Third Row, Seat 12

Written in response to: "Write a story about a coincidence that seems too good to be true."

Contemporary Romance

It started with a missed train.

Doug wasn’t supposed to be in Chicago. He had a job interview in Minneapolis. He had planned it all- fly in, stay with his cousin, interview at 10 a.m., fly back out by dinner. But a late alarm, an Uber cancellation, and a security line from hell turned the whole thing upside down. He missed his flight, then scrambled to book a train to get at least close to Minnesota. That landed him in Chicago overnight, stuck and irritated, with a carry-on bag, no hotel, and no clue. At 3 p.m., he wandered into Union Station, scrolling through discount hotel apps, when he noticed a flyer taped crookedly to a pillar- “Two-for-One Tickets – Tonight Only! Orchestra Hall, 7:30 p.m. Mozart & Mahler.”

Doug wasn’t into classical music. But he was into cheap distractions, and the idea of sitting still for two hours in a place with heating and no decisions to make sounded like a win. He bought a solo ticket anyway — $18 for something fancy-sounding in the third row. Seemed like fate owed him a decent seat.

At 7:28, he found his spot — Row C, Seat 12 — and sat down, grateful for the silence. The auditorium buzzed with soft conversation and rustling programs. A minute later, someone shuffled into the seat beside him.

He turned, out of instinct, to give the courteous nod.

And then froze.

She looked at him. Blinked. Then smiled, slowly, like her brain was catching up to her eyes.

“Doug Marshall?” she asked, tilting her head.

Doug's heart hiccuped.

“No way,” he said. “Megan?”

She laughed — a short, surprised sound. “Holy crap.”

They hadn’t seen each other in fifteen years.

They met in high school, sophomore year, in an elective they both hated- Environmental Science. Sat next to each other for no good reason, talked constantly, passed notes like it was 1998 instead of 2008. She was smart and sarcastic and lived with her aunt because her parents were missionaries in Brazil. He was a solid B-student who made her laugh enough that she looked forward to third period.

They weren’t dating. It was never like that. But they were close, and it mattered. Then her family moved back, and she left for senior year. They promised to keep in touch, but this was before everyone had ten social media accounts, and sometimes promises just dissolve.

Now she was here.

Third row, seat 13.

“I cannot believe this,” Megan said, still grinning. “You look — well, older.”

“You look exactly the same,” Doug said. “Like you got frozen and defrosted just now.”

She rolled her eyes. “That’s a weird compliment, but I’ll take it.”

The lights dimmed. They shut up. Mozart started.

Doug wasn’t expecting to enjoy it. But he did. Maybe it was the orchestra. Maybe it was the coincidence sitting next to him. He kept sneaking glances during intermissions. She looked different. Sharper cheekbones, maybe. But her eyes were the same. Still the kind that made you feel like you’d said something clever, even when you hadn’t. The rest of her was a little sharper too — subtle lines at her eyes, a quieter calm. But the same energy. She tapped her fingers to the music like she knew what was coming next. During intermission, they walked out together to the lobby. The conversation came fast.

She was a pediatric nurse now. Lived in Boston. Visiting her brother in Chicago for the weekend. He was married with twins, and she needed a breather, so she’d bought herself a last-minute ticket to a concert. One ticket. Just one.

Doug told her about his job — tech project manager, currently between gigs, still in Denver, single. He was embarrassed about the missed interview but she didn’t make it feel like a failure, just a weird left turn.

After the concert, they walked out together. The city had gone cold and quiet.

“You want to grab a drink?” she asked.

“God, yes,” Doug said. “Something tells me I’m not sleeping in a hotel tonight.”

They found a dive bar three blocks away, half-empty and warm. Over two drinks and a plate of greasy fries, they unraveled fifteen years of life in pieces. Her med school burnout. His startup that never started. A trip she took to Iceland. His brief engagement that ended six weeks before the wedding. They weren’t trading accomplishments, just stories.

At one point, he asked, “Do you believe in signs?”

She shrugged. “Depends on the day. Why?”

“Because this feels… engineered.”

“Yeah,” she said. “It kind of does.”

He glanced at her. “What are the odds?”

She pulled out her phone. “I’m going to look it up.”

Doug laughed. “What, like a literal probability?”

“Yeah. Why not?”

They tried. Estimated number of seats in the hall. Estimated population of Chicago. Estimated chance of two former classmates choosing the same night, same concert, same row.

They gave up halfway through.

“It’s not just math,” Doug said. “It’s timing.”

“Right,” she agreed. “What if you hadn’t missed that flight?”

“What if you’d decided to stay home?”

“What if I’d gotten a seat in the balcony?”

They sat there for a moment in that quiet space, the kind that opens when two people both think the same thing at the same time but don’t want to say it.

Eventually, Megan looked at her watch. “I should head back. My brother’s place is way out.”

Doug nodded. “Yeah. Me too. I mean — well, to a hotel. Or whatever I find.”

They walked together to the corner. A train rumbled under the street.

“So,” Doug said. “We gonna let this be one of those ‘wow, what a weird story’ moments we tell other people?”

She looked at him for a long second. “What if it’s more than that?”

Doug felt something shift.

“I mean,” she said, “we were kind of good at this back then.”

He grinned. “Yeah. We were.”

She dug in her coat, pulled out a pen, and wrote her number on his hand. “If you don’t text me tomorrow, I will assume you were a hallucination.”

“Same.”

She kissed his cheek, just a quick thing, then turned and walked down the street.

Doug watched her go, his skin buzzing in the cold.

He didn’t sleep well that night — not from the noise, or the couch he found at a hostel, but from thinking.

He texted her the next morning.

She replied ten seconds later.

Three years later, at their wedding, her brother gave a speech.

“She had one ticket,” he said, holding up his glass. “One ticket. Not two. So either someone out there is running the simulation of all simulations — or these two are just meant to be.”

Everyone laughed.

Doug looked over at Megan.

She mouthed, “Third row, seat 12.”

He smiled. Yeah. What were the odds?

Posted Mar 22, 2025
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Frankie Shattock
22:41 Mar 24, 2025

This is is a really good story. I like how it starts, the way you describe the passage and time and distance in Doug's trip. Then the amazing coincidence of meeting. And I love the jump from the text message to "Three years later, at their wedding,...". Very effective!

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Mary Bendickson
20:23 Mar 23, 2025

Such a perfect story for the prompt. Well done.

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