I  love  constructive criticism!!!
I especially enjoyed writing: The Ultimate Reward.....Miracle of  Three Sisters.....Coral Island.....Velvet  Hugs.....Treehouse Stories.....Silent Watcher.....It Is A Future.....I hope you will give a couple of these a read.
 I have words I want to share.  I am a beginner at writing but experienced at a bit life.  I am a realist but delight in bright innocent things.     I hope not to make a fool of myself!   I carve wood And take photos in my spare time.