Commented on: The Code Talker
16:14 Mar 20, 2020
That was a great story. Very gripping and exciting, well-paced. It had the feeling of a "based on a true story" work. I especially like the way you build tension in with the narrator's voice. I'm pretty sure it's just a formatting error on the page, but some of the text was disordered. No detraction from you writing, but it was a little distracting. All in all, excellent work. Thank you for sharing.