First Date

Submitted for Contest #16 in response to: Write a story that involves love at first sight.... view prompt

Nov 20, 2019


The agency had fixed the date for six o’clock that evening. A little early but there’s sod all else to do round here, or anyone to do it with. When I say ‘agency’ I refer to the white-haired old guy who seems to run the place; not too inspiring on the romance front to be honest. He seemed to be pretty enthusiastic about my chances though.

“What’ll she be like?” I asked, trying to keep a calm front even though my stomach was full of butterflies. I think they were butterflies; those colourful little winged creatures anyway. I’m not so good on all the names yet, too many of the blighters to remember.

“Gorgeous, she’s got a lovely rack.” He told me, winking for some reason. He shrugged when I didn’t react. “Guess all that will come later. It better had anyway.”

I asked what he meant.

“Look, your job here is quite simple. Just have a good time. You can manage that can’t you? Beautiful weather, loads of fruit; don’t eat anything else at the moment though.

I asked him why.

“Still trying to work out the dominant life-form but there’s a pretty good chance it’ll be you. In which case, tuck in. ‘Course, how you get on tonight will be a big influence on all that.

“How’d you mean?”

“Well…” He seemed to be struggling. “I mean, you won’t be around forever, will you? Not you personally anyway. Whereas this lot…” He waved a hand at a passing tiger and a couple of voles scampering by.

“Morning.” I nodded to them. “How’s it going?”

“Don’t talk to them from now on.” The old guy muttered giving them a smile and a wave. “If you are going to be top-dog its inappropriate to mingle with the lesser forms, ‘less you’re going to kill them of course.

He’d lost me a bit with the terminology so I just nodded. You can’t afford to piss people off here until you know exactly where they sit in the scheme of things. Especially when it’s their scheme. We got back to discussing my date. I wanted to play it by ear but he obviously thought I needed the benefit of his wisdom.

“You seem like a charming enough bloke so I’m not too concerned about initial impressions. Just keep it to small talk and don’t forget your manners; hang her coat up for her, that sort of thing.”

“What’s a coat?”

“Forget I mentioned it. That all comes later anyway.”

“All what comes later?”

“Coats…and things coat-like. Don’t worry, you’ll recognise it when it happens.”

I nodded sagely, not wanting to look a prat. God knows what he was on about.

“The thing is though, and don’t take offence at what I’m going to say, but you haven’t actually, I mean you know…”


“Done it, with a… another you, so to speak.”

“What are you implying?” I didn’t like the way this was going.

“I’m not implying anything. I’m saying you’re a virgin. I didn’t want to be so blunt but facts must be faced.”

“That’s personal, how the hell do you know?” I replied. “What’s a virgin?”

“It’s what you are, and I know because right at the moment there is only you. So unless you’ve been fiddling with yourself in the bushes while my back’s been turned…”

He gave me an old fashioned look, then relented with a sigh. “No, I suppose you haven’t even done that. This is going to be hard work. I’ll need a little something to get things going: mood music, dim the lights - although I haven’t really tried that yet, only had them put in six days ago - maybe one of my fruit cocktails? Leave it to me anyway; I’ll get something sorted then the rest’s up to you, lover boy.”

“I’m sorry?”

He rolled his eyes. “Just give her your best shot.”

“How will I recognise her?” I asked. “What’s her name?”

“When are you seeing her?”

“This evening. You set it up, remember?”

“Yeah-yeah. Err… how about Eve then, how does that sound?”


“Eve it is then. And don’t be late. Oh and there’s something I need from you first, won’t take long.”

I shrugged. “Whatever, I’ve nothing else on this afternoon. What do you want?”

“One of your ribs. Sorry, don’t worry you‘ve got loads more.”

“Take it.” I replied, not fussed. “Got any magazines while I’m waiting?”


We were meant to be meeting by the tree in that big garden. Now ‘by the tree’ isn’t the most accurate of directions to follow when you’re already nervous. I must have tried about twenty by the time I caught her leaning against one looking bored and a bit pissed off. Not a good start to any romantic rendezvous.

I approached warily, hand outstretched. “Hi, how are you, Adam…”

“Eve…” She shook my hand, giving me a frosty look. “The agency said six o’clock, it’s now…” she looked over as the sun set behind the hills, “later.”

“I’m really sorry about that.” I replied smoothly, flashing what I hoped was a winning smile. “Traffic…”

“What traffic?”

“Herd of triceratops, took ages to pass. You know what they can be like.”

She nodded and rolled her eyes; that seemed to break the ice. “So Adam, what do you do?”

“Oh, this and that. You?”

“Pretty much. I mean I’ve only been around for the last few hours but I’ve got some interesting career prospects lined up already: marketing, design, fashion…”

“Fashion? Sounds interesting.” I lied. I was getting bored already.

“Yeah, I’ve got really big plans…”

“So anyway, shall we order? How about a starter?” I reached up for some fruit. “Do you like apple?”

I handed it to her and she raised it to her mouth then paused. “This won’t get me tipsy on an empty stomach will it?”

“No,” I told her quickly, “not at all, quite harmless. Here, let me.” I gave it a large bite then passed it back to her. She bit too. We looked at each other.

Suddenly her eyes seemed shiny and unfocussed, the little black bits inside them not so little anymore. She glanced down at my body as I felt something stir. I looked down myself.

“Oh… wow, what the hell do they put in those things?”

“I know…!” She giggled and I saw now what the old guy meant about the rack thing. She placed both hands across her chest then immediately moved them down to between her legs. It looked like she was doing semaphore lessons.

Eve looked up at me again and this time her eyes were totally focussed. “Do you want to get out of here?”

“My place or yours?” I grinned.

“How about ‘ours’?” She replied, giving me a playful toss of her head.

“What about that apple?” The waiter hissed.

“Put it on the old guy’s tab,” I told him, “he’ll understand.”

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