Comfortable Silence

Submitted for Contest #60 in response to: Write a post-apocalyptic romance.... view prompt

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Sep 23, 2020

Romance Drama

Charlotte hummed the tune of some unknown song under her breath as she sipped her cold coffee and clicked away at her keyboard.

She was supposed to be typing her essay but she kept switching tabs to the google doc that was her poem, so she wasn’t really getting much done. 

Teo sat on the bed opposite her tapping his fingers steadily to some unknown beat and scribbling away in his spiral notebook. 

A dorm with someone of the opposite gender would be fun, they said. An experiment.

It was cheaper and that was all Charlotte needed to hear. 

They had a good enough relationship. It was calm.

From day one, when Charlotte told Teo her name was Charlotte but he would only call her Lottie, Charlie, Char, or anything but Charlotte and he didn’t protest with a smirk like most guys did, she knew they wouldn’t have any problems. 

And late night that Friday when Charlotte switched on a horror movie and he said he was a little scared and she didn’t laugh and call him a baby but instead switched the channel, he thought that they could maybe be friends. 

But there wasn’t really a word for them. 

Two weeks after that Friday they had their first hug when Teo’s brother passed away and tears fell down his tan cheeks. 

Sometimes they sat the whole day in silence, knee-deep in thoughts and homework. Other days they gossiped, eyes twinkling and mouths running faster than Charlotte in her marathons, which Teo would be sure to attend and cheer her on. 

They were majoring in different subjects, but both of them minored in art. They were different in so many ways, but alike too. 

Teo slept at 11 pm every night, setting his alarm and laying his head on the hard bed. What Charlotte didn’t know was that he never slept directly, distracted by the clicking of her laptop. He never told her that though. He was always the first to read her poems, and he knew she only had time to write them at night.

Charlotte didn’t have a sleep schedule. She slept when she was done, and woke up when she wanted. She had afternoon classes, so it was alright. 

She always awoke to a small granola bar on her dresser or some other form of breakfast, sometimes a muffin on good days, placed there by Teo.

They had boundaries. A small invisible piece of tape ran through the middle of the dorm according to Charlotte, but she said when she was sleeping it was okay to cross. 

And cross he did, lightly tip-toeing to place food for her to make sure she didn’t wait until lunch to eat which she much too often did. 

And so they sat in their comfortable silence, for the most part -of course, there was the occasional sip and the nonstop typing and the soft scribbling and the ticking of the clock, and the annoyed sighs when Char couldn’t find a rhyme-but they didn’t speak. 

And then, breaking the silence was a ding of Charlotte’s phone. She blinked and picked it up to see that it was Gmail. She opened the email, fumbling with her passcode, and quickly skimming it.

After she was done she let out a dry laugh and dropped her phone onto the bed.

“Char? What is it?” Teo put down his pencil and sat up. 

“Oh, it’s nothing, just that we aren’t to leave our dorms without a mask. And that classes are all online from now on.” She let out another dry laugh. “Nothing at all…”

“It’s that bad?” he propped himself up on his elbows. 

“I suppose so.” She shrugged and continued typing away.  

A while ago, he had stolen her laptop as a prank. 

Needless to say, she didn’t find it funny.

“Well?”

“Well, what? The virus is spiraling outta control and we students have to deal with it by staring at screens all day long in order to learn. There’s nothing else to it.” She tucked her strawberry blonde hair behind her ear and angrily clicked the backspace several times before taking a deep breath and typing again.

“Come on Char. What’s wrong?” They had dormed together for long enough to see through all the ‘I’m fine’s. 

“Nothing, nothing’s wrong, maybe you should just mind your own business and continue scribbling whatever it is that you’re scribbling in that notebook of yours and leave. Me. Alone. “ She sighed. Teo looked hurt, it was obvious, the guy wore his heart on his sleeve. “Teo-”

“No, maybe I should leave you alone.” he got up, grabbed his notebook, and walked out, slamming the door behind him.

Barely a couple of seconds later, he walked back in.

“I need a mask,” he mumbled at Charlotte’s questioning expression. She ran her hands through her hair and shut her laptop closed.

The only other time she had ever done that before she was done was when she hadn’t gotten in for a program she had applied to. 

She set it aside on her dresser, where a packet of saltine crackers sat that morning, and got up from the bed.

“Teo, I’m sorry.”

“Are you really though?” Her eyes became slightly glossy. She looked up at the cheap light fixture to refrain from letting the tears fall, but Teo had already noticed. He sighed and dropped his notebook, walking towards her. 

He outstretched his steady arms and pulled her towards him.

He wasn’t necessarily strong. Char could beat him in an arm wrestle. 

But he was there and that was all that mattered. 

A salty tear fell onto his shoulder. They pulled apart and Charlotte hastily rubbed it away. 

That was the third time he had ever seen her cry. Once when she got a bad grade. The next when she lost a race.

And now, though she tried to stop them, the tears fell down her cheeks. She gave up pawing away at them and dropped her arms to her sides.

God I’m so pathetic.”

“Char, crying doesn’t make you pathetic. It makes you human.”

“Darn, thought I wasn’t. Guess the virus can affect me then?”

“At the rate you’ve been going out without masks, I don’t think so, but you’re still human. Just got on the good side of natural selection.” She smiled.

“Oh gosh, if we haven’t got masks and we can’t go out without a mask to buy a mask, we’re stuck here aren’t we?” she let out a dry laugh as the realization hit her. 

“No worries, I’ve got a stash of breakfast food we can live off of.”

“Huh, I was wondering whether or not you stole those from the kitchen. Guess not.” 

“Hm, I don’t think I could live with stealing on my consciousness.”

“Ahh, one of our differences.”

And they stood together for a moment.

Soon Charlotte went back to her poem, and eventually her essay. Teo went back to whatever it was that he was scribbling away in that notebook of his.

And they comforted each other, though not a word was needed to be said.



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46 comments

Amaya Macaulay
19:26 Sep 23, 2020

Hey Amany! Could you read my new bio and tell me what you think? I finally updated it to be like a real bio. I'm new to this bio thing so I'm just wondering....idrk what I'm trying to ask but basically could you read my bio and tell me if it's "good"? So, about this story... it's so cute! One thing, you called her Charlotte for most of it, but at one point you said, "Char could beat him in arm wrestle." But besides that, I like the way you wrote it. The improvements in your writing are becoming so obvious, you are growing so so so much! (...

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Amany Sayed
19:36 Sep 23, 2020

It's cute! I like it! I love lip balm too! Actually, before I changed it to Disney songs in my bio it used to say the perfect eos flavor lol. I used Char at other parts too actually. And Teo calls her it. They actually aren't bf/gf, that's sorta part of it. They like each other but don't really know it if that makes sense? Annnnyway thanks so much I'm glad you like it! Yeah, it was short 'nd sweet!

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Amaya Macaulay
20:25 Sep 23, 2020

Hey Amany! Eos or Burt's Bees? Ya I think it's so cute how Teo calls her Char. :)

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Rhondalise Mitza
04:16 Sep 23, 2020

Ahh this was beyond cute. I love college romances. Like love and academics? Yes, ma'am. Absolutely. I would love a part two. And this is funny but in the story I just posted the guy is named Theo, not Teo, but I like both names a lot. That was one thing I noticed; you switched between Tio and Teo sometimes during the story. Other than that though, you're so tight with this one. Can't wait for more. It's been such a good week for stories!

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Amany Sayed
14:12 Sep 23, 2020

Thanks so much :) Seriously?? What a coincidence! Aw shoot, my brain couldn't decide which one...Guess I'll hafta choose. Thanks so much! I know right? And to think, I don't like the prompts! I guess the least flexible ones bring out the most creative writer in us!

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Rhondalise Mitza
14:14 Sep 23, 2020

Ah but of course! And when you have time swing by my new story, it's kind of rough. :)

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Amany Sayed
14:17 Sep 23, 2020

Sure!

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21:20 Dec 15, 2020

I like the overall ViBe of this story, it's calm, cozy, PERFECT. I really like the ending of this story, it's not awkward at all, just really collected, and a great end. *continues upvoting* :D - Amethyst

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Amany Sayed
21:22 Dec 15, 2020

Haha, thanks so much!

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Hriday Saboo
04:47 Oct 05, 2020

Hey 👋 amany! A very cool story. I like the name Charlotte. I just found 1 mistake - when it was Char’s dialogue like Me. Alone, you have put the ending punctuation wrong it should be like “ ....me. Alone.”

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Amany Sayed
12:41 Oct 05, 2020

Thanks so much! Oops!

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Hriday Saboo
13:22 Oct 05, 2020

Welcome 🙏. No problem at all

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00:59 Oct 05, 2020

This is so cute! I loved their little relationship and how they go so well together! I love how they comforted each other, it just added so much to the relationship! Nice work!

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Amany Sayed
12:42 Oct 05, 2020

Thanks so much!

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Madisson James
05:45 Oct 03, 2020

Nice!

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Amany Sayed
15:36 Oct 03, 2020

:D

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Jeffrey Pope
02:35 Sep 25, 2020

Great tale! I was glued to my screen the whole time -had to turn off my data so as not to get distracted by the notifications.

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Amany Sayed
18:30 Sep 25, 2020

Aw, thank you! I'm so glad you liked it!

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Jeffrey Pope
01:27 Sep 27, 2020

I see you read my second submission... I'll love to hear your thoughts on my comment

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Lily Kingston
20:41 Sep 24, 2020

Great story :) The best kind of romance is when characters slowly grow to like each other together like in this story. Keep up the good work and keep writing!!

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Amany Sayed
18:31 Sep 25, 2020

Thank you so much! You too!

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17:08 Sep 24, 2020

Ooh! I’ll read this after school. Remind meeee

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Amany Sayed
18:58 Sep 24, 2020

Consider yourself reminded ;)

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B. W.
23:09 Sep 23, 2020

i left a thing in my Bio talking to the down-voter and i said something like about how they should comment and explain themselves though its probably a stupid idea because they probably wouldn't wanna reveal themselves

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19:28 Sep 23, 2020

Finnaally Finally got to readd! I really liked this, it was really nice and calm. It just had that aura of calmm. I also liked the character Teo he seems really sweet, and even though she said some stuff rude to him he still comforted her when she was crying. What a great way to go about the prompt too! ~Snow❄*~

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Amany Sayed
19:36 Sep 23, 2020

Thank you so much! Thank you :) ~Sunny

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Sarah 💜🌸
21:06 Nov 25, 2020

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww. This was so adorable!

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Amany Sayed
16:40 Nov 26, 2020

Thankssss

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Hriday Saboo
04:49 Oct 05, 2020

I think I was of some help....

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Kristin Neubauer
14:54 Sep 26, 2020

Cute! And very clever and skillful. I could totally see the romance developing even without all the traditional romancey things. Well done!

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Amany Sayed
16:10 Sep 26, 2020

Thank you so much! This means a lot.

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B. W.
23:43 Sep 25, 2020

Heya Amany, could ya check out "Reunion? No thanks" and leave some feedback? it's kinda like a diary/written like one

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Amany Sayed
16:13 Sep 26, 2020

Sure!

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B. W.
16:14 Sep 26, 2020

Thanks ^^ i'm excited to see what you think

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Amaya Macaulay
23:59 Sep 24, 2020

upvote for upvote? I'm bored, I just got downvoted a bunch, and I feel like upvoting someone. But it's totally okay if ur not into that sort of thing

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21:22 Sep 24, 2020

👍👍👍 (Sorry, I’m all commented-out. I just commented on a ton of poems...yoikes.)

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Amany Sayed
23:19 Sep 24, 2020

XD Thanks anyway. And I would want either telepathy or telekinesis :)

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Sue Marsh
20:11 Sep 24, 2020

Amany, that was a terrific story, thank you for following me and reading Golden Eye. If you wouldn't mind could you possibly leave a comment, this is the first thriller I have ever written. Thanks, Sue

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Amany Sayed
18:31 Sep 25, 2020

Thanks so much! No prob, sure!

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Amaya Macaulay
21:35 Sep 23, 2020

upvote for upvote? I feel like upvoting somebody rn

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Avery G.
20:39 Sep 23, 2020

Dang, this was good. I really liked it. Great job, Amany!

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Amany Sayed
20:41 Sep 23, 2020

Thank you so much!

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Avery G.
21:38 Sep 23, 2020

You're welcome!

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