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I like the opening and the repetition of the tap, tap, tap, which seems to help the reader get into Elijah's head. The plot is also interesting.
Let me know if you'd like a more in depth critique.
You got my attention with the opening! The sound of rustling made me wonder if Denver was asleep -- or at least in bed -- when the call came in. Let me know if you'd like any more feedback/critique.
Thanks, Breanna. I appreciate your comments and it's fine if you want to add anything else.
Congratulations! Nicely done.
You must have been a retail worker at some point too! Nice job.
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