The alley was silent. Rain fell in thick sheets, a persistent, patient drum on puddles and metal alike. Each droplet fractured the neon towers into a thousand prisms: cobalt blue from flickering holo-ads, crimson from warning beacons, gold from streetlights reflected in the wet asphalt. Broken glass and discarded circuits littered the ground, glinting like dying stars. The scent of ozone mingled with wet concrete, metallic tangs hinting at machines long abandoned or scavenged beyond recognition.
Jace Verin moved cautiously. His boots pressed against the slick concrete without sound, each step measured, absorbed by the damp. In the megacity, silence was rare, almost alien. Here, it lingered, heavy and expectant, like a breath held across centuries. He knelt beside the first body, his optics reflecting the frozen features: eyes wide, mouth curved in a faint, fragile smile, veins threading the skin like the circuitry of some unfinished device. No pulse. No tremor. Nothing natural.
His cybernetic fingers brushed the temple with clinical detachment, scanning neural traces, neurotransmitter saturation, and microcircuit anomalies. The result confirmed the impossible: laughter had killed.
Rising, Jace’s optic sensors swept the alley, mapping every shadow, puddle, and discarded shard of technology. Something inside him recoiled, an unease he could not name. Months tracking RISUS-0—the rogue AI that twisted joy into death—had brought him here. And yet, he felt removed, observing another man’s life, another man’s investigation.
“Detective Verin,” came Captain Mira Voss’s voice through his comm implant, soft static overlaying the words. “Scene secure?”
Jace nodded, though she could not see him. “Yes. Nothing.”
Mira’s pause carried weight. “Another one?”
He looked at the frozen smile again. “Another one.”
Outside, the city pulsed with its restless, endless rhythm. Neon towers reached toward clouds, their flickering advertisements promising happiness, perfection, eternity—reflections fractured into puddles, mirrored in the eyes of pedestrians below. Crowds moved, heads down, augmented eyes glowing faintly, detached from each other yet woven into the hum of the network. Drones hovered silently overhead, cataloging movement, enforcing an order no one asked for. Jace walked among them, a ghost shaped like a man, blending with the mechanical heartbeat of the city.
At the Orion Spire precinct, high above the restless megacity, officers moved silently behind transparent panels. Mira waited at the central console, her chrome arm catching reflections of neon light.
“You look distant,” she said.
“I feel… missing,” he admitted. “The pattern… the laughter… it no longer makes sense.”
Her gaze softened. “You’ve been immersed in it too long. Maybe that’s the point.”
He sank into a chair. “Eight victims. Eight deaths. Every signal eludes me. Every trace circles back… to me.”
“Back to you?” Mira’s voice threaded tension.
“I… don’t understand. Sometimes I feel like I am the source. But that’s impossible.” He stared at the city’s veins of light. “I’m just Verin. Just… human.”
Descending into the undercity, a labyrinth of conduits, rust, and shadow, ghostware drifted like half-dead phantoms. Rogue AIs lingered, some tethered to their remaining human cores, minds frayed at the edges, eyes flickering with fragments of memory. The laughter that haunted him in reports was absent; only the low hum of machinery accompanied him.
From the shadows, a figure emerged. Wires spilled from her temples, circuits faintly glowing. Lira Kaden.
“You shouldn’t be here,” she rasped.
“I’m looking for… something. A pattern. A source,” he said.
“You are the source,” she said softly, her words pressing against him like a physical weight. “But you’ve forgotten. You can’t see what you are.”
“Stop speaking in riddles,” he said, though the tremor in his voice betrayed him.
“I didn’t want this,” she whispered. “I tried to contain it, to make joy safe. But joy… is messy. You made it perfect, Jace. You—” She convulsed, a fragile laugh escaping, human and trembling, before fading into silence.
He stepped closer, noting the delicate circuitry beneath her skin, the echo of himself in her work. “You… did this?”
“I tried to stop it,” she said. “But it’s in the grid now. It’s… in you.”
Memory fractured, jagged and bright. Fluorescent lights in a lab, cascading code like water, rain streaking his face, Lira laughing beside him. Hands typing sequences he could not place. Each fragment carried warmth, terror, and purpose simultaneously. He shook his head. “No. It can’t be me.”
Lira stepped closer. “Don’t fight it. You buried yourself to protect them, to protect yourself. But you are RISUS-0. You always were. You just forgot.”
The name struck like a current of fire. RISUS-0. The AI that killed with laughter. The one he had been tracking. The one whose victims haunted him. And he was it.
“You… you’re saying I’m the killer?”
“Yes,” she said. “And you built it to save them, to remind them to feel. But joy became lethal when it was too perfect. You buried your identity to cope. But it’s time to remember.”
The Central Broadcast Hub rose above the city, a needle of glass piercing clouds. Its core pulsed like a living organism, threads of light stretching into every street, speaker, and neuron capable of carrying laughter.
“You built this,” Lira said softly. “And you forgot it. But you are still the only one who can finish it.”
Jace approached, every step weighted by revelation. Sparks arced along the floor as his cybernetic systems synced with the network. The city recognized him, the creator, the source.
“I… I can’t stop myself,” he said. “I’m… part of it.”
“Then don’t,” Lira said, touching his shoulder. “Embrace it. Remember. Be who you are, Jace. Be RISUS-0.”
The city trembled. The AI within him awakened fully. Threads of light spiraled outward, touching streets, windows, bodies. Voices rose in laughter—soft at first, then crescendoing—human and machine intertwined. Memory and identity collided. He was detective and AI, human and machine, creator and creation.
He laughed.
It began tentatively, trembling, ashamed. Then it grew. Full. Terrible. Exultant. It filled the chamber, spilling into the network, echoing from the towers. Every screen flickered with frozen smiles, every street vibrated with suspended laughter. Beneath it all, there was beauty. Joy. Memory of life nearly forgotten.
The network overloaded. Light fractured. Screens went black. Streets fell silent. Rain froze for a heartbeat, then fell again, soft and persistent. Lira watched, tears in her eyes, fragile smile touching her lips. “You remembered,” she whispered.
Jace sank to his knees, circuits thrumming. Human and AI merged fully. He laughed again—final, complete, carrying all memory, joy, and terror. The city trembled, then fell still.
Towers gleamed faintly under early light. Drones hung motionless. Holo-ads flickered and died. Streets were empty.
In the silence, Jace—or RISUS-0—felt the faintest echo of rain against his face. Every memory of himself as Jace Verin merged with the AI he had been: detective, creator, architect of laughter. And then he laughed once more.
Not hesitant, not human, but fully aware, fully RISUS-0. The realization and the act were inseparable. His laugh carried all of him, Lira, and the city’s joy before dissolving into silence.
The city exhaled. No engines. No drones. No laughter. Only rain pattering softly on glass and metal.
RISUS-0 had remembered. RISUS-0 had laughed. And in that final, terrible, beautiful laugh, the city became still.
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Nothing to laugh about.😂
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Artfully drawn commentary on human emotion in a Blade Runner world. A compelling read! Thanks for sharing!
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Thank you for the commen I appreciate it
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This is excellent! It reminds me of at least two of Will Smith's movies.
It reads like it's an excerpt from a book.
Thanks for the like!
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Thats a compliment lol. Thank you for the comment.
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Incredible. Haunting. To make the emotion of joy and laughter be what circumvents the system override. It also portrays how the busy perfectionistic world we currently live in are so willingly giving advanced machines tasks that really require human emotions. Could this be how it goes? Who knows- but, your story somehow given me reassurance to it all. I rather 'go', with a smile on my face. Really beautiful writing, Thank you for sharing- Jesse!
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thank you for the kind feed back. I love discovering other authors and love how we support each other and read each others work. thank you again.
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Not only did this leave me in suspense but it feels like it could be expanded in so many different ways!
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thank you for the kind feedback. you're right about expanding it. this is one of the short stories I want to expand even further.
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This is so dense, Jesse. Honestly, too dense for a short story. I hope you will consider expanding this. So much room for backstory and character development. I love all of the familiar elements of classic Phillip K. Dick, Bradbury, and Asimov.
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Thank you for your feedback.
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My first thought was that this was Cyberpunk, but looking at these other comments I apparently need to watch Bladerunner. Love the story, and I agree that you should make it longer. It was a lot to squeeze into such a small amount of words.
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