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Creative Nonfiction Drama Inspirational

Fishing is not about catching fish, nor is it about the fishing equipment used, nor the type of sharp hooks, weapons and bait used to trick fish or the thick and strong fishing line used for fishing. However, this is something that must be done in order to fulfill the lives of fishing fishermen. For whatever reason, the target fish and their friends are found in all waters, both fresh water and sea water, where they are used.


It is clear that the inhabitants of fish and ponds in the ocean are very happy if they are fished with conscience and patience, especially for anglers and fishermen in tricking the fish. Fish will always be sincere and happy towards every human who hooks them even though they are unknowingly being tricked slowly instead of being hurt by changing the color, sense of creativity and intention of the water where they live.


Fishermen rely on ropes, hooks and nets to get their catch, they rely on the tides of sea water to anchor at night while fishermen find it difficult to anchor their boats and cannot get to land. They often work at night because it is the biggest wave in their lives which is an ideal outcome for their family life


Tides and night determine the place where the two celestial bodies collide and are witnessed by the Sun on the other side of the world. The sun could only peek at the event. Poets and fishermen become actors who embody God's creation.


There is hope in the sketch of the fishermen's skill in catching fish, even though their lives are increasingly marginalized from civilization and are starting to be marginalized because they do not have education or stability, nature always looks uncertain, sometimes shady, sometimes turbulent. Similar to the desires of fishermen who always experience ups and downs in earning a living


The engine on the boat can no longer be used because it has expired from what his father left behind. There is hope in the causal sketch of a qualified fisherman. Nature always seems to be uncertain, sometimes shady, sometimes turbulent, similar to the desires of fishermen who always go up and down in search of a living, the engine on the boat can no longer be used because it is already very old.


Fishing nets remain loyal even though they are sometimes torn due to age or being carried on coral rocks, but this does not reduce the feeling of continuing to fish for the survival of him and his family. The boat he rowed never complained, fish are also willing and willing to be netted and fished for the survival of their lives and their families. The marine biota obtained seemed willing and sincere because they knew their function.


The calm blue sea is as calm as the feelings of a child who wants to dedicate himself to his late father and mother and his surviving siblings who always support his family. A steady soul is used to facing storms. Abundant catches are a manifestation of humans who are always grateful and protect nature, in harmony with the towering mountains in the range of hundreds of islands presented in nature, the same way to the depth of the trough like a fisherman's dream.


For example, Bagaskara, the son of a fisherman who now has to support his mother and younger siblings. He is only 15 years old. The harshness of nature has made him strong and humble, abundant catches and the difficulty of getting fuel for fishing have become his daily life. The waves crashing, the wind and the storm that hit him were as if he had passed through his old age.


His father had to die because he was suffering from a disease for which there was no cure. Economic difficulties prevented him from seeking treatment because he did not have health insurance or insurance, either government or private. Bagas was forged by his father armed with excellent maritime knowledge. Their family are real fishermen


Fishing nets remain faithful even though frequent tornadoes occur. The boat he rowed never complained when the engine couldn't be used because it often broke down. Fish are also willing and willing to be netted and fished for the survival of themselves and their families. The marine biota obtained seemed willing and willing because they knew their function.


Fish and deep sea inhabitants are always silent and moving, unlike marine mammal inhabitants who are always joking and humming happily as if there is never a problem. That's how whales and dolphins always sing happily with their distinctive shrill voices and always cheerful demeanor. Likewise, the waves are angry with the sea dwellers which always cheat on the coral. Right now he does not even have the heart to slap the waves or curse them with his venomous chatter because the fact is that He never laments his fate, no matter how hard life at sea hits him, he still exists and lives with gratitude.


He had to give up his education for the sake of a decent living for his family. Harapan Island in the Thousand Islands, Jakarta is his transit home and the sea is his main home. His mother was forced to let him go because of the bond between his little children who were supposed to be Bagas' younger siblings. He was forced to give in for the success of his younger siblings' education


The island is 28 nautical miles from the center of the country's capital "Jakarta" which will no longer be used for environmental, political or whatever reasons that the fishermen clearly never care about. Even though the remains of colonialism are still visible, it can be seen that this is the outermost island close to the capital of this country.


"Harapan" or “hope” in English Word is being the name of this island is a hiding place for the nation's warriors to escape in the past from the pursuit of my nation's invaders in the past and is truly a hope for the fishermen who inhabit it.


The sea is blue and calm, as calm as the feelings of a small child who always supports his mother and younger siblings. A steady spirit is used to being hit by storms. Abundant catches are a manifestation of humans who are always grateful and protect nature. In sync with the towering mountains on the edge of the island which are clearly visible when the weather is good, in sync with the depth of the trough like the invisible dream of fishermen.


This island is indeed a tourist destination for both local and foreign tourists. It looks very exotic and the island's residents look well-established from the outside, but not the Bagas family. His family was hit by waves and abrasion of material until it became small white sand that dotted the vast waters of Jakarta. It's sad, but that's the life that must be lived.


April 24, 2024 02:21

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Alya Syafitri
02:29 Apr 29, 2024

the story is a story description, the synopsis of this story is a child named Bagaskara, a fisherman's son who was forced to give up his education for the sake of a decent living for his family. He was 15 years old but his father died due to a disease for which there was no cure. Economic difficulties prevented him from seeking treatment because he did not have insurance.

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Alya Syafitri
02:29 Apr 29, 2024

the story is a story description, the synopsis of this story is a child named Bagaskara, a fisherman's son who was forced to give up his education for the sake of a decent living for his family. He was 15 years old but his father died due to a disease for which there was no cure. Economic difficulties prevented him from seeking treatment because he did not have insurance.

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Alya Syafitri
02:29 Apr 29, 2024

the story is a story description, the synopsis of this story is a child named Bagaskara, a fisherman's son who was forced to give up his education for the sake of a decent living for his family. He was 15 years old but his father died due to a disease for which there was no cure. Economic difficulties prevented him from seeking treatment because he did not have insurance.

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02:17 Apr 29, 2024

A very inspiring story for children who lack a sense of gratitude for family economic problems. We must follow Bagaskara's example, he had to replace his father to be the backbone for his mother and sister as a fisherman, because his father had died due to a disease that had no cure until now. he had to give up his education for a more decent life in the center of the capital city. Even though Bagas is 15 years old, his enthusiasm is very high to fulfill his daily needs, even though he has to feel the fatigue of being a fisherman which he sh...

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02:15 Apr 29, 2024

I really like this text description, because it has a good story. Synopsis of this story is a child named Bagaskara, a fisherman child who is now supporting his mother and sister. He is only 15 years old. His father died of a disease that had no cure that made him strong and humble. From this story, it can be concluded that you never regret fate, no matter how hard the problem is happening, must still exist and live with gratitude.

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02:13 Apr 29, 2024

I am very interested in this story, I think this short story is very good, it tells the story of a fisherman who works not just for fun but so he can support his family.

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Ar Rasyid 4
02:12 Apr 29, 2024

I think this story is very good and interesting for everyone to read, because this story has meaning and meaning that is probably easily understood by everyone, which tells the story of a fisherman who works not just for fun but to meet the needs of his family, even though the waves are frequent. hit his boat he remained consistent with the work. This short story is very exciting

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Sadad Hibatullah
02:12 Apr 29, 2024

This story contains a deep meaning, namely the story of a father who works as a fisherman to be able to meet the needs of his children and family. This story teaches us to keep fighting and never give up even though we are in trouble, I really like the life of the fishermen in the story. where he struggled to earn a living for his family even though it was hit by rain and storms, he continued to fight with his net and boat to for his family until the end of his life. Until finally his 15 year old son, Bagaskara, continued his father's strugg...

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Arsa Aditya
02:11 Apr 29, 2024

I think this short story is a non-fiction story that is quite creative and inspires someone from the life journey of a fisherman's child named Bagaskara who now has to support his mother and younger siblings. because his father died suffering from a disease for which there is no cure. Economic difficulties prevent him from seeking treatment because he does not have health insurance or other insurance. Bagas is only 15 years old. with a situation like this, it doesn't make Bagas discouraged because Bagas was forged by his father armed with ma...

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02:10 Apr 29, 2024

I think this story is very interesting and good to read, because this story tells about the journey of a fisherman who was very memorable in his time. This story inspires people to always fight even though they are hit by serious disasters and try to earn a living and fight for their families.

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Hafsah Bachtiar
02:09 Apr 29, 2024

a fisherman who likes fishing at night to support his family. Sad fishermen only rely on old ropes, hooks and nets to get their catch. Fish are also willing to be caught in nets and fished for the survival of their families. The fishermen provided marine knowledge for their successors. A boy named Bagaskara was a very difficult fisherman. A 15 year old boy has to fight his sister. His father had to die because he was suffering from measuring disease. The Bagaskara family, whose economy is very difficult, is hampered by seeking treatm...

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Aida Meilani
02:09 Apr 29, 2024

I think this story is very good, an inspiring story that tells about fishermen who work to earn a living, then a child who gives up his education to support his family and brother because his father died Harapan Island was a beautiful island in its time but now it is no longer beautiful because the fishermen don't care about politics and this story motivates us to be more grateful human beings.

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Diansapitri J.m
02:09 Apr 29, 2024

This story is very good and interesting, this story tells of a father who worked as a fisherman to support his family and also tells of Bagaskara, a fisherman's son who now has to support his mother and younger siblings, his father had to die because he was suffering from an illness. Economic difficulties prevented him from seeking treatment. .Bagas was forged by his father armed with excellent maritime knowledge. because of the fact that he never regretted his fate, no matter how hard life at sea hit him, he still existed and lived with gra...

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02:09 Apr 29, 2024

I really like this text description, because it has a good story. Synopsis of this story is a child named Bagaskara, a fisherman child who is now supporting his mother and sister. He is only 15 years old. His father died of a disease that had no cure that made him strong and humble. From this story, it can be concluded that you never regret fate, no matter how hard the problem is happening, must still exist and live with gratitude.

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Gia Chiragia
02:09 Apr 29, 2024

The story is very interesting😻. After I read this story, I felt that I had not been grateful all this time. because, this story tells the story of a 15 year old teenager who gave up his education to support the family. This story teaches us to always be grateful whatever the circumstances, of course it is very motivating for readers and very good for readers to read teenager👍🏻

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02:09 Apr 29, 2024

I really like this text description, because it has a good story. Synopsis of this story is a child named Bagaskara, a fisherman child who is now supporting his mother and sister. He is only 15 years old. His father died of a disease that had no cure that made him strong and humble. From this story, it can be concluded that you never regret fate, no matter how hard the problem is happening, must still exist and live with gratitude.

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Fazrul Mubarak
02:08 Apr 29, 2024

A good descriptive short story, telling the story of a child named Bagaskara who has a profession as a fisherman. His father left him forever because of a disease for which there was no cure. Supporting his mother and younger siblings is Bagaskara's main priority, he is willing to give up his education to meet his needs. His story is a reminder and motivation for us to always be grateful for what we have, to fight with all our strength to achieve our goals.

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Aliya Kinasih
02:07 Apr 29, 2024

Synopsis of this story Fishing must be done to support fishermen. They often work at night because this is the biggest wave of their lives which is an ideal outcome for their family life. Bagaskara, the son of a fisherman who now has to support his mother and younger siblings. He is only 15 years old. The harshness of nature has made him strong and humble, abundant catches and the difficulty of getting fuel for fishing have become his daily life. His father had to die because he was suffering from a disease for which there was no cure. Ec...

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Keysya Putry
02:05 Apr 29, 2024

This story is very good and interesting I really like it, starting from the way of writing and the placement of words that are very precise, this story makes me realize that there are people who are not as lucky as me and I have to learn like how to be grateful. This story tells about a child named Bagaskara struggling and slaving to support his mother and sister, to meet his daily needs he works as a fisherman. He replaced his father who worked as a fisherman too, but his father had died due to illness. Even though he is still relatively yo...

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02:04 Apr 29, 2024

I think this story is a very good story, this story tells about fishermen who work hard to earn a living, fishermen often work at night because this is the biggest wave in their lives which is the ideal result for their family's life. He was forced to give up education for the sake of a decent living for his family.Pulau Harapan describes a city that was very beautiful in its time but is no longer beautiful now because the fishermen don't care about politics and this story motivates us to become more grateful human beings.

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