THERE IS NO HOPE

Submitted for Contest #20 in response to: Write a story about a character experiencing anxiety.... view prompt

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Dec 20, 2019

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There was a girl named Munia. She was an educated girl with high ambitions. From her childhood she was a very creative girl. Her aim in life was to be an astronaut and work in NASA. She achieved great result in her academic education. She got selected into the top university called 'Dhaka University'. Her family always wanted her to be successful in life. Her father wanted to choose the top subject of that university for her. But her aim was different. She sacrificed her choice for her father's wish. She got admitted for the top subject for the sake of her father. Despite being a meritorious student all her life she didn't get any good result at the university. She was not interested in this field. Her anxiety got started from then. She started to feel fear and anxious about her future because she was ambitious and wanted do something great. Her life was at stake. She didn't have the courage to tell this to her father. Her father was very proud and happy. She did't wanted to kill that happiness. She cried behind the closed door but nobody heard her, she did't let anybody. She had relationship issues too. Her life was not easy. She loved a boy named Farhad but she had to breakup with him because her family will never accept him. She had to erase her feelings and get strong. This was not easy, her life got complicated. She was always tensed about her future and family. Her life got more complicated after she finished her graduation and got a job. Her salary was very minimum. She had one little sister and one brother. She had to take care of them. One day her father got rejected from the job he used to do. So its a tragedy for them. She was the only earning member of the family. After loosing job her father got a little crazy and he started to react over silly matter's. Munia had to deal with this problems. She had to manage her family alone. She was experiencing anxiety her whole life. She never got any peace. She was always anxious about her parents, her love life, her career and her siblings. She had to ensure a good future for her siblings and parents. She had to marry the person she never liked for the sake of her father. She hated her fiance but she had no option but to marry him. After her marriage she realized her husband had extra marital affair. She was again shattered from inside. She knew anxiety will kill her one day. One day she decided to commit suicide because she could not take it anymore. She thought its better to die. She had nothing left, she sacrificed her aim, love life, personal life and all she had was just anxiety and fear. Then one day Munia committed suicide by jumping off from her roof.

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Nahid Akter
10:59 Jan 07, 2020

Fabulous, you described this charecter exactly the same written in the prompt. I loved it.

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Jannatul Purnia
11:03 Jan 07, 2020

Thank you very much. Its an honour that people are loving my stories.

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Monir Hossain
15:22 Jan 09, 2020

Very nice.

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Jannatul Purnia
18:01 Jan 09, 2020

Thank you.

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Jannatul Munia
16:49 Jan 07, 2020

It is so related to me. Awesome story.

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Jannatul Purnia
16:56 Jan 07, 2020

I am glad to hear that. Thank you.

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Towhid Arpon
11:14 Jan 07, 2020

Your story described the charecter well. This charecter's story is tragic and it is good i think.

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Jannatul Purnia
11:19 Jan 07, 2020

Thank you very much.

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Helena Dobrev
20:40 Jan 06, 2020

It was awesome. Loved it. Please write more.

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Jannatul Purnia
20:47 Jan 06, 2020

Thank you very much, i am glad you liked my story. I will write more as soon as possible.

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Helena Dobrev
20:57 Jan 06, 2020

You are welcome. Just write what your heart says, you Will achieve success. You are good at making tragic stories,try making more. Love from helena💕

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