Mar 26, 2021

Friendship

Hey everyone! I know its been kinda crazy with all the down voting and stuff but I decided to post some things u guys can look at, and its a good way to let go some of the stress. I'll try to post any updates and stuff I do! Feel free to share things about yourself as well!

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-Varsha



The summary of my novel:


16-year-old Julianna Cult didn't know what she was getting into when she fled to Maine after finding out her mother and stepfather decided to move to a new country without her consent.

She took the step forward in life to go from paradise and warm kissed sands of Florida to freezing and barren lands of Maine to live with a father who she has never met in years.

Upon arrival, she misses her home but soon after making friends she feels at home.

Life again seemed regular until she encounters the secret in the woods near the house.

Her life seemed at stake every day as she befriends a creature that could kill her in seconds...


And Preface:

Julie:

My life was never interesting, just a life of a regular teenage girl. I always dreamed of living the life of a fantasy wonderland but that never happened until I departed my hometown of sunny-side state Florida and moved to freezing Maine.

My whole life felt like a waste of time as I glanced at his eyes. A spark of aspiration kept me near him, we were different species. Yet, I felt a connection between us. He was the one I was looking for, we were destined to cross paths or else I wouldnโ€™t have even dreamed of travelling hundreds of miles away to come to an unknown and remote location.ย 

I began to discover things that seemed untrue. I began to hear his voice even if he couldnโ€™t speak. It was like my life had a purpose, like I wasnโ€™t ordinary at all.

Maybe life does have surprises waiting in every corner.

Daniel:ย 

She came.

It was like a miracle.

But we werenโ€™t supposed to be friends, she was in danger every second she spent time with me.

I feared sheโ€™d get hurt because of me.

No.

I canโ€™t let another person who I love die.

Never.


One of my first writing/ sneak peek : ( Its really terrible which is why I didn't continue but I wanted to share it anyway)


I was so tired of hearing, "Why donโ€™t you be more like your sister, sheโ€™s so responsible.โ€ Everybody loved my sister, like one time when we went out for dinner and she helped an old woman who dropped her change and the lady gave her a dollar as a reward. It's not like sheโ€™s bad but when I want to help she goes before me and helps. She gets all the credit. My sister never makes a single mistake, she gets straight A+ in all her classes and she does not talk when someone else is talking. My sister is like Mrs. Perfect and I bet she would win medals and trophies when she grows up. Iโ€™m Madison by the way and my pitch perfect sister is my twin sis Madeline. Just because we were twins, a lot of people assume we would be alike but that's not the case here since we don't have much in common except our big green eyes. I have brown hair and I am a few inches shorter than Madeline. My sister on the other hand is a blondie and she loves to be fashionable but I am not really into the fashion trend. My family is pretty big so I feel left out sometimes. I have no brothers, only sisters. Sometimes I wish I had a brother but that's life. My oldest sister is Sandra who is 16 also has brown hair that is mostly grumpy because sheโ€™s a teen and teens are always like. Then it's Madeline because she's the oldest twin by a minute and then it's me and we are both 12 about to be 13 soon but then we have to act like Sandra. Then my little sister Abby who is 8 and she's a science weisz. She's always trying new experiments but once it turned into a disaster so my mom said no more experiments inside the house only outside. Finally it's my youngest sis, 2 year old Ruth who was named after my dad's mom aka my grandma who passed away the year Ruth was born.ย Sometimes I feel bad for my dad Daniel because heโ€™s stuck with 6 ladies which includes my mom Ellen. My mom is the best but she is strict about one thing I wanted since I was about Ruth's age. Let me give you a hint, it has 4 legs, is furry and barks. You guessed it, it's a dog. I wanted a dog for a long time and every christmas and birthdays I hoped for one but no dog turned up but last christmas I saw a big box with holes all over it and it had a big red ribbon under our tree. I thought of why the present had holes then I remembered that I had seen a youtube video of a girl who got a present like mine and there was a puppy inside. I was so excited but I didn't show it on my face and when it was time to open presents I dived through all the other presents and got my hands over the box. I cut the ribbon with scissors and opened the box and to my surprise it was not a dog but a cat. I was upset but Madeline was not and she took the black and white cat out and started to play with it. My sis loved cats like I love dogs. She thanked my parents and went to play with the cat. That's how we got Milo, a british shorthair cat. We also have a scarlet macaw which is a breed of parrot who we named Rita. Rita was a rainbow color parrot and she was a gift to mom from my aunt who has a bunch of bizarre and unusual pets. I would give hints to my parents to get me a dog for christmas but they never bought a dog. Dad didn't have anything against dogs so he agreed when I asked him for a dog but he also said mom had to approve for a dog too! Mom would never agree for a dog and when I asked her the reason why she would say what every parent would say like how dogs are messy and they chew on things. But that's not what bothered mom when I said the word dog because I know mom had a dog when she was little so why is she not letting me have a dog when she spent her life with a furry canine. When I went to my grandparents house which is in Texas last summer I got the answer to my question. My grandma told me the story as I sat next to my grandpa. My sisterโ€™s Abby, Ruth and mom had gone to do shopping and dad was back at home since he had work to do and Madeline and Sandra went to go see a band that had come to play at the town square. Grandma brought chocolate chip cookies my fav as she told the story of mom's heroic dog Patch.

โ€œWhen your mom was little she wanted a dog. One day me and your grandpa found a stray little dalmation puppy and we brought him home and your mom fell in love with him at first sight. They were like two peas in a pod.โ€ grandma said as a tear rolled down her wrinkled cheek. Grandpa gave her a tissue and she wiped her eyes.

โ€œSo one day when your grandpa was at work and I was inside cleaning the house your mom was playing in our small front yard with Patch. Suddenly Patch stopped playing and he ran toward the street. I told your mom never to go near the street so she called out to Patch but he kept going so Ellen walked near the street calling out to him and that's when she noticed that a little girl was crying in the middle of the street. Patch helped the little girl across the other side of the street where the girl's mother was crying when she saw her daughter safe and sound. When Patch was coming back to your mother suddenly a big truck hit him and โ€ฆโ€ Grandma stopped and wiped her tears again. I was also getting sad and emotional too so I took out a tissue and wiped my tears too.

โ€œWhat happened next grandma, was Patch...ok?โ€ I asked eagerly.

Grandpa asked,โ€Maria do you want me to say the rest of the story? Grandma nodded and took a cookie and took a small bite.

โ€œSo when the truck hit poor Patches he fell down and was losing a lot of blood. Your mom ran to the street and held Patch and she was crying. Grandma saw what had happened through the kitchen window and ran toward the street. All the people near us came to see what had happened. People who were in cars came out to see what the commotion was all about. The lady and the little girl came too to thank your mom and her dog but was sorry for what happened to Patch. After that day your mom never forgot about Patch and when we tried to get another dog for your mom, she said that she did not want to any other dog since Patch was in her heart and that's why your mom doesn't want to get a dog for you since she does not want you to be heartbroken like what had happened to her.

โ€œBut... that doesn't mean it will happen to me?โ€ I wondered.

I donโ€™t know sugar plum but don't worry I have a feeling you might get a dog pretty soon.โ€ said grandpa as he winked at me.ย 





Questions:

Ask me anything related to writing or my preferences. I'll try to answer as much as possible! Feel free to let me know yours as well!


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LOL so longggggggggg



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107 comments

Danny Dorito~
00:22 Apr 10, 2021

Sorry for taking so long to get to your novel, I had to fix a bunch of things before getting back to everything :((( im sorryyyyyyy There weren't many to fix, and by that I mean only two, and it was AMAZSHINGGGGG, if you added any more chapters let me know :) <3

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Hey danny! Aww, no problem<33 I totally understand, and thank you so much for taking the time to still help me. <33 I hope u have a wonderful week! And I have written more chps, I'll let u know when I post them.

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Danny Dorito~
02:04 Apr 10, 2021

No problem <33 it's amazing ackkk xD you too :) oohh where are you gonna be posting them? :>

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Aww, thank youuU! Glad ur back! I will post them in our doc, I am also posting the latest one with all edits done in wattpad!

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Danny Dorito~
01:22 Apr 11, 2021

No problem :)) Oohh you have wattpad? I'll be sure to check that out too :))

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Kay (:
15:39 Apr 03, 2021

This is a neat story! I know the one at the end was older, but it was good! Maybe if you edit it in the future try spacing out the paragraphs!

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Hey Kay! Thank you a bunch for reading it!!! Did u think the preface was good? Thanks for the advice BTW!

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Kay (:
23:24 Apr 03, 2021

Hey! Yeah no problemo! Yeah, I found it very intriguing !

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Thanks so much Kay! If u want, I'm going to post my novel in Wattpad, u can read chp 1 there! if u want:)

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Kay (:
03:22 Apr 04, 2021

That'd be awesome! I'd love to read it! Also would you mind reading Trickster gets Tricked?

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This is pretty interesting! My one thing of critique is the massive dialogue where she talks about her dog/ be like her sister is literally like 1000 words. Maybe cut that up a little?

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Hey Ethan! Thank you! Yeah, like I said, it was an old story so its not as good. But thank you for the feedback!

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Hey Varsha! Honestly with exams and all it's been so tough, I haven't hadn't ny time to even think about Reedsy! Now that I'm back, I'm going to do my best to catch up on all of your stories, please don't hate me for taking so long to respond! I'll get at Wattpad in a few days, btw. Love, Sythe(why did that autocorrect to Slytherin lol)/Night

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Hey Sythe! Oh, I see. I'm glad your back though! I would never hate u, your my friend! Sure, NP, take ur time! Your friend, Varsha(LOL)

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Thanks so much, it means the world to me! Are you on Discord, btw? And also, have you heard anything about Akshaya, lol? I've been looking for a way to reach her but she doesn't seem to have anything besides Reedsy...

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Of course Sythe! No, but I can chat on gmail, wattpad and remind. Yea, we talk in gmail. oh, i see. u want me to tell her anything? u can try talking to her in gmail or hangouts. maybe we can all create a hangouts for reedsy?!

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Ah, can I take your email id? I have Wattpad, but the app doesnt give the Inbox (why I always forget it, ugh!) and I don't have remind... Reedy's great, but not so convenient for chatting, isn't it ;) ? Spiffing! Can you ask her if I can contact her by email or something? Because I have her email, but I didn't want to just use it without, you know... (long story). Sure, that'd be awesome!

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Sure. Fasthippo25@gmail.com U can also fill out my form in my bio to get in the hangouts. No worries! Yea. i agree. Sure, I'll tell her! :D

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Jose Valdivia
16:41 Apr 17, 2021

Hey Varsha! This was pretty good. You said that this was a novel you were working on? Anyway, I caught a few grammatical errors but they were minor. I liked the backstory of the mom's dog Patch. That story reminded of what happened to my own mom's dog: Pickles. :( I really enjoyed reading this snippet and I look forward to reading more of your stories. Is there a story in particular you'd recommend for me to read of yours? By the way, I read your bio and your hobbies are basically all of mine, too. XD Good luck with your novel! ๐Ÿช

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Hi Jose! Aww, thank you so much! Yes, this is a novel I hopefully will be able to complete! Thank you~!!! Aww, I'm so sorry about Pickles:( You can check out 'A heart made out of metal' but anything is fine! LOL, what a coincidence! U play piano?! Thank you!!! If u want to read chapter 1, u can read it on Wattpad! My account name is @Varshavimal.

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Jose Valdivia
19:03 Apr 17, 2021

Yes, I'd love to check that one out! I'm working on a novel, too but the process has been so tedious. I don't know if it's any good, but I've already put in so much work to just give up on it. Hello fellow piano player! I have a keyboard, but I've always wanted a real piano. I just saw your account on Wattpad, and I'll make sure to check it out soon. The preface was so mysterious and intriguing! I've never used that website before so I might make an account for it.

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Thank you so much! Your support means a lot! Oh, nice, working on a novel is no easy task, good luck!!! u can also put your novel in wattpad, I would love to read it sometime! Nice, same here! Yea, they are very expensive. Aww, thank you! Yess, u should! Welcome aboard!

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03:55 Apr 23, 2021

Where I can read the chapter one too I a. am keen to read novel will you please elaborate the site

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Hey Bia! Sure, it's my pleasure. This is called Wattpad. go to http://wattpad.com/login and make an account. After that, u can search up my account name or give me urs so I can follow u. My account name- @Varshavimal

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Spamming makes me dizzy. Thanks for spreading cheer! Is that Christmas? I dunnoooooo

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07:06 Apr 06, 2021

thank you for for writing such a wonderful story

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Kate Reynolds
22:41 Mar 26, 2021

#StopDownvotingNow Someone told me to send this to ten friends and put it in my bio so here ya go

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Whisper .
20:06 Mar 26, 2021

If you want to get rid of the 'Ignore's you can just edit them out, and it still works fine! I really like this idea and look forward to the next parts!

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Kate Reynolds
12:10 May 03, 2021

Varsha. Your novel is certainly NOT terrible, IT IS SO DANG GOOD AND I LOVE IT. I JUST LOVE THE IDEA OF IT AND YOUR WRITING AND AAAAAHHHHHHH EVERYTHING XD

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Hey, just letting you know Part 11 of the Adapters is out! Unfortunately, you are not featured and the few people that are only have small mentions. This story is revolved around the Battle of the All-Beasts, go check it out! :D

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18:36 Apr 24, 2021

But we werenโ€™t supposed to be friends; WHY?

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Beverly Riddle
14:59 Apr 23, 2021

Whoa! Great story! I was just wondering, could you do me a small favor? I'm currently trying to write a chapter book called The Secret Journey. I posted what I have so far on Reedsy recently, so I'm not sure if it will show up right away. But if you can, would you mind reading what I have so far, and giving me feedback, or some tips I can use to make it better? I think I only have about 7 chapters done, and most of them are pretty short.

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03:52 Apr 23, 2021

" Maybe life does have surprises waiting in every corner" very impressive sentence you wrote , genre,technique, style is unique giving deep understanding of characters

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