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Apr 20, 2021

Adventure Fantasy

Hey all!!


Here is a little something I decided would be fun to try to write: a choose your own adventure! This is just something I put together over the last week or so, and it is by no means completely done. Think of it as a part one. I would really appreciate it if you took the time to complete it (it will take like 10 minutes tops). It would be amazing if you also told me what you thought about it and what path you ended up on in the comments! (It’s really obvious at the top of the slide what path you took- it’s a number/letter combination, like 3a-1). Hereβ€˜s the link: https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1G7Zu4tgBr6ADkoREZgMEm-n_geA5KAvAo0K0y2c1DCU/edit?usp=sharing


** If you don't know what a CYOA is, here is a definition: An interactiveΒ book or visual novelΒ written from a second person point of view, with the reader assuming the role of theΒ protagonistΒ and making choices that determine the main character's actions and the plot's outcome.




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68 comments

I (finally) finished Trapped and man it was epic! That should really be a novel. There was tons of humor (besides the tree puns, which were very punny XD), lots of detail, and just very descriptive! I could easily picture everything and sense it too. I was on the edge of my seat most of the time. Trapped by Lemme Out, that's just great! on page 13, there is an error tho. "Lucas calls, β€œCan Somone bring me a mirror?"" I think you mean 'someone' :) also the cliche thing was also funny! L.W.

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Ah thank you SO MUCH! I'm glad you liked it!! Thanks for catching the error (I have three editors and somehow all of us missed that...) I hope to continue writing chapters. If you want, I can let you know when I submit another chapter! Just curious- what was your favorite part? And what do you think if Zaffre and Alli?

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it happens. that would be great! hm...I liked when she was getting captive and the cliche part was very funny XD I ship them (as they say XD). they are really great together lol.

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Oh, I meant to tell you this a long time ago, but I have added a few more chapters to trapped. I don't remember what the last chapter you read was, but the document now has the chapters up to 12. :) Sorry for forgetting to tell you... πŸ™Š

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It's fine, just thanks for telling me at all lol

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Lemon Lime
03:05 Apr 29, 2021

hi, i dont want to be in the series, but thanks

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W.W. Skybelle
18:05 Apr 20, 2021

That was fun! I got the 4b outcome. I think the concept and idea of this are great! It's also similar to my Reedsycast (with the flower picking to determine your destiny/power and all. We even both have a rose in our "field", lol). I enjoyed this alot. Can't wait for part 2! Great job :)

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OH WAIT I READ THAT STORY YOU WROTE. I didn’t even realize that they were so similar until you said something- so I’m trying to say I didn’t copy you on purpose lol. I guess it was like a subconscious influence...? ;) Well, great minds think alike, I guess. Thank you for doing it!! I really appreciate it. I’m glad you liked it. Do you know if you got 4b-1 or 4b-2?

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W.W. Skybelle
18:38 Apr 20, 2021

Lol, I know. I wasn't accusing you of anything, just pointing out the similarities. And great minds do think alike ;) Np. I got 4b-1.

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Ok lol. Thanks SO much! I really appreciate it! :D

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W.W. Skybelle
18:44 Apr 20, 2021

:)

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I wasn't able to do it. It says "Access Denied"

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Um, okay then. That's interesting. Maybe try this link: https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1G7Zu4tgBr6ADkoREZgMEm-n_geA5KAvAo0K0y2c1DCU/edit?usp=sharing

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Still won't let me. oop, check your email, maybe.

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I did, and then this message popped up: β€œthe administrator for Stu.boone.kyschools.us has disabled the ability to receive items from outside their organization. If those you’re attempting to share with would like more information, they should contact their organization director immediately.” Um, do you know what it’s referring to?

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Maybe if you used a different email it might work, but idk.

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i don't have another email. I guess cuz it's from other people. that's okay. i'm sure it was cool!

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Whisper .
18:23 Apr 26, 2021

Hey, Katie. Please read my bio. Just giving this message to the people who have been the biggest blessing to me in my time here. You rock. No matter what, don't let anyone tell you otherwise. You have been so kind to me. Keep writing and remember to smile.

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:( We’ll miss you!! 😭

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Whisper .
19:09 Apr 26, 2021

:') I'll probably be active for another week or so to finish the rest of the unfinished stories, then I'm gonna delete my account. I didn't really want to delete it, but decided it was for the best, so that I'm not tempted to check on my account. Thanks for being my virtual bff.

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The pleasure is all mine. :') Reedsy will miss you!

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Whisper .
14:13 Apr 27, 2021

actually, I'm deleting my account now. sorry. maybe you can continue the cast story. bye.

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Whisper .
19:10 Apr 26, 2021

Also, I'm about to post a new story.

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Kay πŸ”₯
14:29 Apr 26, 2021

I'm excited to see the second part! (I didn't know you posted the choose-your-own-story thing you've been working on... I really need to check Reedsy more often!) And of course you already know which path I picked πŸ˜‰ Has anyone else picked fire yet? πŸ”₯

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Yes, actually! Two people have. One chose the same path as you did. :)

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Hi! I made a quiz for all time loki, would you mind taking it please? :) thank you! :D https://forms.gle/ejcsvDjLS8auomTB8

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part 4 is out btw :)

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Whisper .
14:32 Apr 22, 2021

Hey, Katie! Just wanted to let you know I changed my name! (You might still have no idea who this is. If you don't, read my bio)

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Kk. Thanks for letting me know! :D

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I love CYOA stories and had so much fun with this one! My outcome was 3A-2. Great job, I’ll be waiting for part 2! 🐬 - πŸˆβ€β¬›

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Thank you for doing it! I really appreciate it and I’m glad you liked it! :D

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Bruh, if you like fantasy,, Then... WHY HAVENT YOU READ KEEPER OF THE LOST CITIESSSS???? it is wonderfully awesome. πŸ† πŸ…

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... Well. I actually haven’t heard if it. 😬 Who’s the author?

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IT IS SO WONDERFULLY AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I TOTALLY AGREE!!!!!

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I adore such stories!!! Ohmigod. I LOVED THISSSSSS!! but, please, for the love of God, (if you're an atheist, for the love of cookies) WRITE PART TWO QUICKLYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!! I'm just waiting!! Loved it! -Sia

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Thanks! I’m glad you liked it!! Do you know which path you ended on? I hope to write more sometime today, but they won’t come out until next week sometime...

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:)) 4A! Ooh, okay, keep writing!

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Arwen Dove
22:33 Apr 20, 2021

Love this! I got 4a.

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Thank you! I’m glad you like it!

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I believe that the possible outcomes are: 3a-1 3a-2 3b-1 3b-2 4a: (Here is the link for part 2 if this was the path you took: https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1mQWSEx3E21uAmloOJlGt_OG4cQUDc7D8VSSWV_qMx9E/edit?usp=sharing ) 4b-1 4b-2

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I loved this so much! How did you make the slide so that anyone with the link could access it?

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You mean the entire presentation? Or the hyperlinks within the choa?

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The entire presentation. I meant slides

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Oh. It's up on the upper right of the presentation. The button says "share". if you click that, it should give you options about sharing. To make anyone be able to see it, change the setting to "Anyone on the internet with this link can view". You might want to double check that everyone who can see it can only view and not edit. The setting for that should be in the same place. I hope this is helpful! :)

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Just curious- what result did you get?

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Dhwani Jain
14:23 May 27, 2021

I got 4b-1!! Nice concept. How did you make it? Also, 🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬🐬

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1) Okay, I just walked out of a particularly difficult exam, and your comment lifted my spirits. 2) thanks for the dolphins!! 3) it’s kind of hard to explain. I used google slides to do it. You have to insert hyperlinks, which is easy to look up if you don’t know how to do them. As for the story, I had to make myself a chart with all the possible outcomes and paths. Then all I had to do was write the actual story(ies). 4) thanks for reading! I appreciate it. Are there any stories of yours you would like me to read/comment on?

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Dhwani Jain
16:30 May 27, 2021

1) Happy to help. BTW, which exam was it? 2) You're welcome, anytime, really! 3) Sweet! (Will probably try to make one, but maybe not) 4) Welcome (again...). Yeah..I have only got 6 stories yet but 3 of them have received great comments: -->My 80th Birthday Party -->The Gecko -->Two Drops Please do comment your reviews. 5) Also, I have a question for you, did you receive the critique circle email this week? 6) Please do check my bio. I have a blog and 2 quizzes I would love you to do. Thanks for everything!!! [and for reading this extraa...

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Algebra exam. Algebra will be the death of me. I’ll be sure to check them out!! Ha, that email. I haven’t received it in months. (It also only comes when you submit a story but the last few times I’ve submitted I haven’t gotten anything. Last time was in... December, maybe? All right, I’ll look at those too!!

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Dhwani Jain
14:07 May 31, 2021

Okay...thanks for the input on all of them!

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TLO part 2 is out, and you're featured!

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Arya Jackson
22:22 Jun 06, 2021

NICE

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I’m glad you liked it! Out of curiosity, what path did you end up on?

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Hello! How are you? πŸ˜„

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Good, thanks! Super sore cuz I hiked 5 miles today. Wbu?

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Oof. That sounds rough, but hiking is so much fun! I’m great! Just working on writing my book.

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Yep hehe! Oooh that’s awesome! How far through are you?

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I have 23 chapters (28000ish words). It will probably be about 30-40 chapters when I’m done.

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