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Jim LaFleur

Author on Reedsy Prompts since Jan, 2024

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Kyle and the Jingle of Doom

Jim LaFleur

Submitted to Contest #299

There are only three things in this world that can make a man question his will to live: losing his job, living with his mother-in-law, and the jingle for adult diapers playing on loop in his nightmares — I, unfortunately, have all three.Let me introduce myself. I’m Kyle Brenner, formerly known as “The Voice Behind Hot Pockets,” currently known as “Susan’s disappointing son-in-law who can’t even load a dishwasher correctly.” Two months ago, I was sitting in a corner office at MelodyMinds Creative, collecting royalties every time someone humm...

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The Catfood Chronicles

Jim LaFleur

Submitted to Contest #298

If you’ve never spooned lukewarm tuna casserole from a can labeled ‘Feline Fancy: Ocean Dreams,’ then congratulations—you still have your dignity. Mine vacated the premises approximately two years ago, right around the time HR’s perky twentysomething “transition specialist” explained that my thirty-two years of programming experience had become “legacy knowledge” and that the company was “pivoting toward fresh perspectives.”Fresh perspectives, by the way, meant Kyle—a cheerful intern who wore beanies indoors and used phrases like “vibe check...

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The Last Minute

Jim LaFleur

Submitted to Contest #297

The clock on the wall had a dead man’s heartbeat—slow, deliberate, and utterly indifferent to the man walking toward it. Victor Laine felt each tick reverberate through his bones, as if the mechanical hands were plucking at the strings of his remaining moments.“Forward,” commanded the guard to his right, voice muffled behind the silver mask that reflected Victor’s own distorted face—eyes too wide, skin too pale, a stranger wearing his features.The corridor stretched before them, pristine white and humming with that peculiar static that seeme...

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Three Wishes, Minus One

Jim LaFleur

Submitted to Contest #296

They say the road to hell is paved with good intentions; Lena’s was paved with three wishes, the last one granted on a rainy night when she thought she could save humanity.The rain fell in sheets across the windshield, each drop illuminated momentarily by the passing streetlights before being swept away. Lena’s eyes burned from twelve hours behind the wheel, her third consecutive day pulling a double shift. The Uber app chimed—another pickup.“Five more rides,” she whispered, massaging her temples where a headache bloomed like ink in water. “...

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Witness to My Own Funeral

Jim LaFleur

Submitted to Contest #295

The darkness came first, then awareness. Not the gentle awakening from sleep, but a violent snap into consciousness—like a circuit suddenly completing. I existed, suspended in perfect blackness, my mind racing while my body lay still as carved stone. Something was wrong. Terribly wrong. I couldn’t move. Yet I wasn’t suffocating. Instead, I existed in a state of suspended animation, my consciousness trapped in an immobile shell. Voices filtered through the darkness, muffled at first, then gradually clearer. A somber baritone resonated above m...

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In the Silence of Ashes

Jim LaFleur

Submitted to Contest #294

Jakob’s fingers trembled against the dented tin cup, water sloshing perilously close to the rim. The November air carved his lungs raw, bitter with smoke from chimneys that transformed flesh to ash. His worn shoes navigated the mud between barracks, sidestepping puddles that mirrored a colorless sky.At thirteen, Jakob had perfected invisibility. Three years of silence—not by choice but necessity after witnessing his father’s execution—had rendered him a ghost among the living dead that shuffled through the camp. While other boys his age had ...

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Reflections

Jim LaFleur

Submitted to Contest #293

The car hummed beneath him, a mechanical heartbeat counting down the miles. Martin Ellery watched the world stream past his window—a blur of autumn trees and small towns that would soon exist only in memory. The handcuffs bit into his wrists, cold metal against skin that would know no other touch for decades to come. Life without parole. The words still echoed in the hollow chamber of his chest. “Beautiful country,” said the marshal sitting beside him, a man whose name Martin hadn’t bothered to remember. “Shame you won’t be seeing it again.”...

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The Fading

Jim LaFleur

Submitted to Contest #292

Natalie awoke to a world draining of pigment. The crimson sunrise that usually painted her bedroom wall had transmuted into a pale, anemic gray. She blinked, convinced her eyes were playing tricks—perhaps a storm had rolled in overnight, muting the dawn’s usual splendor. Yet when she reached for her phone, its once-vibrant screen glowed only in gradients of ash and charcoal. “What the hell?” she whispered, her voice strange and hollow in the muted space. The vermilion dress she’d laid out for today’s exhibition hung like a ghost on her close...

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The Last Story

Jim LaFleur

Submitted to Contest #291

Mark Holden’s fingers trembled above the ancient Remington typewriter, hovering like pale moths uncertain where to land. The rejection email glowed on his laptop screen—the fifth this month, thirty-second this year. “Thank you for your submission to The Weekly Wordsmith,” the email read. “While your story showed promise, we have selected another entry as this week’s winner.” Promise. Always promise. Never triumph. Mark dragged his palm across three days of stubble and reached for his cold, bitter coffee. Bookshelves bowed under writing manua...

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Steam and Stardust

Jim LaFleur

Submitted to Contest #287

Steam curled from the kettle’s spout, a ghostly ribbon dancing in the dim morning light. Orion Carter traced its path with failing eyes, remembering how he once tracked the trajectories of distant comets with that same careful attention. The familiar ritual of making tea had become a treacherous dance, his fingers seeking the counter’s edge, measuring distances by memory rather than sight. The kettle’s whistle pierced the quiet apartment. He reached for it, muscle memory betraying him as his hand missed the handle and brushed against the sca...

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The Letter He Never Sent

Jim LaFleur

Submitted to Contest #286

Dawn seeped through the library’s arched windows, the light transforming the silence into something sacred. Samuel traced the leather spine beneath his weathered fingers, each crack and imperfection as familiar as the lines on his own palm. The gilt letters caught the light, flaring like captured fire, while shadows from the iron shelving cast prison-bar patterns across the floor. In twenty-three years of cataloging books, he had never felt time’s presence so keenly, had never heard the tick of the wall clock echo with such merciless precisi...

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Glass Tombs and Digital Ghosts

Jim LaFleur

Submitted to Contest #285

In the dying light of December 31st, 1999, Sarah Morgan stood before her basement shelves, counting cans of preserved peaches for the seventh time that day. The amber-hued fruit floated in glass tombs, distorted and strange in the fluorescent light that hummed overhead like an electric dirge. Her fingers, pale and trembling, traced the dates she’d meticulously written on each label – expiration dates that might outlive civilization itself. The basement air hung thick with the musty breath of concrete and fear. Stacked against the walls, jugs...

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The Y2K Scare

Jim LaFleur

Submitted to Contest #285

[Frank’s living room, 11:45 PM, December 31, 1999] “Gary, pick up, you magnificent bastard!” The plastic receiver digs into my ear like a cheap headset at a telemarketing firm. My living room looks like a refugee camp designed by a doomsday prepper with a serious bean addiction. Towers of pork and beans wobble precariously, threatening to topple like a Jenga tower built by a toddler. D-cell batteries scatter across the coffee table like metallic confetti, and duct tape creeps up the walls like silver kudzu. The emergency radio I bought at Ra...

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The Enchanted Reflection

Jim LaFleur

Submitted to Contest #284

The boutique hummed with the frenetic energy of post-Christmas sales. Shoppers jostled for space, arms laden with discounted luxury goods, their voices blending into a discordant symphony of complaints and excitement. Sarah Jensen stood behind the counter, her forced smile threatening to crack under the weight of another 12-hour shift. Her reflection in the glass display case stared back at her—a pale, tired face framed by hair that refused to cooperate despite the expensive products she used. “Miss! Excuse me, miss!” a sharp voice cut throu...

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The Last Caroler

Jim LaFleur

Submitted to Contest #283

Thomas Green shuffled through the snow-laden streets on Christmas Eve, his weathered hands clutching a worn songbook. Each gust of wind seemed to whisper memories of better days, when his voice rang strong and clear through these very streets. Now, at seventy-eight, his once-resonant baritone had faded to a trembling whisper, but his determination to continue his decades-long tradition of caroling remained unshaken. The town had changed. Where festive lights once turned night into day, darkness now reigned. Thomas adjusted his threadbare sca...

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