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Submitted to Contest #81
“That’s too much for something as plain as this. $180 is the final amount”, argued Serena with the shop owner and hopped in to the taxi. She was impatiently checking the frantic packing of her gift for Liam while he was looking at his wrist watch, a bit skeptical about her arrival. “We’re here miss”, said the cab driver. It was a calm, star-studded sky compl opposite to their hearts. As Liam finished his 3rd glass of wine he thought to himself that he ought to go out and wait for her. Just when he got up there she was right in front of him. ...
This is my first time writing something so I would expect some critique. Be blunt but not mean. Thank you people.
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