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Some minor grammar errors. I like that the plot gets gradually tense as the story progresses. Could easily relate to your character. Nicely done.
A few minor grammar errors. Nice pacing. Liked the analogy of the character and her flowers. well done!
bianca, i'm always open to corrective criticism, so thanks for that. it's one of the best ways to improve. that and, of course, to keep on writing. ;-)
cecee, I'm glad you liked the story. cheers!
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