Ella Smith

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“When the Night Swallowed the Sun” by Ella Smith

Submitted to Contest #245

The sun goddess was beautiful and bright. She outshone the other gods with ease, and the people admired her. They often spoke of her beauty and gave her gifts in appreciation for the light she brought to them, which caused the other gods to become jealous of her. Some of the gods took out their envy in petty ways. The god of water would block her light with rain clouds, and the god of night chased her out of the sky. Others used her light to their advantage, like the moon goddess who used the sun's light to make herself brighter. But no...

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