Commented on: Wishes Do Come True
22:30 Nov 27, 2019
Very clever way to use the prompt. I think perhaps varying the sentence openers may help break it up a bit and keep it from getting dry for the reader. For instance, in the second to last paragraph, almost everything starts with either she, her, or the, and the statements could be a little monotonous.
However, I really like the idea and the horror Carrie feels when her wish comes true. :)