Don't Say I Didn't Warn You

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Drama

¨ Bet you won't do it!¨

Jake yells. He is only trying to provoke me. Don't fall for it. Ugh. I am annoying myself because I already know I am going to do it.

¨ Jake stop! She can't do that! They will be furious! And...well...we don't know how good she is. No offense but, I don't think she will be able to beat Melanie.¨

Maggie says.

Basically Jake is trying to make me challenge Melanie, the supposedly

¨ leader ¨

of the school across from ours. And, basically, I go to a fighting school. And the school across from ours, The Academy of the Fighting Lions, thinks they are better than us. But, they don't know who I am because I am new to this school. They don't know that I can beat them, easily.

¨ Oh, I will be able to beat Melanie. And I will.¨

¨ Great! We will set up the fight for tonight, be ready!¨

¨ I am ready.¨

I have been ready for a long time. No one here knows how good I am at fighting. This will be fun.

********

Jake, Maggie, a bunch of kids from our school and I arrive at the area in the forest we were to meet Melanie. When we got their, Melanie was already there, along with...oh my god. I think her whole entire school had come to watch.

¨ Are you ready to fight!? Uh, what's your name again?¨

¨ Veronica.¨

She nods then comes to stand in front of me.

¨ So, you think you can beat me?¨

¨ I don't think. I know.¨

She laughs and two girls standing just behind he laugh as well. I just roll my eyes.

¨ Oh please. You couldn't beat me if you had all the strength of ten horses.¨

¨ Seems a little dramatic.¨

I roll my eyes so hard I fear they might fall right out of my head. This girl is way too full of herself. I will show her.

¨ I am going to humiliate you so bad, you will be a disgrace upon your school.¨

I yawn.

¨ Can we just get this over with?¨

Melanie smirks and says,

¨ Gladly.¨

Then she walks off, turns on some battle music, and comes back to me with a sword. I grab my sword as well. We circle each other for a few moments then she comes at me with as much force as she can muster, which, isn't much. I easily blocked her sword with my own and swung around and pushed her feet out from under her. She fell face first, coming back up with a surprised face. I could hear cheers coming from around us, only infuriating Melanie even more. She comes at me with her sword and I block her attack-again-then I slash my sword across her cheek. I didn't do any permanent damage,I could have swept her head clean off if I had wanted to. Your welcome Melanie.

She looked like she wanted to stab me in the chest, and I didn't blame her. After all, I did do exactly what she said she was going to do to me, I embarrassed her in front of her whole school.

¨ Do you still want to continue?¨

I ask, and she answers me by aiming her sword hit at my chest, of course, I block her and she misses. I don't want to kill her so I un-arm her and steal her sword. All I hear is silence around me and I say,

¨ I win.¨

Melanie yells in anger and turns back to her friends.

¨ Damn! You are good! I mean, I thought you were going be pretty good, but...but not that good. I mean you showed her!¨

I laugh and say

¨ Thank you.¨

And he blushes. Do I make him...nervous?

Maggie seems sad when she saw his face and I wonder is she likes Jake.

¨ Well, I guess I should be going home then.¨

I start to turn away.

¨ Veronica, is it?¨

A man asks. I turn around and notice it is the popular guy from the other school standing in front of me.

¨ Who's asking?¨

¨ Oh right. Of course, my name is Zach.¨

I nod, then turn around and head home.

¨ Hey wait! I, uh, I wanted to talk to you.¨

I flick him off and continue walking. He's from the other school, the school of assholes. I hear his friends laughing at him and I feel the side of my mouth curve up.

********

The next day I wake up and get ready for school.

I put on a badass outfit, as well as some red lipstick and mascara. I also strap a sword to my side.

As I walk into school, several kids surround me, congratulating me for the win against Melanie last night. I say one too many thank yous and try to get through the crowd. I finally see Jake and Maggie and I walk over to them.

¨ Well why can't you tell me what you feel!?¨

Jake looks over at me.

¨ Hey Veronica, come sit. We need your opinion on something.¨

¨ You know, actually I think I better go...¨

¨ Actually, no. Please stay. Maybe you can talk some sense into this idiot.¨

¨ Umm...¨

¨ Ok. So Jake and I have known each other since we were kids and I finally told him that I have...feelings for him. But he won't tell me what he feels! He just sat there in silence. He won't talk to me.¨

Jake rolls his eyes.

¨ You know maybe you should have thought about how I felt about all of this! You just sprang this on me and I need time to think Maggie!¨

¨ It looks like you two have got this handled, I am going to-¨

¨ NO! Veronica, tell us who you agree with.¨

Maggie says.

¨ Maggie, this is really none of my business I-¨

¨ I DON'T CARE! Just tell us, please!¨

¨ Maggie, calm down. If Veronica does not want to butt in on this fight she doesn't have too.¨

¨ Why? Is it because you like her?¨

Jake's cheeks go red and I feel even more uncomfortable.

¨ Maggie. You...your like a-a sister to me-¨

¨ A SISTER!? YOU THINK OF ME AS A SISTER!?¨

Jake focuses on something on the ground.

¨ Maggie, I-I am so sorry. I never knew you liked me.¨

Tears start to droop down her cheeks and she runs away.

¨ I um, I will go try to uh, talk to her?¨

Jake nods and then I run after Maggie.

I find her in the bathroom, crying hysterically.

¨ Maggie, are-are you all right?¨

¨ No.¨

She whispers.

I come over and giver her a hug.

¨ It will be ok. That's his loss for not liking you.¨

¨ You think?¨

¨ I know. When have I ever been wrong about anything?¨

¨ Well, I mean you did just move here but, so far you have been right about everything.¨

¨ Exactly.¨

I break the hug and help her clean herself up.

********

When we walk out of the bathroom I hear a voice yell

¨ WHERE IS SHE!?¨

I am willing to bet a hundred bucks that that is Melanie.

¨ Oh no.¨

Maggie sounds concerned but she has nothing to be concerned about. Melanie is no threat to me.

I turn the corner to find a big crowd of people standing on front of the school doors. Then I walk to them.

¨ Looking for me?¨

I ask and then I feel a pain in my stomach. I look down to see a sword in my abdomen. I hear people scream.

¨ Ouch.¨

I gut out. That one word taking way too much strength than it should. I feel arms wrap around my waist and I look up to see Jake and...Zach.

¨ It's ok.¨

They both try to comfort me but my hearing suddenly stops.

I can see their lips moving but there is no sound coming from them.

¨ Why-why can't I hear you?¨

Then blood spurts from my mouth. A lot.

¨ That...is...too...much...blood.¨

I try to say something else but more blood comes out and I start to choke on it. Choke. On my own blood. How pleasant. Everything goes black.

********

I slowly open my eyes and I realize I am in a bed. But, where? Then I remember all the events from...yesterday, today? When did Melanie stab me? Am I still alive?

¨ Yes. You are still alive.¨

I jerk at the sudden voice and see Zach and Jake standing next to me, looking very concerned.

¨ Did...did I say that out loud?¨

Had I?

¨ Um, yes. Did you not mean to?¨

She shook her head no and that only made them more concerned.

¨ Are you still in pain?¨

I try to get up but cry out as a sudden excruciating pain comes from my abdomen.

¨ Does that answer your question?¨

Before they could respond, someone bursts through the door-Melanie.

¨ Is she seriously not dead? God, what do I have to do to kill you? Stab you again? I think yes.¨

She comes at me and I immediately reach for the sword that was normally tied to my side, but I found that space empty.

Dammit. They took my fucking sword.

Zach kicks Melanie to the floor as he and Jake pull out their swords.

¨ Come one step closer to her, and I will kill you. Understand?¨

Melanie huffs and stomps out of the room.

¨ You can't protect her forever!¨

¨ I know, but I can certainly try! Although I doubt she'll be needing much protection considering she is better at fighting than anyone I have ever seen.¨

¨ Not for long!¨

Zach shuts the door then turns back to me.

¨ Are you alright?¨

¨ Yeah, I just need my damn sword so I can kill that bitch.¨

They laugh and I glare at them.

¨ I am being serious. I want to cut her head clean off and-¨

¨ Ok. Slow down there sweetheart.¨

¨ Don't. You. EVER. Call me that. Again.¨

He throws his hands up as in surrender and I grunt.

¨ Can I get off this fucking bed?¨

¨ Ha. Try again.¨

¨ Oh sorry. Can I please get off this fucking bed?¨

They both grin.

¨ Sorry, but your stuck here. On that bed, until you get better.¨

¨ I don't think I made myself very clear earlier. I am going to get off this fucking bed now whether you like it or not. I do NOT listen to you. I am going to get off this bed, and I am going to kill that bitch Melanie with a smile on my face. Is that clear enough for you?¨

They both look at me, stunned.

I get off the bed with a moan and then I grab the sword out of Zach's hand and run out of the room.

¨ Melanie! I am here!¨

I hear someone laugh then all of a sudden I see Melanie face to face with me.

¨ That was incredibly stupid of you. You will regret this decision soon enough.¨

¨ Oh no. You see, I don't think I will regret this decision. Because I know it won't end well for one of us, and that one, will be you.¨

You comes at me with her sword and I kick her down before she could do any damage. I quickly un-arm her and she sits up, terror etched on her face. A smile crept onto my face as I slashed her head clean off.

I heard gasps and screams in the background but all I could focus on was how satisfying it had felt to cut of Melanie's head.

¨ She had it coming. They all did.¨

Was all I said as I walked back home. Off to my next location, hideout, move, whatever you want to call it.

¨ This was fun.¨

May 22, 2021 01:08

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Arwen Dove
04:42 Jun 02, 2021

This is such an entertaining and fun story to read! Great job!

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Kylee Haverty
14:34 Jun 02, 2021

Aww thank you so much! I am so glad you liked it!

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Arwen Dove
19:35 Jun 02, 2021

:)

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Esther :)
18:30 Jun 29, 2021

Great Job! The title was what really hooked me in! Only a few tips. -I think you meant off instead of of. "cut *of* Melanie's head" -Change supposedly to supposed "the *supposedly* leader" -This sentence is a little weird, you could change it to: "Tears start to stream down her cheeks." "Tears start to droop down her cheeks" ***Also, do you want to fix your quotation marks?

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Esther :)
19:08 Jun 29, 2021

Just click the icon with the time and battery percentage. Above the audio bar and the farthest to the right you should see the keyboard icon. Click US instead of the International Keyboard.

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