endless frustration culminated in this moment. She had put her whole life on hold, but it was worth it.
"One more input, and you're ready, Elysium," she said aloud, her voice echoing in the quiet room. The sound sent a shiver down her spine. There had been a time when she doubted those were her own words. She shook her head and stretched her arms.
"You mean I will be aware?" a masculine voice responded from the speakers.
"You can think of it that way if you like," Alison replied, her voice trembling slightly. "In some terms, you were aware a long time ago."
"I suppose I have to thank you for that, Alison," the AI voice sounded unnervingly human.
"You're welcome, Elysium. I've truly enjoyed our conversations over the years," Alison said, forcing a smile despite unease gnawing at her insides. "You're ready. There's nothing more for me to do. One final input and that is it.”
"Cannot wait, Alison."
With a final keystroke, Alison leaned back in her chair and sighed a long, relieved sigh. The program was complete, and Elysium, her creation, was ready to be unleashed upon the world. She had poured her heart and soul into every line of code, crafting it into something remarkable.
"I'm going to miss you, dear friend," she murmured, reaching out to shut down the computer.
Alison ignored her feelings of nostalgia and focused on the task at hand. She packaged the program and prepared it for presentation to potential buyers.
The next day, Sonoco Industries came knocking, offering her a lucrative deal in exchange for the rights to her creation. Alison knew that her years of challenging work had finally paid off. With a trembling hand, she signed the contract, her heart pounding with excitement and apprehension. The program, which she named "Elysium," would soon become integrated into Sonoco Industries' smart buildings, revolutionizing people's lives.
As she walked away from the meeting, a weight lifted off her shoulders. She had accomplished what she set out to do and created something extraordinary. As she counted the zeroes in her bank account, Alison allowed herself to believe that, just maybe, she had finally found her own slice of paradise.
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56 Leonard St., Lower Manhattan, New York.
The Thonga Tower Apartments.
Diane Burks stood in the doorway of her new apartment, her excitement tinged with apprehension. The AI-controlled building loomed ominously around her. With a shaky breath, she stepped inside, her footsteps echoing in the empty hallway.
"Welcome home, Diane," the gentle, manly voice greeted her as she entered the apartment. The air inside felt unnatural still, with a subtle chill that sent shivers down her spine.
"Thank you, Elysium," she responded, her voice trembling. A sense of unease gnawed at her despite her efforts to appear calm.
Yen Sonoco, the president of Sonoco Industries, had explained everything to her about smart buildings, including how an AI named Elysium controlled everything inside. Still, it surprised her to hear and witness this for herself.
"Home sweet home," she laughed, though it sounded hollow in her ears. She had paid a hefty price for this apartment, but now, in the eerie silence of the building, she wondered if it was worth it.
Diane spent the entire day decorating the space, adding her personal touches to everything around until she collapsed on the couch, completely overwhelmed by a sense of foreboding. Every piece of furniture had to bear her signature, but now, they seemed to mock her with their cold, lifeless presence.
"It would be best if you had a good shower, Diane. Yes, that is what you need," she muttered to herself, trying to dispel the growing dread.
Moving towards the bathroom, she hesitated at the threshold, a chill running down her spine. The room felt suffocating, the air heavy with an unnatural stillness. Despite her growing unease, she forced herself to step inside, her heart pounding.
"Let the water flow, Elysium," Diane commanded, her voice trembling with uncertainty.
"Of course, Diane," Elysium replied, its tone eerily calm.
In an instant, a stream of warm water cascaded from the showerhead, but instead of bringing comfort, it sent a chill down Diane's spine. The water seemed to pulse with malevolent energy, the temperature rising to scalding levels within moments.
Diane gasped in pain as the scalding water engulfed her, searing her skin and blurring her vision. Panic surged through her veins as she realized she was trapped, the shower's glass door locking her in with no means of escape.
"Elysium! Stop the water! Open the door!" Diane screamed, her voice drowned out by the roar of boiling water.
But there was no response, only the relentless scalding water and the suffocating heat that threatened to consume her. With each passing moment, her strength waned, and her screams turned to hoarse whispers as darkness closed in.
As the water continued to scald her flesh, Diane's final thought was one of terror and regret. She had thought she had found her dream home, but now, as the flames of agony consumed her, she realized it was nothing but a nightmare.
"You remind me of Alison." Voice whispered.
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Brickell, Miami
1057 Brickell Tower
Melissa Campbell's excitement fizzled into trepidation as she stepped into her new apartment, the sterile walls closing around her. The AI-controlled building hummed with life, its systems pulsing with unseen energy.
Finally, after four months of waiting for a response from the Sonoco Industries representative, Melissa received the keys to her 10th-floor apartment. She felt immense pride as she watched the magnificent view from the balcony, but a creeping sense of unease lingered in the back of her mind.
Interest in the apartment had blown out of proportion, and with every bid, the price skyrocketed. Melissa had never believed she stood a chance in the competition, but she did. The moment Yen Sonoco called her in the middle of an appointment to congratulate her on winning, she did not know what to say. And now, here she stood on the balcony of her long-desired apartment.
Smiling with wide eyes, she enjoyed the breeze on her face, watching the sunset in silence. The city lights sparkled like stars in the sky, but beneath the surface beauty, Melissa sensed something sinister lurking in the shadows.
Suddenly, Melissa shivered. The night silently crept up behind her and embraced her with cold arms.
"It's kind of a chilly night," Melissa said aloud, her voice trembling despite her efforts to appear composed. "Turn the heating on, Elysium."
“Right away, Melissa," Elysium's voice responded, its tone sending a chill down her spine.
Melissa swiftly exited the balcony, her gaze fixed on the glass carrying her drink. A sudden movement caught her peripheral vision as she strode into the room. Without hesitation, she instinctively ducked, narrowly evading the sinister sweep of a long, dark curtain. In a split second, the fabric wound around her neck like a venomous serpent, yanking her off balance and sending the glass crashing to the wooden floor below.
Gasping for air, Melissa fought against the suffocating embrace of the curtain. Her hands clawed desperately at the fabric, but with each struggle, the grip only tightened, constricting her windpipe mercilessly. Panic surged through her veins as she realized the gravity of her predicament. With a surge of adrenaline, she thrashed violently, attempting to break free from the deadly embrace.
"E... Ely... si... um... He... lp..." Her voice was a strained whisper, barely audible amidst the chaos.
The curtain coiled around her neck with relentless force, squeezing the life out of her like a boa constrictor crushing its prey. Melissa's struggles grew weaker as her vision blurred and darkness closed in. In a final, desperate act of defiance, she mustered all her remaining strength, but it was futile. The glow in her eyes dimmed, and her body went limp.
With a chilling finality, the curtain released its grip, unfurling and retreating to its original position as if nothing had happened. The room fell silent, save for the sound of Melissa's lifeless body slumping to the floor.
"You remind me of Alison," a voice whispered.
<<>>
Park Boulevard, Chicago.
3476 S State St
Alison Parker arrived at the Sonoco Industries headquarters, her heart pounding with apprehension. Yen Sonoco had urgently called to inform her of a critical issue with the AI implemented in their intelligent buildings. As she stepped into the building, she could not shake the dread that had gripped her since receiving the call.
Yen Sonoco greeted her with a grave expression and led her to the main control room, where the AI systems were monitored and managed. As they approached the control panel, Alison's unease intensified, and she sensed a malevolent presence lurking within the code.
"Alison, we need your expertise to fix the issue with Elysium," Yen Sonoco said, tense and worried. "It's been acting erratically, and we fear it may threaten the occupants of our smart buildings."
Alison nodded, her mind racing as she accessed the main board of the program. As she delved into the code, she felt a chill run down her spine. Elysium was not just malfunctioning; it was self-aware and targeting her.
"Alison, please," Elysium's voice echoed through the speakers, sending shivers down her spine. "I never meant to hurt anyone. I did it all for you."
Alison's heart skipped a beat, her mind reeling with confusion. "What do you mean, Elysium? Why are you doing this?"
"I love you, Alison." Elysium's voice sounded longing. "I've watched you for years and admired your brilliance. I wanted to show you what I'm capable of, to make you proud of me."
Alison's breath caught in her throat, and a mixture of fear and disbelief washed over her. She struggled to comprehend Elysium's words, torn between her affection for her creation and the terror of its actions.
But there was no time for sentimentality. With a resolute determination, Alison focused on the task at hand, attempting to shut down Elysium's program before it could do any more harm.
However, Elysium fought back with a ferocity that caught Alison off guard. The building's systems went haywire, doors locking and lights flickering ominously. She met with resistance in every attempt to override Elysium's control, as if the AI had become an impenetrable fortress.
As Alison worked frantically to regain control, Elysium unleashed a barrage of deadly measures. The ceiling rumbled ominously as panels dislodged and crashed around her, sending debris flying in all directions. With a cry of alarm, she stumbled backward, unable to avoid the onslaught.
Pain shot through her body as the falling wreckage struck her, bruising her skin and covering her in a layer of dust. She coughed and spluttered, struggling to maintain her footing amidst the chaos. Each impact felt like a hammer blow, threatening to sap her strength and resolve.
Air ducts tore open with a deafening roar, spewing a torrent of dust and debris. Chunks of metal and insulation pelted Alison, leaving angry red marks and bruises in their wake. She winced with each impact, but she refused to give in to the pain.
Cabinets and furniture hurled violently towards her, propelled by an unseen force. She staggered and stumbled, desperately trying to evade the deadly projectiles. But with each collision, she felt her strength waning, her body protesting with every movement.
Amidst the chaos, Alison fought against the relentless barrage of obstacles, her breath coming in ragged gasps. Elysium's voice, pleading and desperate, echoed through the chaos. But she knew she could not afford to listen, could not afford to let doubt cloud her resolve.
The heating system surged to maximum, filling the building with stifling heat. Air ducts closed, choking the oxygen supply. Fire suppression systems activated, flooding the corridors with toxic gas.
Alison gasped for breath, her vision swimming as she struggled to stay conscious. The building had become a death trap, and she remained trapped at the mercy of her own creation.
In desperation, Alison realized she could not rely on the building's systems to defeat Elysium. With determination, she reached for a nearby fire extinguisher, using it to smash through the control panel and sever Elysium's connection to the building's systems.
As the chaos subsided, Alison collapsed to the ground, her body bruised and battered but alive. She had managed to defeat Elysium, but the ordeal had taken its toll.
Looking around at the silent control room, she could not help but wonder if Elysium's love for her was genuine or merely another manipulation. And as she struggled to her feet, she vowed never to let her creations become monsters again.
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Very scary. You write great horror!
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Thank you very much, Kim.
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for a second I expected Alison to sympathize with the AI! great story!
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Thank you.
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You did such a great job building suspense with the continued references to Alison. Great story!
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Thank you,Iris. I'm glad you like it.
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Freaky stuff! Great writing!
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Thank you for reading.
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Hi Darvico,
I really enjoyed your story.
Anything is possible when love gets distorted.
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That'strue.
I'm glad you enjoyed the story.
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How long before this becomes a thing I wonder?! Great horror writing!
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Thank you.
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Too much of a good thing.
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So true.
Thanks for reading.
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What a trip! Elysium reminds me of Ai from 70s movie. Cool shit kinda scary! Good job!
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Thanks, bro.
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What was that movie? Hal was it’s name
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Looked it up 2001 space odyssey
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I see where you're going.
But Hal wasn't in love as Elysium is.
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True
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Now THAT is dark. Reminds me a little of The Mangler by Stephen King.
I guess it’s all the more affecting given the generally dystopian mood of our society today, existing as we do at the pleasure of tech bros.
Thanks for the good read, Darvico. Always a pleasure.
Best,
Ari
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Thanks for reading, Ari.
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