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Creative Nonfiction Drama Inspirational

Fishing is not about catching fish, nor is it about the fishing equipment used, nor the type of sharp hooks, weapons and bait used to trick fish or the thick and strong fishing line used for fishing. However, this is something that must be done in order to fulfill the lives of fishing fishermen. For whatever reason, the target fish and their friends are found in all waters, both fresh water and sea water, where they are used.


It is clear that the inhabitants of fish and ponds in the ocean are very happy if they are fished with conscience and patience, especially for anglers and fishermen in tricking the fish. Fish will always be sincere and happy towards every human who hooks them even though they are unknowingly being tricked slowly instead of being hurt by changing the color, sense of creativity and intention of the water where they live.


Fishermen rely on ropes, hooks and nets to get their catch, they rely on the tides of sea water to anchor at night while fishermen find it difficult to anchor their boats and cannot get to land. They often work at night because it is the biggest wave in their lives which is an ideal outcome for their family life


Tides and night determine the place where the two celestial bodies collide and are witnessed by the Sun on the other side of the world. The sun could only peek at the event. Poets and fishermen become actors who embody God's creation.


There is hope in the sketch of the fishermen's skill in catching fish, even though their lives are increasingly marginalized from civilization and are starting to be marginalized because they do not have education or stability, nature always looks uncertain, sometimes shady, sometimes turbulent. Similar to the desires of fishermen who always experience ups and downs in earning a living


The engine on the boat can no longer be used because it has expired from what his father left behind. There is hope in the causal sketch of a qualified fisherman. Nature always seems to be uncertain, sometimes shady, sometimes turbulent, similar to the desires of fishermen who always go up and down in search of a living, the engine on the boat can no longer be used because it is already very old.


Fishing nets remain loyal even though they are sometimes torn due to age or being carried on coral rocks, but this does not reduce the feeling of continuing to fish for the survival of him and his family. The boat he rowed never complained, fish are also willing and willing to be netted and fished for the survival of their lives and their families. The marine biota obtained seemed willing and sincere because they knew their function.


The calm blue sea is as calm as the feelings of a child who wants to dedicate himself to his late father and mother and his surviving siblings who always support his family. A steady soul is used to facing storms. Abundant catches are a manifestation of humans who are always grateful and protect nature, in harmony with the towering mountains in the range of hundreds of islands presented in nature, the same way to the depth of the trough like a fisherman's dream.


For example, Bagaskara, the son of a fisherman who now has to support his mother and younger siblings. He is only 15 years old. The harshness of nature has made him strong and humble, abundant catches and the difficulty of getting fuel for fishing have become his daily life. The waves crashing, the wind and the storm that hit him were as if he had passed through his old age.


His father had to die because he was suffering from a disease for which there was no cure. Economic difficulties prevented him from seeking treatment because he did not have health insurance or insurance, either government or private. Bagas was forged by his father armed with excellent maritime knowledge. Their family are real fishermen


Fishing nets remain faithful even though frequent tornadoes occur. The boat he rowed never complained when the engine couldn't be used because it often broke down. Fish are also willing and willing to be netted and fished for the survival of themselves and their families. The marine biota obtained seemed willing and willing because they knew their function.


Fish and deep sea inhabitants are always silent and moving, unlike marine mammal inhabitants who are always joking and humming happily as if there is never a problem. That's how whales and dolphins always sing happily with their distinctive shrill voices and always cheerful demeanor. Likewise, the waves are angry with the sea dwellers which always cheat on the coral. Right now he does not even have the heart to slap the waves or curse them with his venomous chatter because the fact is that He never laments his fate, no matter how hard life at sea hits him, he still exists and lives with gratitude.


He had to give up his education for the sake of a decent living for his family. Harapan Island in the Thousand Islands, Jakarta is his transit home and the sea is his main home. His mother was forced to let him go because of the bond between his little children who were supposed to be Bagas' younger siblings. He was forced to give in for the success of his younger siblings' education


The island is 28 nautical miles from the center of the country's capital "Jakarta" which will no longer be used for environmental, political or whatever reasons that the fishermen clearly never care about. Even though the remains of colonialism are still visible, it can be seen that this is the outermost island close to the capital of this country.


"Harapan" or “hope” in English Word is being the name of this island is a hiding place for the nation's warriors to escape in the past from the pursuit of my nation's invaders in the past and is truly a hope for the fishermen who inhabit it.


The sea is blue and calm, as calm as the feelings of a small child who always supports his mother and younger siblings. A steady spirit is used to being hit by storms. Abundant catches are a manifestation of humans who are always grateful and protect nature. In sync with the towering mountains on the edge of the island which are clearly visible when the weather is good, in sync with the depth of the trough like the invisible dream of fishermen.


This island is indeed a tourist destination for both local and foreign tourists. It looks very exotic and the island's residents look well-established from the outside, but not the Bagas family. His family was hit by waves and abrasion of material until it became small white sand that dotted the vast waters of Jakarta. It's sad, but that's the life that must be lived.


April 24, 2024 02:21

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02:03 Apr 29, 2024

I think this story is very interesting and inspires everyone to always fight even though they are hit by a serious disaster. I really like the lives of the fishermen in the story. Where he struggled to earn a living for his family even though it was hit by rain and storms, he continued to fight with his net and boat for his family. Thank you for making this short story, your work is very beautiful🤩

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Wisnu 10 Brt 2
02:03 Apr 29, 2024

The short story written by Mr. Ayatullah Nurjati has very good characteristics. As in paragraph one which tells the meaning of fishing as a livelihood for fishermen so they can support their families. This short story also tells about the reliability of fishermen in catching fish even though this activity has very big risk

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Rival Arrasyid
02:03 Apr 29, 2024

This is a very good short story, packaged with clear explanations and unique enough to make me feel what the fishermen feel. This story also teaches readers to always be grateful for what god has given. A young fisherman, Bagaskara, has to support his family even though his father has died. Even though they live on an island that looks established from the outside, their family conditions are far from established.

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Saskia Wulandari
01:58 Apr 29, 2024

I think this story is very interesting and good because it tells about the life of a fishing community who fights for life for their family and how a father struggles to support his children and wife until it takes his life, as well as the story of a son who replaces his father's role as fisherman and backbone. his family to support his mother and younger siblings by giving up his education for a more decent life in the center of the capital city.

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Cut Mutiara
01:58 Apr 29, 2024

I have read the short story, I think the short story is very good, with an impressive and telling story. For example, about Bagaskara, the son of a fisherman who now has to support his mother and younger siblings. He is only 15 years old. The harshness of nature made him strong and humble, because his father had to die because he was suffering from a disease for which there was no cure. Economic difficulties prevented him from seeking treatment because he did not have health insurance or insurance, either government or private.

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Ayudya Zulayka
01:55 Apr 29, 2024

This story includes a description story. Synopsis of this story is a child named Bagaskara, a fisherman child who is now supporting his mother and sister. He is only 15 years old. His father died of a disease that had no cure that made him strong and humble. From this story, it can be concluded that you never regret fate, no matter how hard the problem is happening, must still exist and live with gratitude.

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01:55 Apr 29, 2024

this short story is very extraordinary and full of inspiration and attracts people's attention to read it, this short story inspires people to always struggle even if they are hit by a disaster and this short story tells the struggle of a father to meet the needs of his children and family and always be grateful for the situation. i also like the attitude of the character who is always grateful.

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Alvina Athasyah
01:55 Apr 29, 2024

the story tells that life must be filled with gratitude, one example is Bagaskara who struggled to become a fisherman to support his mother and younger siblings, this story can motivate us to continue to be grateful in any circumstances. Apart from that, every life has many struggles. so that in the future we can help the people closest to us

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Zidan Saputra
01:55 Apr 29, 2024

This short story is very easy to understand and understand, this short story is very good for the community and fishermen, this short story teaches us not to give up easily and always be grateful, this short story is very creative

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01:53 Apr 29, 2024

I really like your short story, your short story is very extraordinary and inspiring, what inspires me is that fishing is not about catching fish, nor about the fishing equipment used, nor the types of sharp hooks, weapons and bait used to trick the fish. , or thick, strong fishing line used for fishing. But this must be done.

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Resi Artika
01:53 Apr 29, 2024

this story is very good and really motivates those of us who are less than grateful because there are still many people out there who have not been fortunate in economic matters 🥰🥰, and teaches us to always be grateful for what we get and that a father also works hard to provide for his family and a child who helps him for the family, he is still small but has helped his parents work to support the family.

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01:50 Apr 29, 2024

This short story is very useful for the community and servants, even though the waves hit many times but they remain consistent, this short story teaches us to always be grateful and never give up, this short story is very creative and easy to understand

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Ardi Ansyah Ardi
01:48 Apr 29, 2024

In my opinion, this short story is very good and interesting to attract people's interest in reading it, because it tells about the skill of fishermen in catching fish, even though their lives are increasingly marginalized from civilization and are starting to be marginalized because they are unable to catch fish. no education or stability, nature always seems uncertain, sometimes shady, sometimes turbulent

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Rasya Putra
01:47 Apr 29, 2024

I really like this story because this story describes the journey of a fisherman who was very memorable in his time but after a while the fisherman is no longer memorable because he doesn't care about politics I also really like the attitude of the character who is always grateful, this story is very interesting because it uses a very beautiful and interesting word even though the word is very beautiful but very easy to understand, You are very wise in making short stories.

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Alfatwa Abhinawa
01:45 Apr 29, 2024

I think the story is very good and interesting to read and attracts people's attention to read it, because this is an inspiring story that tells about fishermen who work to earn a living. Fishermen often work at night because it is the biggest wave in fishermen's lives and is an ideal result for them. depicts a city that was very beautiful in its time but is no longer beautiful because the fishermen don't care about politics and this story motivates us to become more grateful humans. You have an extraordinary talent for writing short stor...

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Karonalin Alin
03:56 Apr 24, 2024

This story is very interesting and inspiring because this story tells of the struggle of a father who works as a fisherman to be able to meet the needs of his children and family, never give up in carrying out his work, and always be grateful in facing various circumstances.

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Ayu Maulia Sari
03:52 Apr 24, 2024

This short story is very useful for the community, especially the servants who patiently catch fish in the sea despite the turbulent waves, this short story also teaches us to always be grateful for the blessings given, this short story is very interesting to read because the servants are very creative in catching fish.

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Sar Ah
03:47 Apr 24, 2024

I think the story is very good and very interesting to read and attracts people's attention to reading it 😻🤩

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Sar Ah
03:46 Apr 24, 2024

I think the story is very good and very interesting to read and attracts people's attention to reading it 🤩😻

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M.Samsul Bachri
03:45 Apr 24, 2024

I think this story is very exciting and fun about someone who is fishing I hope this story can be a lesson for us

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