Commented on: The Midnight Scream
11:58 Oct 12, 2019
I love the detail in this! It has slight imagery here and there, and it forced me to feel every emotion she felt. Then at the end... that was an awful lot of gruesome and gory, but besides that, I enjoyed it.
Just a tip, maybe simmer it down on the last part? It's a bit awful to end that the screams were coming from the brother who was murdering another, and that the siblings are just psycho killers.