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Aug 03, 2020

Romance


She was his anchor, keeping him sane, and he was her glue, keeping her together. They were never apart if they could help it. It was only supposed to be a small business trip...But then the airports closed down to ease the spread of the virus, so the two lovers were apart. Little did she know it would be forever...


.。❅*⋆⍋*∞*。*∞*⍋⋆*❅。.

Girl’s Perspective

You’re so far away

I wish you were with me

Please come and stay

I need you, can’t you see?


My heart is aching

My mind is racing

Are you okay?

When will you say?


My emotions are large

My tears drop quietly

You are my charge

My energy


If you don’t answer, I’ll come

Mask and all

I’m stronger than some

But I’ll race at your call


Please tell me

Please don’t go

You’re across the sea

And I miss your glow


I want to hold you

To gain comfort, and to give

You are my glue

Without you, I can’t live


Is it the same for you,

Or are you alright?

I haven’t a clue

Because you aren’t in my sight


I’ve almost lost hope, 

But I’m trying to hold on

In truth, you were my rope,

But now you are gone


You went like the wind

And left me here alone

Maybe I was blind

Maybe I should’ve known


Did you mean to leave me

Right when you could

Did you take your chance to flee

The moment it seemed like you should


I was naive back then

I still am today

Because I jump when

I hear something you say


There are problems in the world

We should be solving them together

Instead, my heart is furled

Because you severed our tether


Now I am alone

What about you?

Have you simply grown

Learned to tie your own shoe?


Yes, I remember

I did it for you

It was my pleasure

And of those, I have few


Especially now

Now that you left


Are you sick in bed

Or are you healthy?

Are you well-fed

And eating plenty?


The reason you don’t answer me

And leave me in the dark

The reason you don’t hear my plea

To remember our spark


Is it because you’re hurt

Or do you ignore

This is something I blurt

To you, my heart I pour


If you would just let me know

If you could just send me a text

If you would just let me see your glow

Then I’d give it a rest


Instead, you leave me to guess

Terrible things

You put me in distress

And are pulling my strings


The strings of my heart

Now they are frayed

The longer we are apart

The more I feel betrayed


Sweet words you used to say

Your hands were delicate and soft

Then you were on your way

But at what cost


Not just the money-

But the ache of my heart

My stomach feels funny

Like I forgot my part


Is it all because of me

Did I do something wrong 

Is it no longer we?

Does your heart sing a different song?


Mine does not

It calls for you

You’ve got it all in a knot

You’ve got it asking who


Who to believe

Who to turn to

Do you deceive?

I need another clue


How much longer can I wait

How much longer can I bear it

I just need to think straight

I must use all my wit


I’m feeling so much pain

Pain you brought upon me


Maybe I should let go

Even if it breaks my heart

Maybe I should let go

And begin with a new start


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Guy’s Perspective

My love, my dear,

My darling,

I fear

That I might be falling


It’s hard to feel

When I gave you my heart

To think this is real

I want a restart


I cough, and I sneeze

But the biggest pain I feel

Is this small squeeze

One that cannot heal


If only you were with me

If only I could see you

If only it could be

That I didn’t have to leave you


They say there’s no such thing, 

As a happily ever after

But together we could bring

Over the pain some laughter


Instead, I lie alone

Breathing some of my last breaths

I’m on my own

Lying on the bed of death’s


Yes, I am hurt

But I worry more about you

Once I’m under the dirt

What will you do?


Are you going to move on?

Are you going to stay strong?

I’m almost gone

It shouldn’t be long


Though I do wish

That I could’ve told you

Though I do wish

I could’ve given you a clue


I feel very blessed

For everything I had

I had the best

For that I am glad


My only complaint

The thing I really want to have

If I had no restraint

I’d want you, my other half


I don’t know which is worse

Not seeing you again

Because that’s like a curse

Or you being in pain


I hope someone tells you

What happens to me

I hope someone tells you

And you’ll come to see


Though I’ll be underground

I want you beside me

Though I won’t hear a sound

I need you beside me


We’ll be together forever

That’s what we said

What’s happening, however

Fills me with dread


I couldn’t say goodbye

One last time, and

I hope you don’t cry

But you’ll certainly be stunned


There was nothing we could do

Don’t blame anyone

What we’re going through

Is happening to everyone


Will you remember me

Or will you forget

I want you to be free

And live without regret


I’m sorry, truly

I didn’t mean for it to end this way

Sometimes the world does things cruelly

Don’t let it shade you in black and grey


Keep your cheer

And keep your smile

Wipe away your tear

I’m not worth your while


I feel my consciousness slipping

So I guess it’s time to say goodbye

My heart is nearly ripping

It’s too late to ask why


I love you is all

I really have to say

It might seem small,

But I hope it goes a long way

° 𐐪𐑂 ♡ 𐐪𐑂 ₒ 𐐪𐑂 ♡ 𐐪𐑂 °


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104 comments

Kristin Neubauer
18:41 Aug 05, 2020

This is stunning - so creative, so tragic, so subtle, so timely....and such amazing poetry as everyone else has said. How many stories between real people must be transpiring like what you've written? I think this is the most poignant love story I've ever read. I want to keep praising it, but I don't know what else to say! Thank you for writing this.

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Amany Sayed
18:45 Aug 05, 2020

Oh, wow, Kristen, thanks so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! You've truly made my day. It's comments like yours that convince me to keep writing!

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Sav G
23:07 Aug 04, 2020

Here as requested! I absolutely loved this story! Personally, I feel like poetry has lots of emotions flowing through its lines, and you’ve managed to capture these emotions really well! Poetry is not easy to write, let alone rhyming and portraying emotions between two characters. Beautifully written story!

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Amany Sayed
23:10 Aug 04, 2020

Thanks so much for your kind words Sav! Poetry definitely is not easy, but I'm glad I gave it a try. It was fun. Thanks again!

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Sav G
01:35 Aug 05, 2020

No problem! Let’s continue to check out each other’s stories!

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Amany Sayed
01:48 Aug 05, 2020

Sounds good! 😁

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10:47 Aug 04, 2020

This story was amazing, Amany! I could clearly feel the character's pain through your writing. It was upsetting that the girl thought the guy moved on from her, and tragic that the guy was not able to explain and say goodbye completely. Outstanding job!

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Amany Sayed
14:17 Aug 04, 2020

Thank you so much Brooke!

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14:18 Aug 04, 2020

You're so welcome!

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Alise Olivia
15:32 Jan 13, 2021

I've never been a fan of poetry but this story I don't regret . This was really good and you've got lots of talent .

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Amany Sayed
15:39 Jan 13, 2021

Thanks a ton! Aw, I appreciate it!

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Mandy Kehoe
03:14 Sep 23, 2020

This is definitely my style of poetry. The rhyme was very understandable and kept a great rhythm. Sometimes poems can be very difficult to understand, and i find that sometimes the simpler styled like this one here, are just as beautiful. Great job.

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Amany Sayed
03:16 Sep 23, 2020

Thank you so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Agreed!

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17:20 Sep 15, 2020

Good job! I really liked this one!

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Amany Sayed
18:05 Sep 15, 2020

Thanks! I did your other quiz btw!

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18:15 Sep 15, 2020

Thanksssssss. Did you come out with quiz #4? I think I did all the other ones. Duuuuuuuuuuuuudeeeeee. You know the popsico song toooo?? (((IF you don't this is gonna be really embarrassing...))) Oh and do you know who moon is? They did my quiz and I am trying to figure out who it is.......

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Amany Sayed
18:17 Sep 15, 2020

Not yet. OFCCC WHERE ELSE WOULD I GET IT FROM

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18:21 Sep 15, 2020

I dunno. I am literally singing the song in my head right now. #2ndOr3rdGradeVibessss

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Amany Sayed
18:24 Sep 15, 2020

It was that weird app thing where the class had a monster to level up? and you had to do vids and brain breaks to do it right? Bro I almost broke my leg one tiemeemeeeeeeee tmi tho

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Maiya Johnson
04:12 Aug 29, 2020

I freakin' love this! This is the cutest poem I've read so far on this website. This is wonderful.💛

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Amany Sayed
20:33 Aug 29, 2020

Thank you so much! That means a lot!😊 🌻

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Jesna Anna S.
09:16 Aug 19, 2020

Wow! thats a lovely poem! I look forward to hear more! Keep writing! I appreciate if you can take some time to read my stories and offer your comments!

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Amany Sayed
19:22 Aug 19, 2020

Thank you so much, you too! Of course!

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21:15 Aug 13, 2020

Awwwwwwww... that's sooooooo sweet!!!

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Amany Sayed
21:15 Aug 13, 2020

Thanks, glad you liked it!

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⋆ Timber ⋆
15:11 Jan 26, 2021

Wow-this is amazing! So beautiful lol I had tears in my eyes

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⋆ Timber ⋆
15:12 Jan 26, 2021

You're amazing at poetry! Keep up the good work, Amany! <33

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Amany Sayed
15:14 Jan 26, 2021

Aw, thank you! <3

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21:20 Nov 25, 2020

I usually don't read poetry (I'm not a huge fan), but if you're writing poetry I'll read it any day! That's how good it is!

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Amany Sayed
16:40 Nov 26, 2020

Ahhh tysm!

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Lets Do
08:21 Sep 14, 2020

Amazing lines

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Amany Sayed
13:15 Sep 14, 2020

Thanks so much!

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Lets Do
08:20 Sep 14, 2020

Awesome

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Amany Sayed
13:14 Sep 14, 2020

Thanks!

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18:10 Dec 06, 2020

Hello, Amany! Hermione here. I just wanted to let you know that I read your blog and I thought it was brilliant! I read a few of your posts, and they were actually very helpful. Thanks! -Hermione <3

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Amany Sayed
18:14 Dec 06, 2020

Why thank you! Big fan of yours ;) Aw, thanks! <3

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19:26 Dec 06, 2020

My pleasure! Aw, well, that's sweet of you to say. Thank you. :D

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Sheejee Babar
05:54 Nov 07, 2020

Goood attempt

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The Cold Ice
03:16 Aug 27, 2020

Super story.I loved the story .I enjoyed the story.Great job👍keep it up.Wonderful story. Would you mind to read my story “The dragon warrior?”

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