Submitted to: Contest #320

"Out of the Woods"

Written in response to: "Write a story that includes (or is inspired by) the phrase "Out of the woods.”"

Bedtime Christian Inspirational

"Out of the Woods"

Michael had always been the dependable one. The one who showed up early, stayed late, and never asked for much. He was the friend who listened more than he spoke, the employee who never questioned orders, the son who followed the path laid out for him. On the surface, it looked like stability. But inside, it felt like suffocation.

He lived in a small apartment in a city that never felt like home. His job in corporate logistics paid the bills but drained his spirit. His social circle was a patchwork of people who liked the version of him that never made waves. And every morning, he woke up with a quiet ache, a longing for something more, something real.

The woods, as he came to call them, weren’t literal. They were the emotional thickets he wandered through daily. Doubt, fear, guilt, and the weight of expectations formed a canopy that blocked out the light. He didn’t know how he got there, only that he couldn’t find the way out.

Then came the breaking point.

It was a rainy Thursday. Michael had just returned from dinner with his longtime friend, Aaron. The evening had been filled with subtle jabs and backhanded compliments, the kind of conversation that left him questioning his worth. As he sat on his couch, soaked from the walk home, he stared at the ceiling and whispered, “What if I left the woods?”

It was the first time he allowed himself to imagine a life beyond the fog.

The next morning, he made a list. Not of chores or errands, but of truths.

I am allowed to grow.

I am allowed to leave.

I am allowed to choose myself.

That list became his compass.

He started small. He unfollowed people on social media who made him feel inadequate. He stopped replying to texts that drained him. He began journaling just a few lines each day, but enough to hear his own voice again. He signed up for a weekend writing workshop, something he’d always wanted to do but never prioritized.

The workshop was held in a cozy bookstore tucked between two cafés. The instructor, a woman named Lila, had a warmth that made everyone feel seen. On the second day, she asked the group to write about a moment that changed them. Michael hesitated, then wrote about the night he whispered to the ceiling. When he read it aloud, the room was silent. Then Lila said, “That’s the beginning of something powerful.”

It was the first time someone validated his inner world.

Encouraged, Michael began to write more. Stories, reflections, poems. He started sharing them anonymously online, and to his surprise, people responded. They resonated. They thanked him. It was like opening a window in a room he didn’t know was stuffy.

But growth isn’t linear.

There were setbacks. He missed the comfort of old routines, even the ones that hurt him. He had moments of loneliness, questioning whether he had made a mistake. One night, he received a message from Aaron: “You’ve changed. Not in a good way.” It stung. But instead of spiraling, Michael replied: “I’ve changed in the way I needed to.”

That reply marked a shift. He wasn’t just reacting, he was choosing.

He decided to move. Not just apartments, but cities. He picked Asheville, North Carolina, a place known for its mountains, art, and slower pace. He didn’t have a job lined up, but he had savings and a sense of purpose. The move was terrifying, but exhilarating.

His new apartment was modest but filled with light. He painted the walls a soft green, bought secondhand furniture, and hung his own writing on the fridge. He found a part-time job at a local bookstore and spent his evenings walking trails, attending open mics, and writing.

One afternoon, while hiking a trail called Bent Creek, he reached a clearing. The sun filtered through the trees, casting golden light on the path ahead. He sat on a rock and breathed deeply. For the first time in years, he felt present. Whole. Alive.

He pulled out his journal and wrote: “I am not responsible for anyone’s comfort at the cost of my own peace.”

That became his mantra.

In Asheville, he met people who saw him not the version he performed, but the person he was becoming. He formed friendships rooted in authenticity. He joined a writing circle that met every Thursday, where they shared stories and encouraged each other. He even began mentoring a teenager named Caleb, who reminded him of himself, quiet, creative, and unsure.

Through Caleb, Michael saw the power of being seen. He told him, “You don’t have to be anyone but yourself. And if people can’t see you, that’s not your fault.” Caleb nodded, and Michael saw a flicker of hope in his eyes.

Months passed. Seasons changed. Michael’s life didn’t become perfect, but it became his.

He published a collection of essays titled “Out of the Woods.” It was raw, honest, and deeply personal. He didn’t expect much, but the book found its way into the hands that needed it. Emails poured in from readers who felt understood, inspired, and encouraged.

One message stood out. It was from a woman named Grace: “Your words helped me leave a relationship I thought I couldn’t survive without. Thank you for reminding me that I deserve peace.”

Michael cried when he read it. Not out of sadness, but gratitude. His journey had become a map for others.

He realized that leaving the woods wasn’t just about escape; it was about emergence. About stepping into light, into truth, into self.

The lesson he learned was simple but profound:

Comfort isn’t always safe.

Familiarity isn’t always healthy.

Growth requires discomfort.

Clarity demands distance.

Purpose thrives in truth.

Michael didn’t just find a new level in life. He found himself.

And the woods? They’re still there. But now, he knows the way out. And more importantly, he knows he never has to go back.

Posted Sep 15, 2025
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Lady Senie
00:36 Oct 03, 2025

What an amazing story! It's crazy how hard choosing yourself can be. The guilt, the shame., the weight of expectations... I'm glad your protagonist was able to find his peace, no matter the cost.

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MJ Haskins
11:55 Sep 29, 2025

Clarity demands distance. 🙏🏽 Thank you!

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