Lost Phone, Found Prison

Submitted for Contest #37 in response to: Write a story about a valuable object that goes missing.... view prompt

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Ruby sat in the edge of her seat โ€” she wanted to feel the outside breeze touch her warm neck,ย so she pulled the window down just a little bit. But much to Rubyโ€™s surprise, that was the wrong move.

Today was her eighteenth birthday. She wanted to spend the day with cupcakes, presents, and balloons surrounding her room like almost every girl on the planet would wish for. So her parents and Ruby were in the car, with four balloons attached to each other. Her mother warned her to hold the balloons tightly โ€” who knows what would happen if she let go.

Typical Ruby, she didnโ€™t listen. She thought the balloons wouldnโ€™t squirm much if she put it beside her, so she could spend the ride in the car with two free hands. But after she pulled the window down, the balloons sprung to the front, the wind too strong for the balloons to bear. The balloons were also too fast for Ruby to grab.

โ€œOh!โ€ her mother screamed. โ€œRuby! What did I say about the balloons!?โ€ She sounded like she was talking to a five-year-old. She tried to grab for the balloon, but they dodged her, and covered her fatherโ€™s view and couldnโ€™t see in front of him. Her mother quickly grabbed the balloon out of the frantic fatherโ€™s face, but it was too late. He couldnโ€™t see in front of him and crashed into a huge black Ford.

Ruby survived the crash. She ended up with fractured bones, a permanent scar, and a serious broken arm, but besides that, she was fine. She told herself, Iโ€™m fine. My parents are alive. Theyโ€™re strong. Death, donโ€™t turn against me.

It turns out, Death ignored her. As she tried to sit up from the hospital bed, a nurse came in to check her temperature, and look at some papers. But the hardest part of the nurseโ€™s job is to tell people thisโ€”

โ€œRuby, we are very glad you are alive from the crash,โ€ the nurse smiles at me, but it soon faded. โ€œYou were very strong and healthy. But as for your parentsโ€”โ€ she hesitated.

Ruby widened her eyes. โ€œAre you kidding me?โ€ she whispered in a shaking voice. โ€œAll because of that stupid wind and that stupid balloon?!โ€ She wanted to get up, shake herself off, and go to her parents.

โ€œI am very sorry, I know how hard it is to lose someone,โ€ the nurse whispered. She continued, โ€œMy parents died from a car crash also. My brother left me, and my sister had horrible depression.โ€ She looked like she was going to choke and cry. โ€œI realized my whole family had died.โ€

ย Ruby suddenly had a connection with the nurse. She felt safe with her as if she was sent by the angels. Ruby wanted to sob too, but she was determined to be brave, even in the uncomfortable cast and burning scar.

โ€œIโ€™m so sorry,โ€ she managed to whisper.

The nurse sniffled and waved Ruby goodbye. โ€œThank you. And, how old are you, by any chance?โ€

Ruby explained, โ€œToday is my eighteenth birthday.โ€

The nurseโ€™s eyes widened. At first, she didnโ€™t know why, but when she told her, her heart drained.

โ€œThen youโ€™re old enough to live alone!โ€ she exclaimed. โ€œWow.โ€ She took some notes and left with a small, strange smile on her face.

Ruby couldnโ€™t imagine how she was supposed to live alone.



It has been a long time since she got home. She felt a little stronger after a week of getting used to it, and she waved goodbye to the nurse that spilled her heart out to her. She waved back โ€” and smiled. She said, โ€œIโ€™ll see you soon.โ€ Then she checked her clipboard, adding, โ€œNext week.โ€

Ruby nodded. She was told to wait by the door, so some strangers can take her home. I canโ€™t believe I trust them. She isnโ€™t used to strangers. But she let them โ€” she had no choice, anyway.

She had to give a LOT of money to the people her father crashed into. It wasnโ€™t her fatherโ€™s fault! She wanted to shout. But because she was born shy, she is shy. She couldnโ€™t speak. She just signed the papers, ashamed.

It is the first day ever since she had to live alone. Boy, was she hungry! She opened the fridge, but all there was left was leftover salad and grape juice. Their family wasnโ€™t rich, or โ€œnormal.โ€ Her father can only afford for their family, sometimes a little less. She thought, I need to find a job.

She was also a senior in high school, and she was considered โ€œinvisible.โ€ No one seemed to know she was there โ€” not even the teachers.

But after the crash, many people seemed to know about it. They turned around, giving pity looks to Ruby. She knew they were being polite, not in a can-I-be-your-friend way.

But before class, four students also in the senior year went up to her. โ€œHey!โ€ one greeted.

Ruby hesitated, before answering. โ€œHey.โ€

โ€œI heard about your parents. Sorry about that.โ€ Then she added, โ€œWanna come over to my place later? Theyโ€™re also coming.โ€ She gestured to the others. โ€œIโ€™m Michelle. Theyโ€™re Jayden, Kacey, and Sasha.โ€

Jayden had shaggy, blondish hair. He waved and said, โ€œYou should come.โ€ Kacey smiled too, and Ruby could tell she was the nice one. Sasha held her books tight, and she could tell she was the smart type. Smart but cool.

Ruby didnโ€™t know what to say. She realized that Michelle is actually nice; her sparkling amber eyes were kind and wavy, like music notes. So Ruby answered, โ€œSure! Iโ€™m Ruby. Want my number?โ€

They all exchanged numbers, and Sasha swayed. โ€œCatch you later,โ€ she said.

When they disappeared, Ruby held her breath. It was her first, real friend that invited her to her house. Her first real friend. She felt tears coming to her eyes. Mother and Father would have been so proud.


โ€œOh! Hey, Ruby!โ€ Michelle greeted, lighting up. โ€œThe others are already here โ€” except Kasey. Letโ€™s wait for her in the Hangout room.โ€

Ruby was welcomed inside. She was in awe โ€” the room was decorated with golden spirals, and lights that are probably the shiniest lights she has ever seen. There was a chandelier in the kitchen; and not the small ones like the size of a teapot, the huge ones. The floors were made of tiles. Ruby had never met anyone so rich.

โ€œYeah, you can say Iโ€™m rich,โ€ Michelle says, almost reading her mind. โ€œBut my dad is the one that makes all the money. I just obey.โ€ Then she laughs.

She lets Ruby follow her into a room. This mansion probably has over twenty-five bedrooms! She was eager to check out all the rooms alone, and she tried to think of an excuse.

โ€œHey, is it okay if I use the bathroom here?โ€ she lies. โ€œI forgot to go at home.โ€

For some reason, Michelle and Jayden exchange glances. Uh oh. Was she caught?

But Jayden replies, โ€œSure. Go straight all the way, the second door to your left. Thatโ€™s the bathroom door.โ€

Ruby exhales. She leaves and studies every single room upstairs. When she reached her parentsโ€™ room, she notices a small piece of paper with huge words on it.

She gets closer and examines the paper.

Bank Account Username- anisalois81227

Bank Account Password- E617TE8IUJ90Y

Ruby gasped. Why would some rich people leave their bank account hanging somewhere? This was insane news for her.

Her brain was alerting her something. You donโ€™t have much money. You can only afford food for yourself! Besides, they are rich. They wonโ€™t realize anything when only a few hundreds of dollars are gone. Or maybe a few thousandโ€ฆ

She knew it was wrong, and it was also betraying her new friend. But if she did, she could still live in her house, and Michelle would understand. I hope.

So she took a picture and left.

Heh, she thought. Are rich people really that stupid?



โ€œBye Ruby!โ€ Michelle exclaimed, giving her a hug. โ€œWeโ€™ll miss you!โ€ It made her feel guiltier than she already was. She told them she had to leave early, something got in her way and she had to go. They all hugged Ruby, even Jayden. She had to leave fast, or else someone might get suspicious.

She had to walk home, since she doesnโ€™t have a car. Her scar wasnโ€™t hurting much anymore, and her arm was healing. She stopped by at a cafรฉ because she was desperate to get the money quick. She sat down in the closest seat, and hurriedly typed in the username and password. She held her breath.

CONFIRMED! It said in bold letters. Her heart was beating so fast, she thought it would burst out of her mouth.

She took three thousand dollars. For a start. She knew she needed more than that. So each week, we got herself three thousand dollars.

Then, that turned into five thousand dollars.

Then six thousand dollars.

Then she stopped, knowing Michelle would find out soon. So the next time she returned to Michelleโ€™s house, she stayed the entire time in the same room together so it wouldnโ€™t look suspicious.

A few minutes later, Michelle went on and on about a high school party she was inviting them to. She added, looking straight at Ruby, โ€œYou get to come too! Isnโ€™t that exciting?โ€

Sasha agreed. โ€œItโ€™s so cool! We can different colors, because matching would suck.โ€ Kasey nodded.

Ruby was thinking tentatively. But then, she finally answered, โ€œSure. Iโ€™ll be there.โ€

Everyone cheered. Michelle was the boss โ€” she decided what colors each of them would wear, told them what time, and reminded them several times about wearing makeup. โ€œRuby, I know this is your first time, so wear makeup, and wear blue. Sasha, youโ€™re purple, Kasey, um, light pink, Jayden, black, Iโ€™ll wear red. Donโ€™t forget the time!โ€

It was exciting, for all except for Ruby. She didnโ€™t have a car.



Ruby spent most of her money with gorgeous designs around her house, and she just needed a few more thousand dollars for a car. Michelle wouldnโ€™t mind, she thought nervously, biting her lip.

So she took around eight thousand dollars this time. Man, did she take a lot of money! But she had to do it. She just had to.



It wasnโ€™t hard driving at all. She drove her dadโ€™s truck all the time in the farm they use to have, and it was almost the same thing. Her mother taught her all the signs she needed to know when she was fourteen, and it was very simple.

โ€œHey, Ruby!โ€ Michelle and Jayden came together. They looked impressed. โ€œYou got a car? Nice!โ€

Kasey and Sasha came too. โ€œHot Mercedes!โ€ Sasha exclaimed.

Ruby nodded, all proud.

Jayden asked, โ€œHow did you get the money for all this? I thought you said your parentsโ€”โ€

Yes! Saved by the loudspeaker. She took out her phone, smiling but still worried. All the information was there, all there, safe and sound.

They went in. Ruby was blinded by all those shining lights, and tried staying away to the ones already drinking. She was afraid of that experience.

Michelle grabbed beer for each of them, and assured, โ€œYouโ€™ll be fine. Save it for later. Enjoy the fun first!โ€ She laughed when Jayden pulled her aside and kissed her. Ruby made a small smile. She could enjoy this.

Kasey was busy talking with some guy, and Ruby saw him take her somewhere private. Sasha was sitting down, holding the drink tight in her hand. Ruby was completely alone.

She was about to just walk around when a boy clutched her hand. She turned around, and he smiled. She almost ran away, but Michelle would want her to do this. So she leaned forward and kissed him, just like she imagined Michelle doing to Jayden.

He seemed surprised, but she could tell he liked it. So he kissed her back. Hard. Iโ€™ve been kissed before, but never like this, she thought. A happy smile was forming in her heart. When she looked up to see him closely, she realized he was so cute. Green eyes, dark hair. She repeats in her head, He is so cute.

Ruby looked at the drink she was still holding, and shrugged. A tiny sip wonโ€™t hurt. But after she did, she started to drink it all. Way better than water.

The. Best. Dance. Ever.



When Ruby woke up, she found herself on top of the cute boy she kissed. She stood up, yawning. She reached for her phone to call the others.

She felt her pocket, but it was flat. Nothing was inside. She thought to herself wildly, where is my phone?

She searched some more, looking around near the food, the dance floor, all the rooms. She couldnโ€™t find anything. I swear, if I really lost that phone, my Whole. Life. Is. Over.

She found her friends drunk, laying on the floor and Kasey on the couch. She hissed at them, โ€œWake up!โ€

They stirred. โ€œWake up!โ€ she repeated.

Jayden was the first to wake. โ€œWhat happened?โ€ He asked. He seemed to be holding something inside. Oh well. Ruby could figure that out later.

โ€œI lost my phone!โ€ she hissed again.

Jayden wakes the others. โ€œGuys! Michelle! Ruby lost her phone!โ€

Sasha was the first to speak. She yawned, saying, โ€œSo what? Buy another one,โ€ she commented dryly.

Kasey offered, โ€œWeโ€™ll help you look for it.โ€

Michelle woke up without a word. She kissed Jayden and whispered something in his ear. He nodded solemnly. Whatโ€™s that about?

They searched everywhere and even asked others if they have seen it. None of them had seen it, and a few others helped look for it too. Sasha tried calling Ruby to hear the tone, but she reported that her phone was off.

Ruby waited for the words, I found it! Here, Ruby! But no one said one more damn thing.

She moaned. Where the hell did it go?


A few minutes later, they all had to leave. Michelle said kindly, โ€œSince you lost your phone, I planned a sleepover at my house! Just you and me, we can hang out all day!โ€

Ruby grinned at her, feeling less anxious. โ€œSure! When?โ€

Michelle gave her the directions again, and the time. โ€œIโ€™ll see you later!โ€ she called.



Ruby had more fun than she ever thought she would. She was having so much fun, that she forgot she even did something illegal. They painted each other hair, watched a movie, and Michelle even offered Ruby a nightgown to keep. She had over ten nightgowns!

Ruby was still snoring when Michelle woke up. Jayden was behind her. When Ruby opened one eye, she heard sirens. Not just sirens. Sirens that were coming toward Michelleโ€™s house. She gulped so loud, she thought aliens in space could hear.

When she caught Jaydenโ€™s eye, he smirked and waved Rubyโ€™s phone in the air. โ€œLooking for this?โ€ he said.

Ruby was so shocked. โ€œY-you had it the whole time after the party?โ€ she asked him.

He laughs. โ€œWeโ€™re not stupid, you know. In fact, the first time you stole the money, we knew right away. Michelle has hidden security cameras everywhere.โ€

Ruby flushed. The officers came in, and she had to confess everything that happened, and had to return all the money. She was allowed to get a lawyer for herself, and her lawyer actually understood everything she has been going through. He was nice to her all the time, gave her food, and called every day.

She grew feelings for him. He really was a kind person, even though Ruby is a criminal. She shuddered to think about it. Iโ€™m a criminal. But her lawyer, Jackson, always talked to her as if she wasnโ€™t. He was the only one that still cared for her.

She smiled at herself. Even though Iโ€™m in prison, she thought. Iโ€™m still happy. Because Jackson will always be right by my side.

Ruby was still regretting stealing the money. But the past is the past.

And today, she will look at the present.

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29 comments

Avani Gupta
14:28 Jun 16, 2020

Amazing story!

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Adrie Byman
16:15 Apr 30, 2020

beautiful story! great job!! :)

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Avena Murray
15:28 Apr 28, 2020

Enjoyed this. To be honest, I think the ending was a little rushed, but overall, it was a great story! I hope you keep on writing!

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Mikyal Martinus
23:35 Apr 23, 2020

I liked your story because it dealt with these questions. What would a person do if their back is against the wall? Will a person do the right thing or the wrong thing and deal with the consequences later? The dilemma question in a story creates a more interesting character which the reader can relate to. This also goes along with the character's physical wants versus their emotional, moral and spiritual needs. I gasped when Ruby chose to steal the money and squirmed in my chair when she didn't stop. Good job.

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Izzie Q.
01:01 Apr 23, 2020

Wow, I truly loved the opening sentence which I always find a bit difficult. Your flow was very smooth and I liked your take on the concept.

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Izzie Q.
01:02 Apr 23, 2020

Ooooh, I also just noticed that down below, you said that you are a beginner! I think you are doing a wonderful job and I honestly, would have pegged you as a pro. Keep going!

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Tammy Tsang
01:47 Apr 22, 2020

Interesting story idea. As someone mentioned before, the tension certainly raised quickly. However, I felt that the action rose too quickly. Perhaps, if you need to move forward, consider having a break in the narrative. I've seen people use "#" on its own line or "-----". Something to show a passing of time. Additionally, consider proofreading your submission. I'm not sure if English is your second language or not, but I noticed a number of typos and tense switches. (e.g. the "balloons" at the beginning turned into the singular "ballo...

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Tammy Tsang
08:03 Apr 24, 2020

I did realize that I didn't read the title, so it is my bad that I didn't know the phone would be the item to be lost. Nonetheless, she did lose her parents...just in a different way! (Except they're not an object, ha ha!)

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Rosey Flower
20:59 Apr 21, 2020

Great story!

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22:17 Apr 20, 2020

I loved this story, I thought you did a great job with building up the tension. I liked how realistic Ruby was about taking the money and then trying to justify it even though she knew it was wrong. The last two lines I thought were great and overall it was a good read. Mine is a little more silly but I thoroughly enjoyed reading a story that contrasted in tone from mine. Keep up the great work!

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Anastasia Avge
15:56 Apr 20, 2020

WOW I loved this! I made mine more fantasy than not hahah

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Great story! Mine was actually about a lost phone too, but the tone and mood were very different. You should read it. I was also wondering if you had any advice for a beginner writer?

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I am a beginner writer myself. I typed in some tips on the comments for "A Diary of A Messed Up Liar." I will be sure to post more advice in my next stories!

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Izzie Q.
13:53 Apr 20, 2020

Yas Kendra! You did so well and I love this story! I will keep a lookout for more of your stories and I look forward to reading them. <3

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Incognito Author
06:41 Apr 20, 2020

nice

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Laiba M
19:44 Apr 19, 2020

I really liked the story!!! Good job, Kendra! I liked the layout of your story a lot :)

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Laiba M
13:32 Apr 20, 2020

You're welcome, Kendra! Your writing is really really good, do you have any advice for other writers? I would love to read more of your stories!!

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Zea Bowman
19:09 Apr 17, 2020

Love it, like all your others.

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Thanks! I am glad that you liked my story!

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Clara Kim
19:55 Apr 15, 2020

Nice! Long and intense.

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Sia Sharma
04:15 Jul 30, 2020

Nicely done!

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Thanks for reading one of my old stories! :)

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Sia Sharma
15:42 Jul 30, 2020

Welcome!

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Batool Hussain
17:13 Jul 20, 2020

I went through your profile to pick the title that appealed my literary appetite and I think this one is it:) This a wonderful story, Kendra. You showcase everything so beautifully. The title has to be my favorite of all! Mind checking out my new story and sharing your views on it? Thanks.

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Thank you :) Yay, new submission! I'll be happy to read it!

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Thank you for your comments, everyone! I hope you guys all enjoyed! I am a beginner writer myself, and I am improving, but if you guys want advice from me, I jotted down some advice in the comments in the story, "A Diary of A Messed Up Liar." Thank you for reading! ^^

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