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Funny Gay Fantasy

Fourth part of My Mistake! Enjoy!



I’m nervous. So, so nervous. This is dangerous.

My room is dark. I can’t even see my hand in front of me. Not that it matters that much. I mean, there isn’t much to do in my room anyway. 

Finally, the door opens. I can see someone slide inside, before the door closes behind them.

“Blake?” It’s Will. “Are you in here?”

“Where else would I be?”

I can hear him sigh. “Yeah, stupid question, sorry.”

“Are you really going to get me out of here?” I ask him.

He’s moving around, probably trying to find me. “I’m going to try.”

“Why?” 

His foot hits mine, and after a second, I feel his hand on my face. 

“Sorry.” He mutters. His hand moves down to my leg, looking for the chain. 

“Y’know, you could’ve brought a flashlight with you.” I say. 

He ignores me. I hear the chain jingle, but he pauses.

“You aren’t going to kill me, right?” He asks.

I sigh heavily. “No, Will.”

“Are you sure? ‘Cause-”

“I don’t want to kill you. I’m done killing people I love.” 

I definitely didn’t mean to say that. 

He coughs. “Love?”

“Just get me out of here.” I mutter, my face warm.

The chain shakes, then drops off of my ankle. I stand up, grinning.

“Thank you, thank you, thank you!” I whisper, reaching for him. “Can we go now?”

I catch his hand. “Not yet. The guards will finish their shifts soon.”

“Do you have a watch?” I gasp, feeling cold metal on his wrist. “What time is it? How long have I been here?”

“It’s almost ten. You’ve been here about four months.” 

Really? It seemed like so much longer. “Okay. Thanks.”

“Yeah.” 

We’re quiet for a second. We haven’t had an actual conversation in a while. I usually do all the talking. 

“Hey, you didn’t answer my question earlier.” I say. “Why are you helping me escape?”

“I don’t want you to have to stay here.”

“Okay...why?”

“Because you shouldn’t be here.”

“That’s not a good reason for you to risk this yourself.”

He huffs. “You’re annoying me.”

“Can’t you just tell me?”

“I’m helping you escape because I like you.” He hisses. “A lot. Okay? Is that a good answer?”

I can’t help grinning. “You like me? How much?”

“God, do you ever stop talking?”

“No, not really. I-”

He kisses me. 

Actually, he kisses the bridge of my nose. It’s too dark to see each other, so he must have thought my lips were somewhere else.

My lip quivers with suppressed laughter. “D-did you j-just-”

“Blake, I swear-”

I double over, slapping a hand over my mouth. I haven’t laughed in forever. 

“Why do I try with you?” He mutters. “Are you done?”

I nod, then remember he can’t see me. “Yes.”

“We aren’t talking about this again.”

I snort. “You might not, but I definitely will be.”

“Whatever.” He mutters. “Let’s go.”

He opens the door, and looks out into the hallway.

YOU’RE STUPID FOR TRUSTING HIM.

“Shut up.” I mutter.

“Hmm?”

I shake my head. “Not you, the voice.”

“Oh. Come on.”

We go into the hallway. I blink from the bright lights, then follow Will. The hallway is empty. There are three other doors, but that’s it. Each door has a complicated looking lock.

“Blake, we have to hurry.” Will says. “They know everything that happens here, but I don’t think they’ll expect this.”

I nod, and we start down the hallway. 

When we almost reach the other side, I hear footsteps behind us.

“Stop!” Someone shouts.  

Will turns around, and curses. “Keep going. Don’t turn around.”

“What? I don’t know where-”

“There’s a window at the end of the staircase. I’ll meet you there.”

I decide not to question it. I run down the hallway. I look back when I hear shouting. 

My eyes widen. Will is surrounded by a wall of water. It slams into the guards, pushing them back. He glances back at me. 

“GO!” He yells.

GO, YOU IDIOT!

Okay, okay, I’m going. I turn the corner, and start down the stairs. They twist around the wall, going down.

 But then I hear voices. I freeze as three guards walk towards me. 

“Intruder!” One of them yells.

Another flinches. “We’re right here, you don’t need to yell.”

“Oh. Sorry.”

The third one frowns. “He’s not an intruder. He’s a prisoner.”

“Prisoner!”

“You’ve got to stop that.” 

“Sorry.”

“And he’s escaping!”

“Escapee!”

“Oh my god, shut up.”

“Sorry.”

I clear my throat. “Can I go now?”

“Yeah, sure.” The first one says.

“No, you idiot. We have to bring him back to his cell!”

“Oh. Sorry. What floor are you on?”

“The one under this one.” I lie. 

They sigh, and turn around. “Come on.”

They start bickering as we walk down the stairs, completely ignoring me. That was ridiculously easy. Maybe this place isn't a high security prison.

When we reach the bottom of the stairs, I realize I didn’t think this through. They’re actually going to take me to a cell. I’m supposed to be waiting for Will. 

“Umm, you guys can go ahead.” I say.

The first two don’t even hear me, and keep bickering while they walk. But the third one, a guy with long black hair, turns to look at me. 

“And where are you going?” He asks, crossing his arms. 

I bite my lip. “No where. I just...wanted to look out the window.”

“Well, fine. But hurry, we have to get you back to your cell.”

I walk to the window. All I can see is water. How are we supposed to get out of here? We’re really high up.

“Alright, let’s go.” The guy says. 

I frown. “Can’t I look a little longer? I haven't seen the moon in months.”

“Fine. But hurry, I’m not getting in trouble for you.”

Will, please hurry.

“Okay, you’ve got to get back to your cell now.” He says after a minute.

Reluctantly, I start to follow him. I walk as slow as I can. He glances back at me, and sighs. 

“Look, I’m tired. Can you please hurry up?”

A wave of water suddenly shoots over my head, slamming into him, and making him fall back. I turn and see Will on the stairs, frowning at me. 

“What are you doing?” He demands. “Do you want to get caught?”

I huff at him. “I was perfectly fine.”

“You were about to get taken back to a cell! How is that perfectly fine?”

“I don’t see how this is my fault.”

“Sure, sure. Let’s go.” He says, walking to the window.

He pries it open, and leans out, looking down at the water. 

“Okay, I’ll jump first, then-”

“Jump? No way. I’m not jumping! We’re, like, fifty feet up!”

He gives me an exasperated look. “We’re only thirty feet up. And this is the best way to escape.”

“But...fine. How are we going to survive the fall?”

He wiggles his fingers. “You didn’t just see that water magic?”

“Oh, yeah. Hey, when were you going to tell me about that? I-”

He rolls his eyes, then falls out the window and yells, “Jump!”

This doesn’t seem safe. Not at all. But still, I put one leg through the window. I try to pull the other through, but I tilt to the side, and the next thing I know, I’m falling.

I scream as the water rushes towards me. Before I hit it, it erupts around me. I’m under the water, surrounded by a huge bubble.

Will swims over, and I see he’s trying not to laugh. 

“Are you okay?” He asks me. He swims into the bubble, grabbing my hands. 

I glare at him. “No, I’m not okay! That was terrifying!”

“It’s fine. You’re safe now.” He assures me.

“I have a few things to say. First, you can do magic? Second, can we try that kiss again? Third, it’s not fine, I just fell out a window! Fourth-”

He kisses me. Seriously this time. 

“About time.” I say when he pulls away. “I just had to fall out of a window-

“Okay, wow, moment ruined.”

“I don’t care! I just fell fifty feet!”

“Let it go, Blake. You’re alive, aren’t you?”

“Well, yes, but-”

“So it’s fine. And it was only thirty feet.”

He’s right.

“Shut up.” I mutter. That’s the first time the voice hasn’t yelled at me. 

Will grins. “Ready to go?”

“Yep. Where are we going?”

“My house.” He says. The bubble starts moving. I’m not sure what he’s doing. 

“You have a house?”

“Yeah, I have a house, did you think I lived there?”

“Kind of, yes.” 

When we get to land, I realize how tired I am. I haven't slept in a while.

There's a thick forest in front of us, and Will heads towards it.

"C'mon, it's this way." He says, pulling my arm.

I follow him through the trees, not really paying attention to where we're going. Suddenly, an arrow shoots in front of me, sticking into a tree, an inch from my nose.



December 17, 2020 22:22

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Hi, I just discovered this story today, and I quickly finished reading all of the parts. When's the next part coming out? This story is just sooo good. It's awesome. I not only love your creative writing skills, but the way you respect LGBTQ+. I can't wait for the next part!

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Ari Berri
19:46 Dec 30, 2020

Thank you! I'm glad you like it. I'm not sure when I'll do the next part, I need a good prompt. Again, thank you!

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Sapphire ~♚
22:46 Dec 19, 2020

AAAH HAPPY LATE BDAY HAZEL!! FRANK IS SO NICE TO YOU!!! Now, moving on to the story, I NEED THE NEXT PART NOW. RIGHT NOW. NOWWWWW!!!! AAAAAH HOW COULD YOU LEAVE US ON A CLIFFHANGER LIKE THAT!!!

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Ari Berri
23:35 Dec 19, 2020

I don't know when I'll finish it. I'm doing lots of Christmas stuff, so I'm pretty busy. I'll try, though! Loved your new story, by the way.

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Sapphire ~♚
18:36 Dec 20, 2020

Thank you, Albus Dumbledore, headmaster of Hogwarts! RIP. Haha, that's okay, do what you have time for, and don't rush it!

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Ari Berri
18:44 Dec 20, 2020

:)

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Leo Reynie
17:14 Jan 04, 2021

Sometimes, people will write stories and then make sequels but a lot of the time they are just reaching so anything after the first part is super boring. Obviously not the case here. (: I honestly had no idea how you were going to turn 'My Mistake' into so many other continued parts. Seriously amazing job, the plot line still remains intensely interesting.

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Ari Berri
17:16 Jan 04, 2021

Thank you! I like cliffhangers, so I end up making several of some. I have three series on here.

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Leo Reynie
17:23 Jan 04, 2021

Yeah, cliffhangers are awesome (For the person writing the story, not reading, lol). No kidding, huh? 3 series, thats epic.

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Elliot Thomas
15:41 Dec 23, 2020

Even better than the last part :)

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Ari Berri
16:04 Dec 23, 2020

Thank you! I think this is my favorite part I've written.

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Ana Govindasamy
21:32 Dec 21, 2020

Wahshdhehavsjaggggbhggccf! AAAASOOOOGOOOD 5th Part?

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Ari Berri
21:34 Dec 21, 2020

I will, but probably not this week.

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Ana Govindasamy
21:46 Dec 21, 2020

That’s ok. I can’t wait! 💕

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Amel Parvez
18:36 Dec 21, 2020

Loved the story😊 Waiting for the next part.................. And yes, your name. Fault in our stars. Right? Hazel grace and Augustus waters.

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Ari Berri
18:56 Dec 21, 2020

Thank you! Also, you got it!

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Amel Parvez
19:31 Dec 21, 2020

Ha! You are welcome XD

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Wirda Bibi
12:12 Dec 21, 2020

You are..... Like I think you likes to play with people curiosity......... I want the next part....................................... be quick as lots of people are waiting........

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Ari Berri
16:15 Dec 21, 2020

You are correct. I love cliffhangers. I'm working on the next part.

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Wirda Bibi
17:38 Dec 21, 2020

That is great👍

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Ari Berri
17:40 Dec 21, 2020

Thank you!

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Wirda Bibi
17:43 Dec 21, 2020

No probs😊

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Wirda Bibi
23:16 Dec 20, 2020

I haven't read your stories yet so....sorry😒 but still I wanna comment as I have recently read your bio😄 I was into fits of laughter 😂😂when I read it and it is so brilliant😉 MIND BLOWING 😇 By the way why did you changed your name from Albus Dumbledore to Augustus Water as the hogwarts headmaster was with us😉 Well never mind and keep going😄😊

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Ari Berri
23:20 Dec 20, 2020

Thanks! I change my name when sombody guesses who it is.

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Wirda Bibi
23:26 Dec 20, 2020

So have some another name again and make people guess it.

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Night Fall
20:19 Dec 20, 2020

Come on, make it harder next time LOL it is Harry Potter!

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Ari Berri
20:41 Dec 20, 2020

Nice job.

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Nainika Gupta
22:58 Dec 17, 2020

YESSSS This was amazing :) I loved the flawless continuation from the 3 parts before it, and gHAAA anoTHER cliffhanger??? Ughhhh :)

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Ari Berri
23:29 Dec 17, 2020

XD Glad you liked it.

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Nainika Gupta
23:31 Dec 17, 2020

:)

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Ari Berri
22:41 Dec 17, 2020

Definitly. Today's her birthday.

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Happy Birthday Hazel!!!! H+F 4EVER as well

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Ari Berri
22:43 Dec 17, 2020

Frazel forever! XD

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Sunny 🌼 🖤
13:28 Dec 20, 2020

Ok ok ok! About your name? You wouldn't happen to be some kind of Biana x Dex shipper, would you?

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Ari Berri
13:42 Dec 20, 2020

Actually, Sophie x Dex.

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Sunny 🌼 🖤
18:11 Dec 20, 2020

Sodex? I haven't heard that in a while. I prefer them as friends tbh.

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Ari Berri
18:13 Dec 20, 2020

I dunno, I'm only on the second book so far.

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Sunny 🌼 🖤
18:17 Dec 20, 2020

oH ok. I've finished the whole series (so far).

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Ari Berri
18:19 Dec 20, 2020

I just got all the books from the library, so I'm working on it.

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Frank Zhang is a demigod, right?

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Ari Berri
22:22 Dec 18, 2020

You got it. Have you read Percy Jackson?

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I have! (a bit here and there)

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Ari Berri
03:30 Dec 22, 2020

The series is awesome, Rick Riodian is a great author. What books do you like?

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I started the first one of Percy Jackson but never finished it, but I have read A LOT about it and watched the first movie. I LOVE Magnus Chase and the Gods of Asgard with my entire heart. How about you?

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I started the first one of Percy Jackson but never finished it, but I have read A LOT about it and watched the first movie. I LOVE Magnus Chase and the Gods of Asgard with my entire heart. How about you?

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Ari Berri
18:17 Dec 23, 2020

I read the books in elementary school, but I didn't read it well, so I re-read them when I was older. I was told the movies weren't anything like the books, so I haven't watched them. I love Magnus Chase, too. Have you read all three books, or just the first one?

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I DIDN"T RECONIZE YOUUUU WATER MAGICCCCCC (when am I going to be featured XD I'm stupid-)

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Ari Berri
01:45 Dec 18, 2020

It won't be this story, but I'm working on it.

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Ari Berri
14:57 Dec 18, 2020

No problem.

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