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Drama Inspirational Teens & Young Adult

The dark afternoon revels in fatigue between the glimmers of passing vehicles adding to the impression of a jet black afternoon burning in the fierce sun, the conductor who shouts indicates a causality in habits that are no longer furious, Bekasi-Grogol, Batusari-Tanah Abang, Senen-Cimone and other directions who are constantly passing by, on the pedestrian bridge that stretches between the mayor and a mall.

It seems that the prospective passenger is waiting for his idol's bus which looks old to be boarded, next to the bus stop near the brain-brain shop; there is a small man who looks unsteady walking around the universe as if he wants to leave the ethics that surround him. He was like that not because he drank too much liquor let alone using drugs, but indeed his physical condition made him that way. Conscience causality, effectiveness and the wheel of the main work that he usually does is begging and whoever you are will be amazed-looking serene, it is impossible to even reach into the small amount of money that is in his pocket to give it all to him. Let's just say that Udin is none other than a Salewang teenager or people often call him a squatting IQ. It's really rude if someone calls him that. Humans were created perfect by God; even though there are many defects here and there God has created humans as the perfect human beings among existing creatures. If Udin could be like us, of course he would demonstrate with you in the MPR/DPR building to demand free food, free education or fame like an artist in mass media who is often in the public spotlight with his glamorous twists and turns or would sneer at his words.

Who has been thrown from the mouth of your benefactor could not even sneer at God for creating him like that? Unfortunately, Udin is not like us, who are old and passionate about the beauty of work and materials. He is forced to earn a fortune by being a beggar because of an essence of life, namely how to be able to support his younger siblings, father and mother who are too old to work. Or is it really only Udin who is able to feed a broken heart with material things.

Udin is one of the portraits of beauty who was deceived by the director, the cameraman who wanted to edit it—becoming a survival actor who saved his parents like the angel Gabriel in the morning who gives fortune to humans who diligently get up early. Even though the director and cameraman are his own parents, the fact is that this profession Every day I see more and more pawned people and I even rarely meet them on protocol streets in capital cities like Jakarta, because maybe the Satpol PP often conducts raids so maybe they realize that they are the dregs of society. Maybe in big cities other than Jakarta there are still very, very many. Here limitations are used as a tool for seeking fortune based on other people's compassion for existing disabilities. On the other hand, fellow human beings are no longer attached to one another.

It should have been for both parents to make a living as a form of parental obligation to provide for their children by providing materials and sending udin to school in designated places and the fact is that now there are many free schools that place people like udin to receive education, because Indeed, this country guarantees education with the financing of citizens, including Udin, not instead of being a daily worker and a producer of financial coffers for his family, or indeed his parents are preoccupied with the material that has been produced by Udin, so they are already in a comfort zone and don't want Udin like most children. -his age. I don't know I don't understand

But that's not the case for Parjo, a boy who left his parents in the village to wander in search of a bite of rice in a land donated by an old man because of his bastard uncle who deliberately kicked him out just because he couldn't help produce a perverted beauty in the form of anathema money, his uncle called him Lik Parto. Is a big drug dealer who turns out to be a courier, so stupid is his uncle who has promised his parents eternal beauty, namely the path of greedy, restless education. But what could he do when he came and visited Jakarta; he was thrown into a human being who only knows how to deliver illicit goods, which are none other than putaw or methamphetamine.

Until one day when he accidentally dropped the item into a ditch because it was hit by a moped that had no eyes. As soon as he returned home he was immediately slapped and interrogated where the illicit goods were. He innocently replied that the item had fallen into a ditch and was shattered because the moped was so hard it had thrown its emaciated body. Without saying a long word his uncle immediately threw his big hand towards Parjo's right cheek and drove Parjo away. Parjo was forced to leave his uncle's house and squirm restlessly looking for a moment of beauty until he was thrown into a street busker and transformed into a street disease in the bright daylight surrounded by puffs of smoke of scorching sadness, they tried to attack the arrogance of the drivers and conductors.

Babies teach old grandparents how to be humane. A street baby with a hoarse voice who seems to be looking for a mouthful of chicken porridge by wandering the world to a donated country. The babysitter in a pygmy dress with a cap and buckle who carries a prison, scoundrel prison and delivers frantic diapers. Scraps of sweat, feet aground, skin that is bustling are an impression on the baby octopus, its many legs can crash on buses and public transportation. Small change to earn their survival, road markings can only witness crying over the lives of these babies.

December 03, 2022 01:44

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Dini Oktavianti
05:44 Jan 24, 2023

It tells the story of a boy who is not even old enough to be considered the backbone of the family, but this is very common to see outside or inside Jakarta who use limitations as a tool to seek fortune based on the pity of others for the existing disability, and fellow humans are no longer bound to each other because there are so many neglected children who have to work for their own food and some even have to look for sustenance to make money to meet family needs just like Udin he has to support his younger brother, father and mother who a...

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08:47 May 26, 2024

This story is a Recount Text that tells how difficult it is to survive. Udin is forced to seek fortune by becoming a beggar, which should be his parents who earn a living as a form of parental obligation in providing for their children. But due to the nature of his life, Udin must be able to support his younger siblings, father and mother who are too old to work. Parjo, on the other hand, left his parents in the village to migrate in search of a bite of rice. Who helps produce a big drug dealer ordered by his uncle. Until one day, he dropped...

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NAYLA NUR UMAYAH
01:11 May 21, 2024

this story is recount text, This story describes the difficult situation faced by vulnerable youth like Parjo, as well as the worrying conditions of street children, who require attention and intervention from various parties.

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04:07 May 16, 2024

In my opinion,this story is recount text. Synopsis:Portraying the lives of several individuals, including Udin and Parjo, who face various challenges and hardships in their daily lives. It explores themes of poverty, survival, family dynamics, and societal marginalization. In summary, Udin is depicted as a teenager forced into begging to support his family, while Parjo a boy who left his parents in the village to wander in search of a bite of rice in a land donated by an old man because of his bastard uncle who deliberately kicked him out ju...

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03:07 May 16, 2024

this is a recount text, This story tells about two young people who face the harshness of life in a big city, This genetic experiment has great potential to turn the baby octopus into a giant entity that can destroy everything around it. Nama: Tiara Murtiningsih Kelas : X ULW-1

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Aurell Nikita
02:51 May 16, 2024

this is a recount text, the sinopsis of the text also touches on the theme of recognizing social injustice, where the less fortunate are forced to survive in inhumane ways. In fact, it also talks about the loss of human values ​​in a society that is increasingly indifferent to others.

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Aditiyas Putra
02:32 May 16, 2024

This type of the story is Recount Text The story revolves around Lik Parto, a young man who becomes involved in drug smuggling after being promised eternal beauty by his uncle. However, his life takes a drastic turn when he accidentally loses the illicit goods and is subsequently thrown out of his uncle's house. Lik Parto learns the true meaning of humanity through an encounter with a street baby. The narrative also portrays the harsh realities faced by street children as they struggle to survive amidst societal indifference. In conclusion,...

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Muhammad Sambudi
02:27 May 16, 2024

This Text Is a recount and the Sinopsis: The story takes place on a crowded afternoon in Jakarta, Indonesia,In Jakarta, Udin, a disabled boy, begs to support his family. The text criticizes his parents for exploiting him. Parjo, another boy, escapes his drug-dealing uncle and becomes a street performer. The story highlights the struggles of underprivileged children.

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Rafif Rahadyan
02:24 May 16, 2024

The type of story is Recount Text, because it tells about a person's experience. From this story we can see how the lives of teenagers are abandoned by their parents and become the backbone of the family. This story reminds us that we should be grateful because we can continue our education and live in the current situation surrounded by people who imagine us and parents who are willing to work hard to send us to school and give us a bite of rice.

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Arjuna Dwi Putra
02:22 May 16, 2024

this story is recount text, because it tells someone's life experience. synopsis : The story depicts the daily life in a big city, Jakarta, through the perspectives of various characters. It follows Udin, a teenager forced into begging to support his family, and Parjo, who becomes involved in crime after being rejected by his family. Amidst their struggles, the story also highlights the presence of street children trying to survive in the harsh urban environment. Overall, the story explores themes of poverty, social injustice, and individua...

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Rizka Afny
14:27 May 14, 2024

This story is a recount text that explains how difficult it is to survive, seen from the comparison of two people, namely Udin and Parjo. Udin was forced to become a beggar in a big city because he had to support his father, mother and younger brother, whose parents should be the ones responsible for earning a living, while Parjo was forced to continue his life by wandering because he was tired of selling illegal drugs that his uncle told him to do, and was beaten. and was thrown out by his bastard uncle.

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04:19 May 14, 2024

The type of the story is Recount Text, because it tells us about someone experience (person). Sinopsis: The story above tell us about two young man or teenager named Udin and Parjo who lived at capital city of Indonesia, Jakarta. They wander to Jakarta because they have to be a backbone for their own family. it describes us how many people has a hard and difficult life and makes them to be the backbone of their family. The situation that Udin has making him have to work in the capital city and live a hard life, also Parjo who has to work to ...

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04:18 May 14, 2024

This story is a recount text. From this story we can see how the lives of teenagers are abandoned by their parents and become the backbone of the family. This story reminds us that we should be grateful because we can continue our education and live in the current situation surrounded by people who imagine us and parents who are willing to work hard to send us to school and give us a bite of rice.

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Fauzi B Pai
04:13 May 14, 2024

This story is a recount text From this story we can see how the lives of teenagers are abandoned by their parents and become the backbone of the family. This story reminds us that we should be grateful because we can continue our education and live in the current situation surrounded by people who imagine us and parents who are willing to work hard to send us to school and give us a bite of rice. From this story I take the positive side, namely that we must remain grateful for all the blessings that God has given us because we still have fam...

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NAZWA EL SAFWA
01:57 May 14, 2024

This recount text tells where there is a man who is experiencing a challenging life, several children who must be the backbone of his family and they have their own goals, They are still passionate about working only to meet the needs of themselves and their families, while we are still not grateful for what we have and we have, because their parents are already in their comfort zone and are complacent with the material that Udin produces, God created us all perfectly. With this we must be grateful for the life we have, because there are man...

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Aura Ananda
01:50 May 14, 2024

teks ini adalah text recount

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Afkar Abrisam
01:42 May 14, 2024

The story follows Parjo, a boy who leaves his village to find work in Jakarta after being kicked out by his greedy uncle, Lik Parto, a drug dealer. Parjo, forced to deliver drugs, accidentally loses the illicit goods in a ditch after being hit by a moped. His uncle, furious, slaps him and throws him out. Homeless, Parjo becomes a street busker, struggling to survive. Despite his harsh life, Parjo's story highlights the resilience of street children who fight for their survival amidst the challenges of urban life.

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Elsa Oktaviani
01:37 May 14, 2024

this story is recount text

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Karina Rina
01:23 May 14, 2024

this story is recount text sinopsis:This genetic experiment has great potential to turn the baby octopus into a giant entity that can destroy everything around it. In an effort to protect the creature and uncover the truth behind these experiments, the shop owner along with his allies must navigate a dark web of conspiracy, where power and ambition collide

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Nayaa Nrshbni
01:23 May 14, 2024

recount text, Cerita ini mengisahkan dua anak muda, Udin dan Parjo, yang menghadapi kerasnya kehidupan di kota-kota besar di Indonesia

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