Before you read this story be reminded its not real, its all fictional facts and events. I like to make the story more realist to grab the readers attention by adding more effects and scenes rather than just planning an event in this case Sara being kidnapped when she was little and escaped and then gets kidnapped again when she's older and wasn't the only girl their. It wouldn't grab anyone's attention if their wasn't a past behind Sara nor current events of the kidnapper and other so called "victim's"
I hope you like the book I took a lot of time and personally written it out the night before.
The Mysterious Man
Once upon a time in a town called river valley a young girl who's 17 years old was kidnaped around age 10 by a guy she didn't know well but was around her neighborhood back when she lived in eastside. The family moved when she was 12 so Sara could have a fresh start and put the memories of her being kidnaped from someone she barely knew behind her and start fresh in a new town, new house, and a new school. But little did Sara knew her kidnapper just lived 2 blocks away from her and is back to take revenge on Sara. Sara turns to help from her boyfriend Conner Reid and the moment they start digging into her neighbor/ kidnapper a new teacher arrives and says" Hello class my name is Michael & ill be your new science teacher" then the moment she looked up and was eye to eye with this Michael all those memories came flooding in and the panic started to rise for Sara.
Sara now has a chance to: run away again leaving her family and Connor behind or To face her kidnapper and put an end to it.
Months later Sara had no memories of the night before, when she woke up she looked around and noticed this isn't her house, this isn't her bed she was on a bare basement floor, the windows were bared up with bars and barbed wires and padded with silent proof glass. As she tried to relax and remember all she knew was her mom was screaming for her to run. She got up and started pounding on the windows with her heel shoes hoping the window would break but a voice immerged from the darkness and said" its no use, don't waste your time, it doesn't work" when she turned around she wasn't the only teenager in the basement.
Megan was taken from east county around age 12 on Nov 20th 1995.
Sophia was taken from east side around age 11 on Jan 5th 1997.
Nora was taken from riverside around age 13 on July 22nd 1998.
Mia was taken from east county around 10 on August 5th 1999.
McKenna was taken from eastside around age 14 on August 15th 2000.
And again for the second time when Sara thought she was safe she was kidnapped from River Valley at age 17 on June 3rd 2001.
Not only were Megan, Sophia, Nora, Mia, & McKenna taken at a young age, close in years, and had little knowledge of the guy but all were pregnant with their kidnapper's baby.
But this was only the beginning these girl weren't only pregnant with their kidnapper's baby but they weren't victims they had many relationships with Michael before they went willingly with Michael but had Michael stage the kidnapping, gotten them pregnant willingly and now there brainwashing Sara making her believe that their all victims and they don't want to be pregnant but when their all in the same room with Michael having dinner Sara catches glances between the girls and noticed that the girls lied to her, their not victims they wanted what happened to them but she couldn't risk letting them know she was onto them and Michael so Sara played along and the moment she could get him alone she would fight with all she had to escape. But days later one of the girl came into her and said" Congratulations Sara, your going to be a momma" Now Sara is kidnapped against her will and now is having a baby from her kidnapper who she doesn't want.
6 months later Sara is so close to giving birth not knowing what she's getting herself into, she's always wanted to put her education before her and travel before she wanted to have kids, she had everything planned out but in this case she had no choice, this decision was against her wishes. Weeks later as she was cleaning the house a older boy walks by the house, she starts bagging on the window the boy stops b/c he thought he started to hear the noise she was making but he never stopped but his friend came running up behind him so she made the most noise possible, she started bagging a frying pan against the walls, the doors, and the windows.
5 mins later as she runs to the kitchen looking out the window the boy turns facing the window and their eyes to eye and the boy was Conner.
He crashed outside the house hiding until Michael came back and Connor hid Michael upon the head with a metal bat knocking him unconscious. Connor only had at least 20 mins to free Sara but the moment he got the door unlocked he and Michael got into a brawl.
Sara ran outside dialing 911 on Connor's phone and they were 15 mins away but they were fighting for almost 20 mins and then their was silence. Sara walked slowly back into the house and walked into the kitchen and found a knife into Michael's shoulder and Connor was gasping but he was only cut in his abdomen but stable.
Sara ran over putting pressure on his cut and he brings his hand to her cheek and says" I missed you" I cry and say" I missed you too"
Years later Michael was sentenced to live in federals prison, the girls were sentenced into a mental facility b/c they were engaged and accessory to false information the kidnapping of Sara, and Sara was payed over 2,000,000,000,000,000 dollars and she decided to keep the baby girl she had and named it after her nana, Emily Rose Gretchen and her, Conner and her baby girl all moved to London to start a new beginning as a family.
-Alanna Resto
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This was a very confusing story. The writer tried to tell the story about a young teenager who was captured and taken to live in a 'prison' of sorts. However, the addition of several other girls who were living in the same 'prison' started to get clouded. Unfortunately there were too many grammatical errors and too many loose ends. If the writer could re-write 'one story' and see it through to its conclusion, it would most likely make an interesting story.
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The Story of the Mysterious man is based off of a young girl who was kidnapped when she was younger but had escaped, her family moved to a new town hoping to put the kidnapping behind her and start new. Little did Sara know her kidnapper was back for revenge on her and Sara has to choose: To leave her family and boyfriend behind or to fight to survive.
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