“I like to write, I am aware though that I make a few mistakes, and sometimes I rush my work, and I don’t make sense, AND the reason for that is because of the damage I suffered to my brain ‘way back’ in 1993, when I was 24 years old!
I wasn’t expected to survive, or live beyond my early forties, but I have recently enjoyed my 57th birthday!
I had to learn again how to read and write, but seeing my mistakes frustrates me so much that I feel embarrassed sometimes!
Writing is a good way for me to keep my brain active, and previously being both a graphic designer, and then a goldsmith and jewellery designer & maker are jobs that I can’t do successfully anymore, and my writing isn’t doing much better!
“So, please can I have some more feedback from fellow writers, with your thoughts, suggestions (“and please don’t reply with “give up mate”!) that could help me improve my writing?
Thank you, and take care, yours faithfully Andrew.