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It was a clear night sky I had settled myself into the arm chair soon I heard shouts within the house a boy came shouting from far how the smell is getting worst it's like rotten eggs had been burnt didn't you are smelling awfully he stared at me as if early waiting me to agree with him.yes I insited in sclience it's worst perfume I thought .He said in anger you know exactly what it is?Which this word he stormed out of sight .The next day it was most happy and cheerfully as long as rohit would not come shouting it's ok for 12 year old boy I got busy in my prayers .The other side of same area cannot they control that such a terrible voice from that particular device which they used to please god and then distribution the sleep of our kindoness and they insist that we are worst hoe that's possible ? The day had arrived once in a year a government odfical would visit and clearly view our negotiation he was a old man seated himself on wooden chair between two large looking old trees which was spread like a forest and man standing right behind him both the person appeared once at the bottom of their respective trees which each carrying some sorts of fruits gifts the one with first look like a clean shaven man from head saffron angvastra ( long cloth to cover body parts like cloak)the other person from second tree was old and had white beared and handful of fruits both greeted me and sta down without looking in each other's eyes we negotiated as every year a both of them arguing .I said shouting stop you both idiots are you sure you wanted to do this agreement ? Yes said both of them in one voice first time .Ok then it would start from today from midnight .The meeting ended .The sky was so dark nothing was clear soon red thunder Strom strike the ground so hard that every single people living in two old trees were frighten at centre of two old trees many workers started digging the ground with a big machine though it was taking like shower of stones from this point of view branches of trees were light by small lights as if there are small houses built on every tip of branch this was the only thing was glowing in dark night .It was a big white room both persons were sitted on white bench they were connected in dream by a other member and soon a loomly looking figured appeared they were shocked and bend there kness and touched the feet he was god of Forest which had not been seen since last war of civil.He spoked in high pitch of voice you both had betrayed my laws and your not worth to touch my feet but master both said once but was slicened at once you have ever wonder that which of the two trees you are living in are of same origins I hope you know it don't you?Yes both at once .Then whats point on fighting each others both of you knows the truth of last war civil war I thought you would lived as brothers but you were like enemies .Both looked shamed and stunned could not speak anything in front of god .He understood both of them feelings and got closed take my hand he insisted .Both looking confused and some what coward touched the hand and soon they saw the birth of there is own trees it was just one seed out of which the two old trees has grown they were stunned the beauty they possed the seeds breaks up two tiny leaves and handles every storm and harsh sunlight and are brought into two young lovely looking trees this time they returned the god was on bench and both of them sat on floor as if listing to there teacher I want both you to cancel the agreement to cut our roots from each other this trees are like twins one cannot survive with the help of others if both of them are cut down the two trees would instantly will fall down to hell and die .As you know you are been imprisoned for our sins you must follow and fulfill the deeds .Its last word we are made up of same elements only growing up somewhere else does not change our behaviour to others .So if we work with harmony we would able to understand each other feeling .Both looked at figure it was just light in shape of human body and soon it disappeared and both woke up from sleep .They thought a lot of that thing each of representatives head was heavy with amount of energy it possed in it and soon realized what had happen is it true to verify they gave signal to each other and soon they cancel the agreement but in repayment of that they had to give a heavy penalty and both of them agreed for that .soon the days changed and the situation also the lived happy life until a outer enemy had appeared to the front door only special people would see through the branches and locate the houses they were Bulgarians which had diobbed the God forest and join the spirit of devil's and took many of powers .This was not a joke when they realized what was standing in there front though bulgarians seemed that the last existing one would be enemy of both and they would trick them easily and killed them by default they did not know they have over comed there inner enemy and acquired the new friendship. At last they were defeated by shocking news and last only this is important in life to overcome inner enemy of each one of us and make this place paradise of life though it seems crazy there is nothing great then self character

May 03, 2020 14:16

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Kirtan Varasia
08:20 May 14, 2020

Hi Prathamesh, good story but I have a fundamental problem with the execution. It just like one big paragraph in itv lots of punctuation, spelling etc. That’s my main feedback.

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18:04 May 14, 2020

I would work on the punctuation , thanks for the true feedback

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