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Drama Friendship Suspense

Characters:Yeo Hwanwoong(villan)


           Jake and Jasmine(victims)


"Hey Jasmine" called out Hwanwoong in a singy songy voice.

Jasmine replied him with small smile as she walked away.

"You saw that Jake, you shouldn't depend on your fate now and wait for a fairy to appear because-"

"Can you please keep your explanation for some other day woongie because I am really hungry and the break is about to end." pleaded Jake as Hwanwoong started his everyday speech.

"Alright fine if you don't want your friend's advice then it's okay I was just trying to say that depending on fate is not the right choice and as you are a adult you should make wise choices and-"

"TTRRRRRRRIIIINNNNNGGGGGGGG"

Jake shot Hwanwoong a dirty look.

"What?" Hwanwoong shrugged 

"Fine we will have some Mc donald on our way home my treat"

Hwanwoong announced as if winning a favour for Jake.



Jake and Hwanwoong were bestfriends from middle school and knew eachother insideout.Both never kept secrets from eachother and shared memories that they could never forget.Jasmine was a new addmission in their high school,she was as expected very intelligent,famous and charming.Hwanwoong shared double Bio with Jasmine everyday whereas Jake shared Language arts with her every Tuesday.


Hwanwoong had a huge crush on Jasmine while Jake thought she was okay and her charms were a no big deal.Jake belived in fate while Hwanwoong tried to change Jake's pov and explained him that Jake would be all helpless and lonely when he will be toghether with Jasmine.Jake asusaul just ignored Hwanwoong's everyday speech.




          5 MONTHS LATER



"OMGGGG Jake what should I wear do you think this suit looks good is Jasmine gonna fall for this one?" cried Hwanwoong as he came out from the changing room.

"Look you are literally acting like a girl,it's just your first date not a wedding ceremony!" exclaimed Jake tired out by Hwanwoong's constant 'do I look good in this or do I look good in this?' 

"Well it might be a date but you know it will lead to a wedding ceremony" said Hwanwoong

"I will make sure of that" scoffed Jake.


           1 YEAR LATER



"RRRRRRRIIIIIIINNNNNNNNNGGGGGGGGG" cried Jake's phone

"Hello" Jake said as he answered the phone

"Oh hi Jake me and Jasmine are going to the festival you wanna come along" explained Hwanwoong in a hurry

"Nah gotta go for a family dinner" Jake huffed

"Fine I'll miss ya then"


Things were great and life was really smooth for the two friends till.....



            4 MONTHS LATER     



"Uhh...Hwanwoong I wanna talk to you" Jasmine stuttered

"Hmm What is it?" Hwanwoong looked up at her

"Uhh...you know that it's been a long time since we are together but I think that we should end it here because I am interested in someone else and I don't wanna break your heart by cheating on you and uhh.. I am really sorry" Jasmine whispered in the cold night.



          6 MONTHS LATER



"WELL IF YOU WERE INNOCENT WHY DIDN"T YOU CONFESS IT TO ME BEFORE HUH!!!??" shouted Hwanwoong

"Hey listen calm down-" Jake started to explain

"YOU DON'T TELL ME TO CALM DOWN AFTER WHAT YOU HAVE DONE YOU IDIOT" cried Hwanwoong

"IF YOU ATLEAST TRY TO LISTEN TO ME-" shouted Jake his temper rising.

"JUST SHUT UP THE LAST THING I WANNA HEAR IS YOU SPEAKING AND OUR FRIENDSHIP ENDS HERE" screamed Hwanwoong 

"Fine by me then " said Jake despite the hollow feeling that started to take over his heart.

            5 YEARS LATER 



"Today we all pray for a happy life for Mr Jake Robert and Jasmine Williams"              

There was a round of applause as everyone got up to leave.


4 MONTHS LATER


"Jake someone has broken into the house" whispered Jasmine

"Are you sure" he replied

"I think I saw someone going in the hallway" Jasmine whispered

"You wait here I will go check" Jake said in a hushed voice and crept into the hallway. 


"Who are you what do you want from us" cried Jake protecting Jasmine behind him

The killer smiled in the dark

"Who am I after years of giving me pain and heartbreak to the verge that I lost my sanity you are asking me who I am" the killer shouted and took a step towards them as they backed away.

"Look we don't know who you are or what are you talking about " Jake said as he tightened his grip on Jasmine

The killer took off his mask to reveal a familiar face

"HWANWOONG" cried Jake and Jasmine in unision

"Why woongie Why?" Jake said as he got nervous

Hwanwoong laughed and stared at them with his hollow eyes

"Years have passed and my goal of life is finally here Jake after suffering from all the depression,pain and saddness I will finally tell you the taste of what I bore" he said taking steps towards them

"No Hwanwoong you won't do this please please I was your girlfriend please" Jasmine pleaded her face in tears

"You were and because of you this has happened" Hwanwoong said as he laughed


A scream filled the cold night in a daze.


"We are currently at the crime scene two dead bodies are found they are of Mr Jake and Miss Jasmine. These innocent lives are mudered and there is no evidence the police are still searching.There are stab marks on the bodies which defines it was a muder.The police has found a witness who claims that he heard screams from the house so he called the police and here he is let's ask him about the crime scene. " the reporter turned towards a man in his twenties.

"Hello you are the only witness so could you please spare us you time and tell us some details about this crime scence" the reporter held the mike towards the man

"Hi my name is Hwanwoong and about the crime scene,I was taking a stroll here at night and I heard shouts from here I quickly called the police and that's all I know also I feel very sorry for the innocent lives that muderer has taken. " the man smiled at the camera and waved his hand at the reporter.

"Thankyou very much for your time , you were listening to The Daily News "

December 04, 2020 14:10

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14 comments

Bareera Samra
15:20 Jan 07, 2021

Woah! That devil! 😡 Anyways, it was a nice story. Though, I thought that jake should have atleast told hawanwoong that he liked Jasmine and hawanwoong should not have killed Them both, then everything would have been fone.😂 Anyways, i liked the story, keep treating us with more.

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Soofia Asad
09:21 Jan 09, 2021

thank uu

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Bareera Samra
21:20 Jan 10, 2021

Pleasure is all mine! 💖

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Soofia Asad
09:22 Jan 09, 2021

thank uu

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Amel Parvez
14:51 Dec 09, 2020

Wow! It was a GREAT story and a perfect ending. Btw, I am not sorry for jake and jasmine, jake shouldn't have cheated on his bestie. Anyways it was enjoyable!

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Soofia Asad
08:57 Dec 10, 2020

thank youu and btw jake tried to explain hwanwoong but he didnt listened to him so the villan is hwanwoong

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Amel Parvez
15:52 Dec 10, 2020

What did jake explain to him?? That he shouldn't go out with jasmine, right? If he liked jasmine from the start then he should have told woongi about it but as u have written that jake thought jasmine just ' okay' then how come he fell in love with her and if he did unintentionally still he shouldn't have come b/w them. I am sorry if I am being a bit unbearable:) It's yr story and it's your wish how to write it. It's just that I am still feeling sorry for woongi. Like he first lost his girlfriend and then his best friend. Isn't it ...

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Soofia Asad
08:31 Dec 11, 2020

I just hate the person Hwanwoong in real life that is the reason I why I choose him to be the villain every time so yea

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Amel Parvez
14:26 Dec 12, 2020

Yeah that makes sense. And like I don't know him in real life so I am just telling u his character in your story. And u know I am sorry but just in just saw the name of your sttory the twist of fate, right that's right like ab it's clear. But still you can't blame anyone cuz no one knows their fate and yes but woongi acted a bit insanely in the end. Anyways loved discussing yr story😃 Happy writing!😉

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Soofia Asad
08:25 Dec 13, 2020

Thank youuuu

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Wirda Bibi
13:00 Dec 08, 2020

hwanwoong! he is a...... well great job but jasmine shouldn't leave Hwanwoong but sorry for both of them :( treat us more :p

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Soofia Asad
09:02 Dec 10, 2020

WHHHHHHHHHHHHYYYYYYYYYYY is everyone feeling sorry for hwanwoong I loathed him when I was writing the story

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Wirda Bibi
11:29 Dec 10, 2020

i am not sorry for hwanwoong. i am sorry for jake and jasmine

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