Keep The Paper Coming (A Reedsy Fanfic)

Submitted for Contest #70 in response to: Write about a character who everyone thinks is guilty of something terrible, but isn’t.... view prompt

Dec 04, 2020

Creative Nonfiction Friendship Happy

We sat quite lazily on short stumps on the edge of Rhonda's lake. About an hour before, some of us had dared each other to swim, but after Leo emerged covered in leeches the rest of us decided not to try it. We'd felt safe sending Leo first, though; he was always that guy to put his neck on the line for things like that. Critiquing bad stories and swimming in suspicious lakes? He's your man.

Scout and I were trying to make a fire in the center of the circle of stumps, to no avail. 

"I just don't get it," Ru kept saying. "You have all the kindling you need!"

"Oh, shut up," Ria snapped finally. "The twigs are wet, can't you see? Paper isn't enough!"

"Thanks, Ru," I said, sort of to soften the blow, "but we're okay. Just, everyone, keep the paper coming."

No one looked up. All had several pieces of paper on their laps and were scribbling as fast as they could. As soon as they finished a side, they read over it, looking disgusted, crumpled it up, and threw it toward Scout and me. We had quite a pile going; we’d all been writing for several hours now. 

"Writers," I said in excuse to Scout, shrugging comically. We all laughed. 

Rhondalise stood after a minute and went to her small bright-yellow house and brought out lemonade. On her waist she had clipped a palm-sized discolored doll; Bert from Sesame Street. It bounced when she walked. So did her necklace made out of a bathplug. No one noticed these fun oddities any longer; we'd grown used to them.

There were fourteen of us: Amaya, Rhonda, Scout, Abies, Ru, Leo, Maya, Sia and Ria, Vayd, Avani, Deborah, Aerin, and myself. Zil. Code name: Xcylla. We sat in a circle scribbling. The papers cracked under the forceful weight of the pens, scratched hastily, broken through in tiny holes from panicky haste. A writer’s circle. 

“Hey, Rhonda, wasn’t Celeste supposed to be here?” Sia asked after a few more minutes of loud scratching and rude slurping of lemonade. 

“Yeah…” she said slowly, pushing her glasses up her nose. They'd slid down several inches without her noticing. “I wonder where she is? And Kendra was supposed to be here too.”

“I’m here!” we heard someone gasp.

"Speak of the devil," Maya said brightly.

It was Kendra, jogging halfheartedly up the grassy hill from the street, a bag slung over her shoulder. “I had so much homework! And my brother wouldn’t shut up when I said he couldn’t come.”

“Hi, Kenny,” Ria said. 

“Don’t call me that.”

Ria stuck out her tongue and said, “Where’s Celeste?”

“Who?”

“Oh, you don’t know her,” I said knowledgeably. 

Kendra shrugged and sat down on an empty stump. “Ah-h-h,” she sighed, letting out the air from her lungs. “How’s the fire coming?”

“Don’t ask,” Scout said darkly. “Here, use all mine. I hate them. All of them.”

“But they’re so good, Scout!” we all exclaimed. 

“No-o!” she said dramatically. “They’re a disaster. Ruinous. Horrible. Only fire fodder. Burn them all!”

“Celeste’s missing,” Aerin reminded everyone loudly. 

“I bet she’s kidnapped,” said Scout, who wrote mostly sad stories. 

“I bet she’s dead,” said Abies, who had no mercy for her characters. 

“I bet she’s eating cotton candy at the fair,” said Rhonda brightly, who loved her characters. 

“I bet she’s sitting in traffic,” I said, who sometimes had no imagination.

"Who's this?" asked Deborah, who had so many characters she couldn't keep them, much less real people, straight.

“Probably fighting a dragon,” said Leo, who liked that kind of thing.

“Guys, I think she’s kidnapped,” said Ria, who was more practical so we looked up and listened when she said that. 

“What makes you think that?” Rhonda and I said together. 

“Remember she was getting those threats?” Aerin said excitedly, who had also gotten threats. We all had, actually. 

“So…? We all have,” I said. 

“She got more than even Kendra did. I bet she actually did get kidnapped.”

“Who’d do such a thing?” Avani asked. 

“Anyone,” Vayd said darkly. He was a pessimist. 

“They always signed their notes as “DV” -- as in DownVoter,” Aerin said, with the aura of someone revealing a great secret. 

“I bet it’s B.W.,” said Emma, whom we didn’t know and who’d popped up from behind a stump.

“Go away, Emma!” we all shouted. 

“B’s not even here! You’re mean,” Aerin said meanly.

“Okay then, sorry…” Emma said meekly, and left. 

Aerin was right, though. B wasn’t there, and was much too sweet anyway to kidnap anyone. Besides, she got constant, tiny little death threats, more than anyone else.

“Yeah, guys, B's too nice," I said, searching in my pockets.

“I thought it was Batool at first,” someone offered. 

“Well, I thought it was that girl Mira. Or May. Maxine?”

“Maggie,” I said dismissively. “And yeah, I did too. Then I thought it was someone named Autumn.”

“Who?” everyone said. 

I shrugged. Then I pulled out my phone and old, tangled earbuds and put them in. “She’s probably just late, guys, and anyway, I think those threats are just a glitch.”

“How the heck is that a glitch?” Aerin shouted. 

I shrugged and started moving my head up and down to 88 Lines About 44 Women. “I dunno. It just has to be.”

“I swear, guys, it’s B.W.,” said Tom, who’d popped up like Emma. “How else is she supposed to be so far up the leaderboard?”

“Up the what?” everyone said, bewildered. 

“I mean, know so much about everyone’s notes? If she isn’t sending them how does she know what we’re getting?”

Vayd scowled and said, “Go back, kiddo.”

“Because we told her,” Abigail said baldly, looking up from the tenth four-page story she'd written that afternoon. 

“Go away, moron,” Amaya said. When she stood menacingly, Tom scrabbled away.

“Guys,” I said, too loudly because of the earbuds. “Got a question for yah.” I stood and the cord yanked on a little knot on the stump I was sitting on, pulling the buds out of my ears. I cursed under my breath and said, “I swear, I am a walking advertisement for AirPods.”

“We need to go find Celeste,” Avani said firmly. 

I hadn’t heard her. The music was too loud; I was probably half-deaf anyway. “Do I sound like this?” and pulled the cord out of the phone. The song blared:

“Zilla was an archetype, 

The voodoo queen, the queen of wrath.”

“Nah,” Rhonda said. 

“No way,” said Leo. 

“Not really,” Sia said kindly. 

“Nope,” said Deborah.

I sat down, disappointed. “I thought not.”

"Hi, guys," someone said. We looked up. An enormous crowd, several hundred strong, was walking slowly up the hillock from the road. We recognized a few people; Orenda, Haripriya, and B herself were leading the pack, but Vayd said quizzically:

"Who's all this?"

"It's the rest of the Reeders," Ria whispered to him, a little condescendingly.

"Oh!"

"Yeah, hi," said the real DV, pushing forward through the crowd. "Didn't invite us, huh? Makes you uncomfortable?"

"Shut up," Haripriya said.

"Rude," B said.

"Oh, be quiet," Orenda said. They were like the three Graces, reprimanding the real DV. "We were just saying hi."

"How many of you are there?!" we all asked together, unbelievingly.

Haripriya shrugged. "About four or five hundred..."

We gasped.

"And that's not everyone," Leo said smartly.

"Come on, guys, let's go. They're writing," B said commandingly. Her voice was gentle but leader-like, and everyone followed her away from our group and down the road again. Some looked wistfully after our half-full glasses of lemonade.

"Bye!" Haripriya said over her shoulder.

“Next time,” Rhonda said, taking the lemonade glasses into her long skirt to go back to the house, “We’ll invite B.W. and Haripriya and Orenda and everyone else on the Afrassi ship.”

“Nice,” I said. “Good.”

“Guys!” Aerin shouted again. “Where is Celeste?”

“I think she’s just busy with Eye Are Ell,” I said. 

“What?” three people said.

“IRL,” I repeated. “Real life? Like homework and work stuff and whatever?”

“Oh-h-h…”

“Guys, I’m here!” came a small voice from down the hillock, close to the road. “I’m just here for a second.”

She walked up, gave us a little, half-sad smile, and said, “I’m alive, don’t worry.”

Then she turned and left. 

She was like that sometimes.

"We love you, Celeste!" someone shouted.

"Come back! Write with us!"

"Love you!"

“Bye,” I repeated loudly, 88 Lines About 44 Women still blaring. “Here, Scout, try putting a sheet there. In that corner. No, there. Maybe it’ll catch. Here, I'll do it.”

“Anyone else have matches?” Scout asked the circle. 

“Here,” said Vayd, pulling a box from underneath his baseball hat. He was like that, too.

“Thanks.”

Nothing for a moment, just the swish of the lake water and the scratch of pens on paper.

“Hey, keep that paper coming, please,” I said, breaking the silence as Scout blew gently on what flame we had. They all grinned at me. We all knew they would. After all, they were writers.

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A.g. Scott
18:31 Dec 09, 2020

Holy shit, dude. You edited everything but the things I can gather from the comments tell me your portrayal of Tom was entirely inappropriate. Obviously this is an inside joke for you and your reedsy friends... why did you feel the need to include Tom's name, especially in that way? Obviously you have the most exposure on this site, so this was irresponsible. Add to that the fact that you were totally flippant toward him in replying to his comments... I don't know, man. Disappointing. (You shouldn't be sorry that other people acted rashly on...

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Zilla Babbitt
22:13 Dec 09, 2020

Actually, I kept everything except a section where Vayd stood up (and edited grammar). I would taken him out completely per his request, but the story was approved too soon. As I've explained to Leo, I wrote what I have been seeing, in his conduct toward B and everyone else's reactions. Would you mind pointing out where I have been flippant? I did not intend to be! I try to be polite in everything. Thanks for your thoughts, A.g. :)

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A.g. Scott
22:33 Dec 09, 2020

Right. A public humiliation is equal in measure to a promptly deleted comment based on a genuine and valid frustration. For anyone reading this, let's be specific. Zilla depicted Tom as creeping out in the bushes as an outcast, called him a moron, and had him cower away back into the forest. I believe there was also a mention of somebody shoving him over at some point. Now look, clearly you had issues with the way he behaved. That's something that should be solved one on one, not on a story that you know for a fact is going to be one of the ...

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Zilla Babbitt
22:38 Dec 09, 2020

Yes, I realize I was at fault in this story. It's passive-aggressiveness, is how I see it, which isn't okay. You're not passive-aggressive at all! However, I had zero part in the controversy over Tom's comment on B's story, except to advise her to forgive him. I don't disbelieve that he got hate on other sites. I think that's despicable. I am sorry so many have acted rashly, including myself. In any case, none of us -- none -- have behaved as maturely as we could have.

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A.g. Scott
23:18 Dec 09, 2020

Forgive me if I was too harsh. It felt like people ganging up, and I HATE that.

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Zilla Babbitt
23:27 Dec 09, 2020

No worries. Rereading the comments I see that too. What saddens me is that the whole DV controversy, from losing points to ranting and writing about them, has caused people to leave. Good people too, like Tom. I've considered taking a break at the least because of it. I decided against it for many reasons though, and I'm glad I've stayed. You might be too angry to respond to my comment on your story, so I'll just reiterate that it was a fun, suspenseful read with one confusing sentence :)

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Tom .
06:47 Dec 05, 2020

Congratulations on your 200th story. As we have never had a conversation or interacted to any degree I must say I found you including me on your story, confusing, mean and unchristian. Due to how uncomfortable it has made me feel. The truth is I am very private person and posting stuff publicly was difficult for me; different generation and all that. I will be leaving Reedsy Prompts. I have deleted my stories. You can add them to your fire. Thank you for the showing me the kindness and compassion of the community. I wish you all many happ...

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Zilla Babbitt
20:01 Dec 05, 2020

Oh, Tom, that's simply not true. I've read all of your stories and commented on quite a few. I was playing on the fact that you have questioned the fact that B's so high on the leaderboard with so few stories. I am not accusing you of anything. Forgive me for assuming the incident was minute enough to smile at and write about. As it is, I'm sorry you're leaving. I've enjoyed your work. AllPoetry, Short Edition, and Furious Fiction are good writing sites to use. AllPoetry doesn't pay anything, and I'm not sure about Short Edition, but FF ...

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Tom .
21:36 Dec 05, 2020

I wrote a single comment, which was truthful, but harsh deleted it ten minutes later. I was then trolled quite heavily on Reedsy, then on my Facebook account, then on a business account, then on the account of not for profit social organisation I fund. All by members of Reedsy prompts. That's the problem when you deal with second hand information with authority, not everything is always minute. Pebbles can cause ripples that travel a long distance. I am a man in his forties, why would I want to be in a story hiding like a golem behind rocks ...

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Zilla Babbitt
21:43 Dec 05, 2020

I had no idea you were being trolled across the board. Then again, what you are telling me is second-hand information. If what you say is true, I'm truly sorry that so many people acted rashly. B is very loved here. I'll say it again, you will be missed.

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Tom .
21:48 Dec 05, 2020

Please do not include me in anymore stories, you do not have my permission.

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Zilla Babbitt
22:26 Dec 05, 2020

Don't worry, I have no intention of doing so in the future.

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B. W.
22:47 Dec 05, 2020

I know i shouldnt be saying anything with this but I'm just so confused dude- how was it unchristian?

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Tom .
23:29 Dec 05, 2020

I believe the target for this story was you. I believe it is a passive/agressive attack. I think that was how I got bundled into the story. If you read between the lines of the piece, it is unkind, it at it's heart to me is simple piece of bullying against you. Now more rational voices will argue against what I have said, but the endless championing of it and positive reinforcement I have found quite ugly. I have found unchristian. But that is only my critique, my personal opinion. It certainly is not Reedsy Prompts at its finest.

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Tom .
23:34 Dec 05, 2020

It reads like a private joke. It is being reedited and changed so it's intentions will be easily defended.

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Tom .
00:21 Dec 11, 2020

You, RK and Leo asked me to. I thought about what you all said, weighed up how important it really was. I realised other things were more important.

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Amaya Macaulay
00:53 Dec 11, 2020

awesome!

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B. W.
23:50 Dec 05, 2020

I thought you were talking about how you were in the story and I was just confused about it a lot. Though she didn't mean for it to sound like that and so she changed some of the stuff in the story.

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Tom .
00:09 Dec 06, 2020

We might not be friends, BW, but I recognise a duck hunt. I don't want to really be on this site anymore. Look after yourself. 👍

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B. W.
00:14 Dec 06, 2020

alrighty

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Rayhan Hidayat
07:13 Dec 04, 2020

Now this is how you commemorate 200 stories. A wholesome tribute to the community 😙

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Zilla Babbitt
19:52 Dec 05, 2020

Yay! Looking forward to your next ...

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Rayhan Hidayat
00:59 Dec 06, 2020

I think I’m slowly turning into Laura Clark where I only submit when I feel like it. Don’t worry though, I’ll still be on—and hopefully my stories will be higher quality that way. Just feeling burnt out lately.

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Zilla Babbitt
21:46 Dec 06, 2020

Laura hasn't posted in so long and it's such a loss. Her last story was one of her best, too. I'll keep waiting though :) And I totally get that burnt-out feeling. Sometimes you just need to take a break.

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Rayhan Hidayat
00:20 Dec 07, 2020

I will literally be there in a flash as soon as she posts. It’s hard to pick a favorite, but any of her sci fi stories are ace in my book, especially “Rishi plummeted to her death.” 😉

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Zilla Babbitt
22:47 Dec 09, 2020

Same! That line, as I've said before, is literally iconic.

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Zilla Babbitt
02:03 Dec 04, 2020

In honor of my 200th story... Thank you Scout for the idea. Please comment ideas on where this should go/be elaborated. I forgot about this until about noon and then forgot again about five o'clock, so I was scrambling to get it out by Thursday. Totally unedited, but it was a fun story to write. Sorry if I left you out. I just put the people I thought of first.

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B. W.
00:00 Dec 06, 2020

All the characters could just end up finding the real DV and have a battle with them? It seems weird but why not? It wouldn't be a regular one, each character would be fighting the DV with what they use, like for example I guess I'd use some sort of Fantasy stuff.

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Zilla Babbitt
00:06 Dec 06, 2020

Oh that sounds really fun. That's a great idea actually. I don't want to rework the whole thing, so I'll save that idea for 250 or 300. Thanks, B!

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B. W.
00:10 Dec 06, 2020

What if you might forget it though?

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Zilla Babbitt
00:19 Dec 06, 2020

Good point. I have this comment to remind me! And I can make a note to myself too :)

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B. W.
01:06 Dec 06, 2020

You'll probably get to 250 stories real soon to be honest

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Wow Zilla! This is your annual 200th story. Honestly, this is such a nice story idea! What a lovely friendship/happy story you gave the readers at the end! I loved the way you approached the story (as of characters) like Aerin or Rhonda! It was such a lovely, and a memorable 200th story. You did an amazing job! :) P.S. Thanks for including me in the story! I'm so glad that you all thought of inviting me in that Afrassi Ship!! 😁

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Zilla Babbitt
19:47 Dec 05, 2020

Thank you! It was really fun :)

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I'm sure it was! :)

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Splinter Magus
20:06 Dec 05, 2020

I don't use social media. There are so many toxic places on the internet it's hard to find nice, honest communities. They're rare. But this, this story, this relationship, this community... I was talking to my wife today about how it seems we're on a sort of third age of the internet. At first not everyone had access to it, so communities were small and honest. I still have good friends and memories from those times. Then, everyone was on the internet, and it became a chaotic and toxic place. It required a lot of emotional intelligence ...

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Zilla Babbitt
20:10 Dec 05, 2020

I don't either. I get hurt easily arguing with people, and when you can't see their face it makes it worse. Thank you for this. I agree with you. I'm glad Reedsy exists and that it's so small -- though it's grown for sure. I'm glad you're with us! I don't usually follow people with one story (because I don't follow people who post irregularly), but you've said you'll be writing more. I look forward to your next!

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Splinter Magus
20:26 Dec 05, 2020

I've been writing on and off for some years now because I have a discipline problem and I try to do too many things at once. Hopefully writing at least one story a week will help me develop a writing habit once and for all. I'm confident this time! Winning was such a boost, and the community will definitely help (I find myself refreshing the notifications page to see comments and replies :P). There are so many great writers in here and the critiques are always helpful. Now you following me, it's definitely an insentive. I won't let you down!

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Zilla Babbitt
19:49 Dec 06, 2020

Yay! I've just got on the computer for the day and I'm looking forward to your newest.

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Amaya Macaulay
02:12 Dec 10, 2020

i love that, it almost brought me to tears.

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F. A.
02:37 Dec 05, 2020

Hi Zilla! This story is one of my absolute favorites! Congratulations on your 200th story! Could you maybe check mine? It would be awesome if you gave me feedback on it!

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YESSSS LOVE THIS!!! Reedsy fanfics are so fun to read, especially why you’re in them!!! Thx!! Lovelovelove this, lol, awesome....AND HAPPY 200 STORIES! I’m just 10 more you’ll officially have 10x my stories. Lol. So, um, yeah...Great jobbbb Zil!

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Zilla Babbitt
19:49 Dec 05, 2020

They are! Thanks :)

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Orenda ♤
06:04 Dec 04, 2020

first of all, "200" looks beautiful on your account. Congrats, Zil :D secondly, I love this lil fun, light piece. I realised i was in it only after giving this a second read haha. You know what, I look up to you even more. speaking of which, I've no idea why I never ever conversed with you properly. I feel terrible because of that. To be honest, I felt a little intimidated by you, hence it was a a bit hard to talk to you. It's horrible as to how I judged you. I'm so sorry for that. But here I am! You're a literal bubblegum. Okay, that...

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Zilla Babbitt
19:53 Dec 05, 2020

Haha! Thanks :) You know, Aerin said the same thing, that she was intimidated by me. I'm sad about that -- maybe there are more great writers who're intimidated because I'm high on the leaderboard. I hope not. To me, you are one of the Afrassi gang. If I ever get to 300 I'll do a continuation of this and include as many people as I can :)

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Orenda ♤
20:51 Dec 05, 2020

of course! :D that's definitely not it. I'm proud you top the leaderboard and nobody wants someone else to replace you. No matter how flawed the leaderboard system is, you deserve your place. yess, that'd be lit. I'm the vice cap of the ship haha.

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Rhondalise Mitza
04:19 Dec 06, 2020

Holy gumballs, dear friend! First of all, I KNOW THE 88 LINES song/poem and I was going to tell you about it but I think I forgot so good for you finding it on your own and using it it the story. Plussss this was just way too much fun to read. We've been on Reedsy for 200 (of yours, at least) stories now and that's just beautiful. Your commitment is awesome and so are you. I miss you and our writing together. <3

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Zilla Babbitt
21:47 Dec 06, 2020

I listened to it because of your playlist! It's so funny. I hoped you'd like it :)

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Rhondalise Mitza
22:18 Dec 06, 2020

Ah that playlist has SAVED me this year! 💖so happy you liked some songs too! I made a new playlist, remind me to send it to you later. It’s a lot of the same songs but it comes with a list of reasons those songs remind me of certain things.

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Waverley Stark
22:23 Dec 04, 2020

Aww this was adorable! What a fun way to kick off your 200th story. I'm jealous, I haven't even got forty! It did need a little editing in parts, but overall very impressive. The different personalities given to each writer were fun, creative and (probably) realistic. Can't wait for 201.

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Zilla Babbitt
19:49 Dec 05, 2020

Thank you, Waverley! I'll definitely be editing this...

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09:15 Dec 04, 2020

I don't have mercy for my characters? Haha. That's new. It's a fun story and all the persons you introduced seemed real. The title is precious. What I understand from this story is that we are a gathering of writers who want perfection for our works so we burn down our words to create another one. I wonder what we are writing about. No, what I am writing about. Haha. I love this. I see you've joined Ru in calling me Abies. She says it's easier to write. Is it? Good job

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Zilla Babbitt
19:48 Dec 05, 2020

Just that most of your stories end badly for your characters :) Always sad and mournful or scary... Always beautiful, though. Yes, that's about what I was going for. Abies is a little easier to write, and I thought since in this story we're all together, "friends" IRL, I thought it appropriate ;) Thanks again.

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Akshaya Sutrave
07:52 Dec 04, 2020

Hi Zilla! HAPPY 200TH! :D I love your stories and the life-like descriptions in them. It was amazing and really interesting! I enjoyed it very much. It was a great idea to use the prompt to write about Reeders! Best of luck!

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Zilla Babbitt
19:52 Dec 05, 2020

Thanks, Akshaya :)

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Akshaya Sutrave
03:58 Dec 06, 2020

Of course :)

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Scout Tahoe
03:11 Dec 04, 2020

You should've seen my jaw drop. Really. It was all crazy and I didn't even know my mouth could open that wide. I can't stop smiling. I didn't think you were going to use my idea but you did and I'm so happy. It was so funny and made me laugh and be so grateful for you and the Reedsy community. I'm honored to be included in it. You captured me wonderfully. Some critiques, haha: -Who is the downvoter? You say that the real downvoter is with us but you never say who. This is not actually a critique, ha. Just a question. Okay actuall...

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Zilla Babbitt
20:03 Dec 05, 2020

Yay! It was so much fun. I'll be editing that part because as others have pointed out it sounds like I'm accusing some of the thirteen of being the DV, but I don't think any of them are. I'll have everyone else (yes, every Reeder) show up and THEN use that because it's got to be SOMEONE on Reedsy.

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Scout Tahoe
20:53 Dec 05, 2020

Yes, I know what you mean. :) Loved it though.

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20:31 Dec 07, 2020

Official review coming up... Ok, so, excluding the parts with Tom and Emma, this was absurdly amusing. Every line of mine made me burst out laughing, because each one was perfectly accurate. Well done—you have captured the essence of me. 🤣 I liked the way you portrayed each of the Reeders—of the ones I know—and found some of them more amusing than others. Like Rhonda. Hehehe. Also, thanks so much for adding me in the first place! I don’t think I have enough skill with character to try anytime soon, but the idea of a Reedsy fanfic is...

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Avani ☾
17:25 Dec 04, 2020

I love this story, and even more that I'm in it. Happy 200th! 🎉

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Zilla Babbitt
19:52 Dec 05, 2020

Thank you! :)

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Wow wow wow, Zilla!! Congrats on your 200th story!!! This was awesome!! I loved how you included all these reeders in a little fanfic! This was definitely a great read! The descriptions are awesome! Keep writing; I'll be here to congratulate you on your 300th story :P You are an amazing writer!!!!!

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Zilla Babbitt
19:52 Dec 05, 2020

Thanks so much :)

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14:03 Dec 04, 2020

Happy 200th!

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Amaya Macaulay
02:55 Dec 04, 2020

“ 'Go away, moron,'” Amaya said. When she stood menacingly, Tom scrabbled away." so that makes me feel amazing about myself <333333 even though idk if you based the characters off of us in real life. I loved the emma and tom reference lol that was amazing. this story made me laugh multiple times and UGH im so glad you made it for your special 200

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Zilla Babbitt
19:54 Dec 05, 2020

:)

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Amaya Macaulay
02:47 Dec 04, 2020

WOW ZILLA 200 WOOHOOOOOOOOOOO IM SO EXCITED AND PROUD OF YOUUUUUUUU EEEEEEEEEE IM IN IT YOU JUST MADE MY ENTIRE DAY WEEK YEAR DECADE AFKLSEGFUSEGFKEJ thank you so much ur the sweetest alsooo check my bio :)

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Zilla Babbitt
19:54 Dec 05, 2020

Thanks so much, Amaya! That's so sweet :)

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