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Drama Gay

15th part of Home.


“Daniel.” Catherine says. 

He looks up. He’s in the waiting room at the hospital, and Angel is laying on a couch, asleep. They’ve been waiting for a couple hours, and Daniel’s worried. TJ’s parents are there, too, and his mother has been demanding to see him for the past hour.

“Hey, are you okay?” She asks, sitting beside him. “I’m sorry it took so long for me to get here, I came as soon as Angel called.”

“You didn’t have to do that.” Daniel says. 

She smiles sadly. “Of course I did.” She wraps an arm around him, and he leans against her. “How is he?”

“I don’t know.” He mumbles. “It’s all my fault.”

“Why would you think that?”

“He was trying to protect me.” He says. “And dad pushed him.”

“If he was trying to protect you, then it’s not your fault, Daniel.”

“I just feel bad. He wouldn't have gotten hurt if it wasn’t for me.”

“You know he wouldn’t want you to blame yourself.”

He sighs. “Yeah.”



“You can go see him now.” A nurse says as TJ’s parents walk back into the waiting room. 

Daniel gets up, and the nurse leads him to TJ’s room. 

TJ’s laying on the hospital bed, pale and still, bandages on his head, and machines and other things around the room, maybe the only things keeping him alive.

Don't think about that.

“You’re an idiot.” Daniel says as he walks to the bed.

TJ looks up, and smiles. “Love you, too Danny.”

Daniel frowns at him. “Why would you do that?”

“I don’t know. I didn’t want him to hurt you. What happened?”

“He just left. I think your parents called the police.”

He nods. “Good. He didn’t hurt you?”

“No. I yelled at him, and told him I never want to see him again.”

He grins. “Nice job.”

“Shut up.” Daniel grumbles. “Don’t you remember when I told you my dad is twice your size? Why-”

“Daniel. I’m fine. Calm down.”

“Don’t do that ever again, okay?”

“I won’t.” 

“Good.”


“The doctor said he’ll have to stay in the hospital for about a week, then we can take him home.” TJ’s mother, Tasha, says. TJ has her curly black hair and green eyes. 

They’re all in the waiting room. Catherine didn’t want to wake Angel, so Riley brought her back home.

Daniel nods, then looks down. “I’m sorry-”

“Daniel, TJ told us what happened. It wasn’t your fault at all. Please don’t blame yourself.”

He knows better than to argue with Tasha. “Okay.”

“Now, please. Go home and get some sleep.” She says. 

He nods, and smiles. “Okay.”

He walks outside with Catherine to her car. Instead of driving, she turns to him. 

“Okay, can you tell me what happened?” She asks, clearly worried.

He explains about the text messages, then what happened at her house. 

She looks furious, and he gets worried. 

“I’m really sorry, I didn’t mean-”

“No, no, I’m not mad at you. Blake is just a- never mind. I’m just glad you’re okay.” 

He sighs. “I feel like I ruined everything.”

“You didn’t ruin anything, Daniel. If anything, you made it better.”


February 11, 2021 20:54

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Meera Lakshmi
01:56 Mar 25, 2021

Loving it. No feedback bc it's so good.😊

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16:11 Feb 15, 2021

Oh, this series is so awe-inspiring!, how do keep the suspense and stakes up every time? (Could you help me, I was planning on writing a series but I am such a dimwit.) The present tense narration was at first a bit confusing (FOR ME) but then it became awesome? Can’t wait to read more from both of your series!!!!! Er, random questions- What books do you read?, how to pronounce your pseudonym (like R-E or R-I)? What’s your lucky number? (Anyway, you are so good with writing like this!)

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Ari Berri
17:15 Feb 15, 2021

Thanks! Sure, I'll help. My favorite books are in my bio, I have way too many favorites. I mostly like romances, though. What about you? It's Ari, like Ari in Ariana.

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16:22 Feb 16, 2021

Thanks, for thanking me, and you would help?, tho I feel like if I need help with everything and nothing, so I need help with finding what I need help with or better still, don’t help! Ok, that was weird, lame and a bit rude (SORRY!) but, my brain is we-ear-ed, hope that you understand [you probably won’t but what’s the harm in hoping? Or hopping?] In your bio?, oh-k... Okayyyyy........., your bio is..., looooooong, to say the least. Oh, you have so many favourites, And ooh!, classic riddles!, em I guess the answers are 1 A promise ...

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Ari Berri
16:46 Feb 16, 2021

I'll help, just tell me what you need. For your riddle, is it your breath? I can't figure out the second. XD

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01:51 Feb 18, 2021

Em, can you say how YOU START writing a series, with the characters or the plot? Ya, you got it right!, it’s breath, what a sad reality it is, for me, whose lungs takes a movie break every few weeks, wait, now I am cracking lame jokes about lungs-es?, you gotta be—, wait, ‘I’ gotta be kidding me, myself? Whatever! Sorry, I rambled off, again! I did not get it either!, that’s why it’s one of my favourites! The Ans. Is that you can put holes in a box to make it lighter. Cool word play, right? XD and must congratulate you for not Googling it!...

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Ari Berri
21:03 Feb 18, 2021

Usually I come up with a general idea of what I want to happen, and I get ideas as I write. Do you have any ideas for it yet? Is it an alarm clock?

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Amel Parvez
15:33 Feb 12, 2021

AMAAAZING. OH THANK GOD, tj is okay:) why are they both so effing cute? anyways am feeling bad for daniel.

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Ari Berri
15:36 Feb 12, 2021

Thanks! :)

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Amel Parvez
15:44 Feb 12, 2021

No prob! next part?

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Ari Berri
15:45 Feb 12, 2021

Probably today or monday.

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Amel Parvez
15:46 Feb 12, 2021

okay..... waiting:)

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Ari Berri
19:29 Feb 17, 2021

new part.

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23:47 Feb 11, 2021

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Ari Berri
23:58 Feb 11, 2021

XD My favorite part, too.

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Ari Berri
00:22 Feb 12, 2021

XD Aw, thanks, I'm glad.

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Ari Berri
16:59 Feb 12, 2021

New story!

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Ari Berri
19:29 Feb 17, 2021

new part.

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Haha, bye bye Blake! Amazing by the way, just like the rest.

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Ari Berri
22:43 Feb 11, 2021

XD Thanks!

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I made a new friend today :D

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In honor of make a friend day.

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Ari Berri
23:41 Feb 11, 2021

Oh, I forgot about that.

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Ahh, well, now you remember.

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Ari Berri
23:58 Feb 11, 2021

XD

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