love without the word!!!!!!

Submitted into Contest #290 in response to: Write a story about love without ever using the word “love.”... view prompt

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Fiction Romance

The salt spray kissed Elara's face as she leaned against the weathered railing of the ferry, the familiar tang a comfort. Ocracoke Island was her sanctuary, a place where the relentless churn of the world seemed to slow, measured by the rhythm of the tides and the cries of gulls. Every summer since she was a child, she’d made the pilgrimage, escaping the stifling heat of Charlotte and the even more stifling expectations that came with it.

This year, though, felt different. This year, Leo was waiting.

She first saw him mending nets on the docks, his dark hair pulled back, exposing the strong line of his jaw and the focused intensity in his eyes. He moved with an easy grace, a silent symphony of muscle and intention. She’d been sketching the fishing boats, trying to capture the way the late afternoon sun turned the water to liquid gold, when he looked up, met her gaze, and the world tilted on its axis.

He introduced himself simply, "Leo," and then, gesturing to the elaborate web in his hands, "Making sure these are ready for tomorrow."

Elara, usually so comfortable with words, found herself stumbling. "They're… beautiful. The nets, I mean. And the, uh, the light."

He chuckled, a low, rumbling sound that resonated in her chest. "The light helps. So does a good net."

They talked for hours that day. About the sea, about the history of the island, about everything and nothing. He spoke of his family, generations of fishermen who had called Ocracoke home, their lives intrinsically linked to the ocean. She told him of her art, her desire to capture the fleeting beauty of the world on canvas. He listened with an attentiveness that made her feel seen, truly seen, for the first time in her life.

The next day, she found him at the same spot. He offered her a cup of coffee from the small shack nearby, and they watched the sunrise together, painting the sky in hues of pink and orange. Over the next few weeks, their days fell into a comfortable rhythm. She would sketch, he would work, and they would meet in the evenings, sometimes for dinner at the quirky little restaurant Elara’s aunt owned, sometimes just to walk along the beach under the vast, star-studded sky.

He taught her how to bait a hook, patiently untangling her clumsy attempts, his fingers brushing against hers, sending shivers down her spine. She showed him how to see the subtle shifts in colour at sunset, the way the light danced on the waves, inspiring him to try his hand at carving driftwood, his rough hands surprisingly adept at coaxing beauty from discarded pieces of wood.

He’d bring her freshly caught fish, cleaned and ready to cook. She’d bake him her grandmother’s famous apple pie, the scent filling his small cottage with warmth and sweetness. These small gestures, these shared moments, were more meaningful than any grand declaration.

One evening, they were sitting on the beach, a small bonfire crackling between them. The wind whispered secrets through the dunes, and the waves crashed against the shore in a steady, hypnotic rhythm. Leo had been quiet for a long time, staring into the flames.

"This place," he said finally, his voice low, "it gets in your blood. It's hard to imagine being anywhere else."

Elara knew what he was really saying. He was rooted here, tied to the sea, to his family, to the life he knew. She, on the other hand, was a visitor, a transient, destined to return to the mainland.

"I understand," she said softly, knowing the words were inadequate, knowing they couldn't possibly convey the ache in her heart.

He turned to her, his eyes reflecting the firelight. He reached out, his hand gently cupping her cheek. The touch was electric, sending a jolt of awareness through her. He didn't say anything, but at that moment, she knew. He felt it too. This connection, this inexplicable pull, was undeniable.

The last week of her stay was bittersweet. They spent every waking moment together, soaking up the last vestiges of their time. They explored hidden coves, swam in the cool ocean, and shared countless sunsets. With each passing day, the unspoken words grew heavier, a weight between them.

On her final night, they stood on the docks, the same docks where they had first met. The ferry horn blared in the distance, a mournful sound that echoed her own feelings.

He took her hands in his, his grip firm and reassuring. "I'll miss you," he said, his voice rough with emotion.

She nodded, unable to speak, her throat tight with unshed tears.

He pulled her close, wrapping his arms around her in a fierce embrace. It was a hug that promised protection, a hug that spoke of longing, a hug that said everything that couldn't be put into words.

As she boarded the ferry, she turned back to look at him. He was standing there, silhouetted against the night sky, a solitary figure watching her leave. She raised her hand in farewell, and he mirrored the gesture.

The ferry pulled away from the dock, the gap between them widening with each passing second. As the island receded into the distance, Elara felt a profound sense of loss, a deep ache in her soul.

Back in Charlotte, life resumed its familiar pace. The oppressive heat, the demanding clients, the endless social obligations—it all felt strangely hollow. She tried to focus on her art, but her inspiration had waned. The canvases remained blank, mocking her inability to capture the essence of what she felt.

She found herself constantly thinking of him, replaying their moments together in her mind. The way he looked at her, the way he smiled, the way he made her feel—all these images were etched into her memory, a constant reminder of what she had left behind.

Weeks turned into months. She received occasional postcards from him, simple messages that spoke of the weather, the fishing, and the everyday life of the island. They were small tokens, but they kept the flame alive.

Then, one day, a package arrived. It was a wooden carving, a small, intricate sculpture of a seabird in flight. It was rough, imperfect, but undeniably beautiful. Attached was a note, written in his familiar scrawl: "Thinking of you."

That was all it took.

She knew what she had to do.

She packed a bag, grabbed her art supplies, and drove to the ferry terminal. As she waited for the boat to arrive, she felt a surge of anticipation, a sense of coming home.

The ferry horn blared, signalling its arrival. She stepped aboard, her heart pounding in her chest.

As the ferry approached Ocracoke Island, she scanned the docks, her eyes searching for a familiar figure. And then she saw him.

He was standing there, waiting, his dark hair blowing in the wind, a smile lighting up his face. He looked even more handsome than she remembered.

As she disembarked, he walked towards her, his eyes never leaving hers. He didn't say anything; he didn't need to.

He simply took her hand, and together, they walked towards the future, towards a life filled with the quiet understanding, the unwavering support, and the profound connection that needed no words to define it. They walked towards a life built not on fleeting passion but on the solid foundation of shared experiences, mutual respect, and an unspoken promise to always be there for each other, through the storms and the sunshine, for as long as the tides continued to ebb and flow. The island, the sea, the very air around them, felt like a silent witness to a bond forged in simplicity and strengthened by absence. It was a connection that resonated deeper than any spoken declaration, a quiet certainty that settled in her soul, a feeling as vast and boundless as the ocean itself.

February 19, 2025 17:09

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